A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: Invincible with a Supercomputer

It's so well-written and beautiful. We happened to have suspended the update of "The Legend of a Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality" (it's been updated) and have no other novels to read. Occasionally I found a good book. Bravo, author. Come on.

Why is the rating so low? So far, the writing is quite good. There is still some control over the details of the characters and psychological descriptions. I haven't seen the bad points until now. The Tomato rating system is incomprehensible. There are also some 9.5-9.7 That are difficult to watch and completely inseparable. Some 6.0-7.5 Are actually well written, but most of them will die suddenly. Judging from the descriptions of the authors of several books, there are few people who reward books at this stage. Not counting platform incentives, a day's meal or a pack of cigarettes may not be enough. Mortals are currently so popular, but there are very few people writing fan fiction. Except for the few books about ideas, the level of other books is not as good as the author's, which is difficult to understand.

Originally I just clicked on it to take a look, but I didn't expect that the author's writing style was surprisingly good. The overall atmosphere of the novel actually has a lot of similarities with the story of a mortal cultivating immortality. It is definitely a good read in 🍅, please read it and cherish it!

I don't know why the score is so low. I think it's okay. I'll give it a high score.

Please support me. Not many people on Tomato can read the biographies of mortals cultivating immortality. But in comparison, at least this is written by a real person, and it's okay 👍

This is a rare piece of writing among ordinary people, please read it and cherish it.

The writing is very good and there are no big logical problems. I started to follow up as I read it. The relationship with the characters in Mortal is also very gentle and delicate. Although the protagonist has undergone drastic changes, his nature is very kind and kind, and the relationship with Zi Ling is also very warm.

I finally came across a mortal fanfic written by someone, and it's also about the heroine Song Yu

I haven't seen much of it yet, I'll tell you later. The logic is quite clear so far, so give the author a big thumbs up!

The protagonist's mind is wide open and there's a lot to be done!