Heroine: a Beautiful Boy from the Countryside of Tokyo

The plot is okay, but the repetition of words is a bit high, handsome and cute, handsome and cute

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In this way, as a female novel, there are no shortcomings, but the male protagonist has completely integrated into this kind of life and has become a local. Also, the pace is slow. Sometimes he has to watch me go to bed, which is too slow. But the author is good. It has been two months since the first seven weeks of the novel. He has fulfilled his promise and returned to life without running away. I laughed angrily, recorded Shi Ge for a month or two, and came back to life again

Not bad, not bad. After reading so many heroine books, this one turned out to be the most comfortable. At least the male protagonist is not obscene. He lets himself go in the world of heroines. His personality changes are more conservative and the pace is quite comfortable. To be honest, I still like the male protagonist in this book compared to Prison Moon. At least it looks comfortable. But it is a pity that the pace is slow. , The price is that there is no climax, it is too gentle, it would be better if we can find some explosive points, but unfortunately the male protagonist's character is too reasonable, at least there is no breakthrough from his side. At present, I feel that if the male protagonist can find his own Bai Yueguang when he is in high school, and then detonate a series of people around him, it will be cool to think about it.

There is nothing wrong with giving it four stars. The author's vocabulary is a bit lacking and his writing is relatively plain, but it is within the acceptable range. The setting is that the protagonist is a shota, a female protagonist (if you want to understand it as a sex-changed version of the Lolita protagonist's harem Shura field, that's not a big problem). The most criticized thing about this book is the height of the protagonist (about 1.5 Meters is not short) and the fact that the protagonist is Japanese (this kind of person is generally diagnosed as not having eyes, and the title of the book has the word "Tokyo" written on it, and even calling it this is a bit... A beauty that has not grown up) This kind of book is meant for a special audience (the protagonist's mother-in-law or simply likes the plot of the weak protagonist being fucked). Because it is published on Tomato, I dare not write too much about the sesame part, which is too clear-cut. Then there is the setting... Value acquisition part. I just think that this thing will be easy to obtain in the later stage. In addition, the effect of a little charm is so incredible now, so it doesn't matter. In terms of creativity (within the category of female novels), this book is a little ingenious, but still looks a bit bland. The setting of a male protagonist who has become the center of attention in a world of superpower porn comics is still very novel. In terms of writing style and logic, there are obviously many ways to deal with the black energy in Chapter 44, but the writing is weird (). After the author expanded the vocabulary later, the look and feel became much more comfortable, but he couldn't replace some words with cute, handsome, etc. Now it seems that the author's vocabulary is really small and a bit pitiful. Sesame Tamado, if it doesn't work, just give me a love line!

It's a good boy-girl story, but one thing I'm not happy with is that I've read over 100 of them now and I haven't finished them yet.

The plot is reasonable and the writing is fluent. It is the top food for female characters in Tomato.

OKK, it's a pretty good book Liu Bei [Blowing Kiss]

Although, is the male protagonist a little short? It's best not to write too short.

It's good-looking, but ccb is too slow. I haven't had ccb for so long. The protagonists of other authors have now been criticized.

The system is a little poisonous spot. There are superpowers in the book. People with superpowers can eat each other and absorb power. The protagonist's second sister's superpower is to stop time. The relative of the protagonist's aunt who adopted the protagonist is also a superpower, but is unfaithful to the protagonist. Then the protagonist asks his second sister to devour this relative. The system directly prevents the protagonist's second sister from becoming stronger, and then allows the power to escape. Apart from this, other places are pretty good

The first time I saw this book, I thought the picture was a snow girl [face covering]

Can you add more charm? Has it always been 8? I feel like 8 is just like that. Let's add some more. It'll be almost 9. [Smile] The protagonist is still too innocent and boring. Is he really a man? [Smile]

Very good, very excellent. Keep up the good work.

Haokan, I like this type of male protagonist.

Good looking good good looking good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good Look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good [Blow a kiss]

I like this kind of setting where the main character is a heartthrob with stunning looks. But the plot develops too slowly. I haven't waited for the main character to go to school after watching it for so long. Then it ended badly. Haha, I still couldn't wait until the protagonist went to school.

Very interesting and original I am familiar with this author routine: first write the first point of view, then the second point of view, and finally the third point of view. Then push the plot forward, and then add favorability +1, +1, repeat three times...

Um, I just saw Chapter 7, The Qingshui Family Comes Out, and I couldn't help but ask, author, do you also read Asaka's book? [Laughing evilly] I've read a lot of stories about female heroes who are forced to do so from the beginning, and suddenly I'm a little uncomfortable with this kind of thing [face covering] emm, the pace is a bit slow, but it's quite interesting.

I feel like it's a big improvement compared to the previous version of Sword Fairy in White. That early version was pretty good. I hope this one won't be unfinished. This male protagonist is much more powerful than the previous one. He won't be taken advantage of. The author's writing has improved a lot and it doesn't feel awkward like the previous one.

I will follow it every day. Hope to update daily. By the way, don't be like this. Try to finish it with more than 300 chapters.

For me, who has played Summer and Winter Rhapsody, I feel that the plots are very similar. [Laugh]

Pure, so pure, 99% of male videos are female, a rare thing [laughing evilly]

It can be considered a masterpiece. It's not bad.

It's also very pretty [laughs crookedly]

It's ok and very representative

Fat, just want to watch go to school [laughs]

The score shouldn't be so low, it has to be at least 8.0.

After watching part of it, I felt like I was treating pig's feet like a man's mother.

When should you write about the protagonist's rebellious phase and then punish the protagonist?