Collection of Short Stories Criticizing Yandere 2

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Every story in this book and the previous one can give me an emotional impact that makes me cry. The love in the book is pure and full, making me feel the unparalleled warmth, longing and yearning in this world. I really appreciate the author's creation [crying]

It is recommended to read the author's first collection [Flying Kisses] first. Lalan's level is always online. The writing style, prose and rhythm are very good. It is very comfortable to read. The plot may have some shortcomings due to its short story. It should be noted that the author's understanding of yandere is broad, and to put it bluntly, he favors girls. After all, you would soon get tired of reading the dark room, wouldn't you (laughs), I hope the author will continue to work hard in the new book [Blow kiss]

I have finished reading the author's first collection of yandere, but I didn't expect that the second one will be released so soon. It is still very good. Five points is not the limit of this book, but the limit of the scoring mechanism. It supports support and support. It is well written and has nothing to say [shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy]

Lalan's new book is quite different from the previous one. Overall, I like both. The previous book mainly describes the formation of a yandere and the final climax (suppressed explosion). Compared with the previous book, this book is better written. Each article has a more in-depth discussion on a theme. However, I don't think the heroine of this book has feelings for the protagonist. Although it is not consistent with the title of the book, it is undeniable that I still like the book you wrote.

Compared with the previous one, it is a little more subtle and the writing style is better. However, because it is a short story, some details are still not enough. The story is more exciting, changing from narrative to lyrical. Second, the three stories are well written, but they give people the feeling of ending abruptly. In the first three stories, the yandere attributes were not shown very much. The fourth story has a good plot and is yandere-y. It is the best short story I have read in recent times [Adoration] Looking forward to more works from the author! ! !

No matter what happens, remember that your heart is full of fairy tales

Still wearing a yandere skin to write about pure love, but it's really good-looking

The writing is very good, but it doesn't sound squeamish anymore.

The best short stories on Tomato, especially 1 and 3. The story background is novel, but it has nothing to do with yandere. I would like to give the author a big reminder. In fact, this book can even break into female channels, but adding a yandere theme has narrowed the audience.

The stories of pure lovers one after another are gentle and clean. There is no bloody entanglement, only the true feelings of the flowing water. The emotions are delicate and restrained, and the trivial details of daily life are full of tenderness and redemption. It makes people's hearts soften. It is a pure love that is very healing and depressing. After reading it, I felt a little empty.

Needless to say, I really like the author's wife's writing style

How good it is, how good it is, how good it is, how good it is

Full marks to my lazy wife (hee)

It's really nice to play games and read the previous article [laughs]

The supernatural novel pro that was delayed by the yandere romance novel [Read carefully]

It's not a yandere, it should be pure love. The writing style is smooth and natural, and the literary talent is quite good. It's fair.

Please keep it up, author.

I read more than 600 pages without realizing it, but I still want to ask - where is the yandere?

The writing is really great. I originally read it for the yandere, but I was stunned by the first article. This is the first time I have seen the author's description of love. The author has brought me such a perfect novel, which is really inspiring.

The writing is very good and the story background is very exciting and innovative.

The storyline is compact but logical, very interesting [like] [blowing kiss]

Very nice, come on

Still maintaining a high level?

It's very beautiful, everyone who has seen it said it is good.

The author's writing style is good [like]

Why do you want to hit me hard at the beginning? It's really sad [crying] [smile]

It looks good, but why is it so short? [Crying]

I wanted to stay up all night chasing the article, but the author stopped thinking about it (too little [crying]) I didn't understand the penultimate story a bit (I felt so uncomfortable [crazy] [crazy] when I read it at the end)

Delicious😋, it feels like it has entered a new realm After watching all of Part 1, 2 and 3, I still feel that Part 2 is the best. Part 1 only had the shock of the pseudo-human part, but I could feel it twice in Part 2. Although Part 3 also tried to explore some serious issues, it didn't have the delicate senses of Part 2.