Across the Delta: Become a BOSS Unit

The best Delta fan novel on Tomato, the writing quality, rhythm control, character creation, and plot direction can be said to be written with a serious drama in mind. Although it is a time-travel novel, the time-traveled character Said himself is also thinking. The two share a body. It is very interesting to watch the interaction between the protagonist and Said, which is one of the highlights. The protagonist's wisdom and Said's combat power complement each other perfectly, and they work together to change the situation, which is another highlight of this book. The protagonist's IQ is online, he doesn't show off, he doesn't do anything for others, and he can help the prisoner at any time. Lao Sai is also a wise man who understands current affairs and can listen to the protagonist's words. Although it is not stated clearly in the text, it can be seen that Said also has some dependence on the protagonist. The most important thing is that Said's character design is very well grasped and his personality is full of charm. Fans of Lao Sai are highly recommended to watch it. The timeline of the novel happens to be when Said's sphere of influence begins from scratch and captures the dam. The possible development of subsequent plots related to farming, military expansion and even political struggles are all exciting. I feel that this book can be read as "The Legend of Ashara: The Rise of Said", aka. "I am the intracranial strategist/built-in plug-in who travels to Lao Sai and shares his body". [Laughing evilly] As the plot unfolds, I must comment on another highlight of this book: the author's portrayal of the characters is really perfect. Except for Said, one of the protagonists, the other characters are all very flesh-and-blood. There are few protagonists in many online books who can impress me deeply. In this book, I really felt that the charisma of the supporting characters made me deeply empathize with him. This is not the kind of thing where I just give a little hint and it's over, but I can see the growth lines and shining points of other characters, and I can see other people who have profoundly changed around the protagonist. Who knows this kind of coolness! And, moreover, I must state my personal views on the "players", that is, the characters of other time travellers. I was worried that such a setting would make the plot confusing and make the reading experience worse. I think this is also the subconscious reaction of many people, and even a little bit resistant. But now I find that there is none at all. On the contrary, the description of other "players" adds a lot of thickness and tension to the plot, and the richness is greatly improved. The author's writing skills are very good, keeping the main plot firmly following the protagonist, but providing a lot of diverse plots and different character perspectives.

Novel subject matter, unique plot, but I still have to say Old Seres went out for a wander🤓Leaving the raven to guard the empty house😡The treasury at the bottom of the dam was emptied😋The two of them regretted it😈The door of the treasury😍There was no electricity😡Open the flood valve🧐Generate electricity🤓Grrrrrrrr🤣Open the manhole cover and drill into the black hole😒It looks like a ghost Ditch big rat 🤣gti smart 👍gti greedy 👎 Greedy people are smart 🤓 Smart people are greedy 😍 Gong Xi Fa Cai 😎 Gaga ga 🤣 Gong Xi Fa Cai 😎 Uh uh uh 🤔 Falling into the trap 😈 Falling into the trap 😈

It's a pure plot with two male protagonists, both of whom work together to achieve a common goal. The setting of two souls in one body is very interesting! Said is the strongest individual soldier, and the protagonist is his external brain. Asara is definitely getting better and better. For Asara!

It's pretty good-looking, and the character design is well controlled so far. There's no such thing as a sudden illness that causes the small head to control the big head. I'm looking forward to the subsequent plot development of Lao Sai and his Socrates (bushi's built-in brain).

It's very good-looking, and makes people want to follow it. Said's personality and behavior are consistent, and the emotions that Havker should have are also consistent. It is very restored. There is only one poisonous point at present, which is the moment when he possessed Said. When he received the memory, he was so calm and normal. It didn't feel like it was the first time he came to the world of Delta. The world is not like traveling through the world for the first time, but more like having experienced it countless times calmly, so it is a bit poisonous, but it doesn't matter. The memory is not profound, but in the overall perfect plot, a little poison will make people a little impressed. In short, in a word, it is not poisonous, the writing is good, the plot is good, and the characters are restored Great, this novel is so good that I can't describe it in my words. In short, it's very good-looking and I'm looking forward to it. I'm willing to spend enough time to see this novel finished.

Too hit! ! ! There is no CP, but it is a two-parter. The ups and downs of the plot are particularly interesting, especially when the two of them grow up with each other for a better tomorrow for Sarah. Master Said and the protagonist are simply very good partners. There are not many updates yet, but the author said he would try to produce high-quality articles and it didn't take long to write. It has already exceeded 7.0 Points. If this continues, I guess it will be 200. The chapter has almost reached a 9.0 Rating. This Delta fanfic is really good-looking and well-written with emotions. It's not a bad investment. You might be interested in it in just 30 minutes. And I just clicked on it casually, thinking that I was short of books and took a few glances. I didn't expect that the more I read, the more I read. I didn't dare to look down in the middle, for fear that I would lose it.

It's a tie, it's very good, and outsiders can watch it as an original. The front is a little bit poisonous. The supporting character time traveler is exposed to the enemy for some reasons that are used badly in movies or novels. The protagonist and Said get along very well. It is a rare novel in which the two-soul traveler does not absorb the original owner. I hope there won't be any plots in the future where the protagonist emerges from Said's body and creates another body or the small head controls the big head.

Great, new book, beautiful! ! ! Finally there is another novel with a plot that is not like "Delta comes to live broadcast and slaps you in the face"!

The writing is good from the beginning, the plot is okay, and the IQ is online, but it's just too little and not enough to watch. Originally, I didn't have 1 million words, so I wouldn't have clicked in to read it, but I was really short of books. Generally speaking, it is considered food and grass. Update soon! None of the donkeys in the production team dared to rest like this.

Apart from anything else, this book was written with thought. Although some parts were blurred for smooth reading, most of them are logical and content. Anyway, I enjoyed reading it. Although the protagonist has traveled through time, he is brave and resourceful. It is not stupid and comfortable to watch. The way the two protagonists get along is also very comfortable to watch. Anyway, it seems to be relatively harmless at the moment. It has a sense of family and country, deep brotherhood, and even does some cosplay. Lao Sai changed the operators. In summary, the plot is smooth and moderate, not overly boring, and it is very comfortable to read. Shuhuang recommends reading it.

The biggest surprise in this book now is whether it can beat Sheng He. Don't look at the bookshelf one day and the book disappears [face covering] The plot is now at the right pace and the character creation has not fallen behind. The protagonist setting is to install a counselor's brain on the peerless general. The setting of two souls in one body will not cause the character creation to be unbalanced because of deliberately highlighting one side. You can see Said's progress and changes, and you can also see that the knife is slowly integrating into the whole Asara and starting to pave the way for it. The other supporting characters are also flesh-and-blood, and the conflict between GTI Hafk and Asara is more than superficial. It is very interesting to read. Even if you are a novice who has never played the game, it is a rare and good book to read as an original.

The action description in this book is really good, especially when it tells about the time when Mi Douzi and Ultraman Zero gave birth to Hongjun, Zero stir-fried yogurt, taro and eggplant, and Sun Wukong obstructed her in every possible way. Cero's right-hand men Hakimi and Jay Chou used their noise to purify the Monkey King. Causing Sun Wukong to lose his mind. Transcend the mighty insects. Reincarnated as Nuwa. One of the powerful Asura tribe created by Nuwa was named Xue Baochai. Xue Baochai and Vishdel W of Arknights teamed up to defeat Mixue Bingcheng on the space bridge. Mixue Bingcheng made a cup of tea and attracted the anger of the Eastern Defense Tower. The Asura tribe was wiped out with one move, which was also a lot of knives. Look at my name.

The writing is very good, and I can feel that the author definitely put his brains and thought into it when writing it👍👍 Some highlights of this book's features: There are many time-travelers and more than just one protagonist, but the time-travelers in this book are obviously part of the main line, and currently they are different from other common multi-traveler settings, and they look quite fresh. The protagonist and Said are of one mind, communication is verbal, and body rights are shared. A cultural man and a god of war give full play to the effect of 1+1>2, and there is no particularly fierce friction between the two parties. The male and female supporting characters are all portrayed normally, each with their own personality characteristics (there is no mysterious pornographic content description with unclear meaning and pornography for the sake of pornography). The character Yuanzhou does not feel OOC, and it seems that there is no CP at present. The author is very good at and likes to write the strategy part. He writes it in detail and is somewhat logical. You can read it with your mind👌🏻

This book is very good and considers many aspects without too many flaws, especially the characterization. Although the protagonist has traveled through time, he still has not forgotten that he and the players are essentially the same kind of people. The plot feels very familiar to the plot of Delta, and there is nothing to be ridiculous about. The protagonist is equivalent to Rause's built-in super brain. He is both literary and military, and he coordinates very well. I can't wait to see the real main GTI operators appear later. It's very nice. I highly recommend watching the plot as it doesn't drag on. I finished it in one go. I hope the update will be faster.

Let me start with the conclusion: it looks good and is recommended. It can be seen that the plot has been carefully polished, and the details are sparse and the rhythm is well controlled. However, some details may not be handled well enough, resulting in a slightly strange look. It's not a fun novel, so in the first twenty or so chapters the protagonist is adapting and growing up, and his performance is immature. You can read it quickly or selectively skip it depending on your personal decision. Later, I gradually began to feel the different personality charms of the protagonist and Said, and they also became the same old self and the old self. The protagonist Lao Sai usually fights with his left and right brains. When something happens, the protagonist uses his super wisdom based on Lao Sai's experience. After further analysis and optimization, he tells Lao Sai how to use his super power. The two complement each other and each has its own highlights. The supporting characters are in-depth and have distinct personalities, and the plot length is reasonably arranged. The author is also good at describing the growth and transformation of small characters, and can write their own unique highlights to drive readers' emotions. For me, Tariq and Old K have the most impact. Overall, the logic is smooth and the narrative rhythm is smooth. It can be regarded as a masterpiece on this platform. It is worth reading at the moment. I will also make further changes in the book review based on the follow-up situation. The author has great potential. Come on!

It's so well written, I give it high marks for writing. Although they are fans, the author obviously has his own outline plan and story rhythm. Even if I have never been exposed to Delta or played the game, it does not affect my reading. Anyone who enjoys watching the latest chapter from the first chapter should not miss it. In addition to the design of the storyline, the characters are also very well written. First of all, the main characters. The protagonist and the original Delta character Said are both very well written. The cooperation between the super brain and the super powerful Akatsuki is really wonderful. Not to mention the infrastructure is also an exciting part. The development of the dam, the revolution and construction of the country, etc., Watching the region develop step by step, are very exciting, and hope that the future will develop better and better.

A masterpiece, needless to say He is not a traditional possessed intervention system. He is more like an audience guide, connecting small things together into a big event. The plots are interlocking and the plot rises in waves. The emotions in it are very delicate. In just a few words, the inner details of the characters are outlined, making us not only an audience, but also a role in it. The author borrowed the history of our country's revolutionary period and integrated it with the background of the game, making us seem to be able to see "ourselves" back then in the book. Finally, I hope the author can do better and better, bring us a better complex, and also bring a better future to the Assala people in the story.

The description of human nature, the stories between brothers and each Assala soldier are worth savoring. Said's bravery and the "wisdom of the protagonist" (to be precise, there is no protagonist, everyone can be the protagonist) to build a better Assala. After a certain thing happens, their changes are the highlight of this book.

What a great book. It's rare to come across a good fanfic. The protagonist is like an external brain, and Sai is like a humanoid weapon. The two are combined into one, capable of both literature and martial arts. Before reading, let me tell the readers: the players in the book will die and will not be resurrected. Unlike the game, the players here are all from time travel. Then the protagonist and Lao Sai are unconscious and cannot communicate in their heads. They have to speak, which is actually okay. It gives the protagonist space and Lao Sai cannot hear it when the system sound comes on. As for a person talking to himself, the author pays attention to this aspect. He either looks for a place where no one is around or does it quietly. Then there is the language barrier between the player and Assala. There is a scene at the beginning where the protagonist takes the player and the locals of Assala to escape. How can the player understand what Lao Sai is saying? You will understand that Lao Sai speaks to the local refugees in Assala language, and the protagonist speaks to the player again in Chinese. Fortunately, it is not considered poisonous. Later, Lao Sai takes over the dam, so there is no emergency situation with the player. There are also a few players who follow you at the beginning. Unlike other clichéd online game stories, there are not many scenes later on, and there are even some endings. Well, they are dead. No spoilers for the specifics. Anyway, it is not like "I must protect the people around me" or "Follow the protagonist and you won't die." They will die, and there is a little knife. No spoilers, just read it later. Finally, I would like to say to the author: I don't ask for explosive updates or speed. You write slowly. It doesn't matter if you are tired and take a two-day break. I just ask that you don't interrupt the updates and don't end it. There are not many good-looking fics like this. It needs to be finished! ! ! (One day to tie the knot, damn it, is not enough at all...)

The writing is very good. It is not a traditional formulaic novel. The setting of one body and two souls is very interesting. Both sides are each other's golden fingers. Finished boasting, uncle! Update it quickly! ! ! Too awesome to be here

To be honest, it's not like a book you can read on Tomato. Is this something I can read for free? [Laughs] This is not a regular time-travel novel, you don't need to lose your mind to read it, the plot is well grasped, the characters are fully developed, and the understanding of the characters is more than superficial, so there is no character collapse. It borrows many references but is not obtrusive. For me, the most exciting thing to watch is the part about revisiting modern history. The group portraits are also well controlled. For example, the image of a small character who is less than ten chapters long can be established, and it can also arouse the resonance of readers. If you ask me, this writing style can be regarded as an original novel (^~^)👍

There are no poisonous points, and the writing style is realistic. The main focus is on the characters, whether it is Said or everyone under him, including the masses. I feel that it is very good in the fanfic.

It's a pity. I thought it was a story of traveling with the system, relying on the system's ability to lead the plot of dominating the world behind the scenes (developing power through the system's ability + improving the character's strength). When I saw the players, I thought it would be similar to "The Super Mechanic", cheating + using the players to act as second-guessers to do things and become bigger and stronger. As a result, I didn't see it in the early stage, and even the protagonist was a bit "waste", and the score was quite high, but to be honest In other words, the score of 9 points is entirely due to the popularity of the game Delta Operation. This subject is a very good subject, game + system + development of behind-the-scenes forces + intrusion of player groups + military wars & elite raids. If you have some understanding of world crises and can refer to narratives (such as the US blitzkrieg incident in Venezuela), this subject is 100% explosive. Regarding the handling of critical incidents, you can refer to "Crisis Management Game"

After watching it for so long, it's time to leave a comment As a power development story, the plot is reasonable, all development trajectories are traceable, the game with Lei Si is not poisonous in the whole process, and the supporting characters and subordinates in the article are also portrayed with flesh and blood. The author's writing style is really good. The plot is also interspersed with daily life in the main line. Seeing it now is like witnessing the complete development and growth of a force. The dialogue between "Socrates" and Lao Sai, everyone's moments at the dam, and the process of power development are the three parts that I personally like.

Nice. And what I want to say has been said before. Forget it, let's describe it. I don't play Delta, and I don't read much about it. I've seen a few Delta fan books before, read them, and quit because they didn't feel good, but this one really stood out to me. Very interactive and cat sculptures. The writing style is very comfortable, and there are some small fun, Socrates and so on. The kind that is suitable for both men and women. There is no CP tendency, and there is no heroine, it's just the reckless man and his built-in brain ()

One body, two souls, the protagonist is in charge of diplomacy, construction, and Said is in charge of war. Although there are player elements, it does not affect the pure plot. Moreover, the characters in it are flesh and blood, not just flat characters. Even if you have never played the game, you can still understand it clearly. Not all players who travel through time are good or bad. For example, there will be some gangsters coming in, but there will also be some soldiers who will choose to fight against or join the protagonist. But it is a bit too idealistic. The predictions for the protagonist on the battlefield are often the same as what happens on the real battlefield. However, there are many variables in reality, but fortunately this does not affect the viewing. Later, the protagonist starts to engage in quasi-socialism and land reform. These things appear a bit abruptly in the novel. Moreover, the protagonist changed from the early battle to reform or something, and the perspective began to scatter, and there was no sense of the beginning. It changed directly from a battle story to a reform story.

This word is so popular that I have to give it a thumbs up. The writing is very good. Although it is a male protagonist, it is more of a group portrait, not one that boasts about the protagonist turning the tide. Everyone, including the little characters, has their own core. There is no such thing as a brainless villain or a domineering slap in the face plot. As a girl, I watched it with gusto, and it felt like I was reading a history book. It's just too sharp, especially when I clearly understand that this sword is just an insignificant microcosm of that era and the background of the game. I read it from the beginning in one go, hoping to see millions of updates when I wake up! Simon!

After reading so many comments, there's not much else to say, and saying more would be a spoiler. The author's description of the characters' personalities is very delicate. Although it may be a blank description, it is very powerful. It's definitely the pinnacle of work, I love it so much. Still decided to make a call.

This book is really good, especially the story about Lu Bu fighting for Diao Chan and Sun Wukong. The battle lasted for hundreds of rounds, but Xue Baochai was really too strong. If it weren't for the Nuo Shou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six-time strafing would have killed him. In addition, I prefer Zhuge Liang's words to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man is so proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, the plot of this book is interesting, the system is clear, there are many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are like being there, and the characters are well described.

This is the first time I read a fan novel without knowing anything about the original work. I have to say it is very good. Halfway through, I even went to learn more about the game and searched for an introduction to the worldview... It's really good to read. To be honest, I feel like this book doesn't look like a game fan at all. I feel that the author has really written another possibility of this world, another development that is different from the main line of the game. The writing is smooth and eloquent, like watching a documentary, like reading a history book, like the author taking readers to experience the history of the confrontation between Asara and Hafk. The author added the setting of the Fourth Natural Disaster, but the integration is very appropriate, the plot connection is also very smooth, the rhythm is also well controlled, there are lows and highs, there are laughs and knives, it feels like Ashara is really brought to life. I like this book very much. I think the author's interpretation of some characters is even more vivid than the main plot of the game. After all, there are many characters, and it is difficult for the game to bring every character to life, but this book does it. I support the author very much. I read 400 chapters in one go and wrote a book review. Keep up the good work, author!