Lingwu**

The author is a newbie, writing a novel for the first time in 🍅. If you guys think there is anything wrong, you can leave a message below this comment. I hope brothers will point out if there is anything wrong, and the author will definitely adopt reasonable and valuable suggestions. This book is the author's first book, so even if the results are not good, I will try my best to finish it. This is also a process of progress and learning. I hope brothers will be more tolerant and give you more guidance. Finally, I hope that every reader who reads this book will be happy every day. Thank you for reading my work. [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

The plot writing is okay, but it seems that not many people will read it. I hope the author can stick to it. The setting should be based on Tao Xian. 🍅There are very few books with this kind of setting. I found many similar books in 🍅, and the one you wrote is quite suitable. However, there are only dozens of chapters and the doctrine is not clearly explained. I can't jump to conclusions yet. If I can persist in writing, I should have some achievements.

The setting is good, especially the equipment that kills people and explodes, and there is also development in the later stage. It is not common to build a family simply by being famous. It is good at the beginning. How about changing the last name to Yan at the beginning? [Snickering][Smirking][Smirking] It will be very handsome, and then we still need to write the setting of this world well.

This is a very good book, a group portrait of a family cultivating immortality. The content is relatively solid, the writing style is not bad, the plot is well advanced, and the characters can stand up in all aspects. I hope the author will continue to write well! It's very good that the equipment of the Qi Refining Realm monks can be exploded after death. I read it as a meal replacement for Xuan Jian. It's the name of the technique and the name of the spiritual object. It would be better if the name is written in a nice way.

Natsume, you died so miserably. Even if you haven't finished the novel, your wife ran away with him.

I think it looks pretty [attention] [love]

I think it's well written. Please support it.

This book is a pretty good cultivation text on Tomato. I hope the author can continue writing. 5 Stars are easily swallowed up, so give 4 stars for encouragement!

The setting feels a bit like a mysterious novel, but the unhurried and unhurried plot is pretty good on Tomato.

It's very good, the rhythm is reasonable, the characters are well drawn, and the IQ is online, but it's too painful to follow the update. Why am I watching it now...