In Year 37 of Konoha, Yan’s parents shed their last drop of blood for the village.
In Year 47, after returning from the battlefield, he was branded with the number “Test Subject 682” and buried in the darkest laboratory of Root.
Good. Very good.
Since that naturally evil old bastard Danzo insists on driving the person most deserving of the Will of Fire into turning against the whole village, then he can’t blame Yan for calling in some help and flipping the table:
Nagato Uzumaki, can you help me take down Danzo? Sure. I’ll heal your injuries, bring your best friend back to life, and help you kill Danzo.
Yakushi Nonō, can you help me take down Danzo? Sure. I’ll save your life, protect Kabuto Yakushi, and have you keep a close watch on Root.
Uchiha Clan, you don’t get along with Danzo either? Fine. I’ll leak a little information, fan the flames, and give you the evidence. You can swing the blades yourselves.
The phantom forms of twelve talismans gradually lit up in Yan’s eyes. Behind him stood the entire shinobi world, everyone he had ever borrowed strength from.
“Don’t get the wrong idea, you old dog Danzo. I’ve got no grudge against Konoha.”
Flames split the shadows, illuminating the hatred frozen in his eyes.
“I’m just here to give you back… everything you did to me, one thing at a time.”
Revenge doesn’t need a noble cause. It only needs enough patience, and more people who want to see you fall.
Now they’re all behind me. And you’re in the fire.
The writing is very good. The protagonist is not invincible at the beginning but it is guaranteed that the protagonist will not die. It made me see another way of writing Naruto fan fiction.
It's pretty good. The tortured protagonist with brain problems is written very naturally and makes people feel immersed in it (for me, the strong sense of immersion depends on whether the protagonist is childish or awkward). This is much better than most books.
Talisman, Holy Lord, Dragon, No. 682. Isn't this Master 682, the Immortal Lizard?
The writing is very good, at least the author seems to be a normal person. Right
The quality of the work is definitely not worthy of five stars, but it looks okay. There are no obvious shortcomings, but there are no advantages. It is a bit imaginative. It is currently a 7.5 Work.
Very casual and well written
I just saw Cao Yin Village here, and I feel that if the author continues to write at this level, it will really be a rare good food or even fairy grass for Tomato. Come on, author!
The more I watch it, the more interesting it becomes. I like this kind of character.
111; Fang's share was too sudden
Okay, I discovered the rules. I'm looking for books with a score of 7 or below on Tomato.