I Have an Adventurer's Guide

It's a really good DND article. Unlike other books, when writing a traditional Western fantasy, you also need to add a grudge setting (directly turning the book into a pile). It's not like the quality that 🍅 should be in. If you put it next door, it's also one of the best quality authors in the West Fantasy Zone. Although Japanese-style Western fantasy is very popular (a strange smell), I still support traditional Western fantasy.

A very solid dnd novel. The author simply shows you the charm of swords, magic and adventure. I have read many romance novels that regard dnd adventure as the starting point. Suddenly I saw this and it was really touching. I finally found something to eat. This score won't really exceed 9 points, right? Apart from The Great Voyage, this is the second book that I have read since 7 o'clock.

I think it's a 9-point level. The story is eloquent and doesn't have the cool structure that is popular nowadays. I couldn't read it at first, but after reading it, I felt it was very epic. It reminded me of the style more than 10 or even 20 years ago. If others are writing plots, this book is really telling a story. Everyone's behavior has its own logic. Although the protagonist is covered with a system hook, the existence of this hook is not strong. It is only used to judge whether the other party is trustworthy and as a member of the evil god. He even took the initiative to keep a distance from the evil god. The second volume is almost over, and he has only learned one or two moves. It can be said that he has exercised restraint to the extreme. To be honest, this is the choice of most people in the real world. How can ordinary people be so smart to fight wits and courage with the evil god, and how can they have such incredible luck. The protagonist in the book is like an ordinary person in reality. He has to compromise in various situations and try to show off his tricks. At first, I felt a little frustrated and uncomfortable, but after reading it, it really feels real. In particular, many of the supporting characters are written with real heart and vividness. When you see their names, you can think of their personalities and facial expressions. In addition, the death of the half-elf is a bonus for me, because since the protagonist has become a member of the evil god, he and the half-elf harp alliance are naturally hostile, and there is no room for reconciliation. The author has done a lot of foreshadowing when writing the death of the half-elf. The logical progression of the plot is reasonable and reasonable, and the writing has a touch of regret. It also makes the image of the half-elf still adhering to his ideals at the end of his life more vivid. I can still recall how she persuaded the protagonist to join the harp. Of course, this can never happen, and the protagonist can never explain it to her. So this is a pity. This is actually how the realism of this book comes. A lot of lengthy detailed descriptions and dialogues consolidate the image of the character over and over again. In fact, I did not guess that the half-elf would die, because most books do not arrange for the main character to die, but I felt better after dying. In this way, the whole book is suspense. No one will guarantee that he will never die, and no one will stay with you forever. After the death of the half-elf, it is logical for the little mage to leave. And the story in the second volume is a new development, with new people and things

The content is solid and the book is "powerful". It's hard to imagine that it took me 2 hours to read more than 30 chapters, but I can only imagine how solid this book is. The author is creating a real adventure world, without mindless settings, but with details that enrich the entire world between the lines. On the impatient platform of Tomato, it is rare to find this type of book. Although the current rating is very low, I hope the author will work hard. Eat lobster every day I caught up with the latest chapter and my level is still online. I found that some people criticized the death of the half-elf in terms of the plot. I can't comment on whether it is good or bad, but it is reasonable in terms of the plot. This book is like a good dish made by a chef. Even if it doesn't suit your taste, if you are an experienced foodie, you will feel that the ingredients are solid, the cooking skills are superb, and you can feel the chef's intentions when you eat it. This is what this book is

Very good, very good, I highly recommend this book. Let me tell you, the author is just trying to fry fish with persimmons from abroad. His writing style has not failed from beginning to end. As soon as I saw a few pictures, I felt a sense of fantasy from the West, and those with better imagination already felt like I had traveled through time. If there is something about this book that I don't like at the moment, it might be the early part of becoming a sheriff in the city. At that time, I felt that the writing was tedious, that I had gone to the city to eat public food, and that it had lost the "adventure" flavor of the book's theme. But that's not to say that this content is not good. Looking at it from Lao Lei's perspective, I deeply agree with it, completely understand it, and even agree with it. However, the turmoil in the city in the second half gradually pushes the protagonist towards the climax of the second half of the plot. It is simply written so well! The interaction with the characters, everything they said and did, was like a grand picture unfolding in my mind. I really couldn't move my eyes away. I haven't been so hearty in a long time! At the end of this plot, there is a breakup with the ranger half-elf who has a good relationship with him, and a short story is used to introduce the half-elf's past and outline the previous clues. An imaginative world, a simple yet complex background story, and an ending destined to be tragic. Some readers in the comment area missed their old relationship and always looked forward to her resurrection, but I think it was her death that allowed the story and background to unfold so quickly and be so vivid and three-dimensional! Going on adventures in the Underdark, you will meet a group of partners, each with their own characteristics, sharp contrasts in personality and small conflicts, which makes the story more authentic! I won't reveal the specific storyline and partner endings here, but please calm down and enjoy this great work. (Actually, I feel a pity for the young pastor. The article contains my relatively more detailed personal reasoning and explanation. If you find it, you can read it. If you resonate with me, it will be my honor) It was this book that really raised my tolerance for Western fantasy novels, causing me to have a book shortage () I've been feeling itchy lately, and I want to wait until I save more before I can get enough of it. There should be more authors! Just a little, a little more!

A very pure sword and magic adventure, this book is truly unique on Tomato. It feels like returning to the Fantasy West 15 years ago. The mix of 5th edition rules and other games makes it feel fresh for those who are used to the 3rd edition. The characterization is also very delicate, and the plot is slow but not sloppy. The author handles this aspect very well. I personally think that the overall pattern of Western Fantasy is the collision and conflict between the gods and the world, ideas and behaviors, which is different from the traditional Chinese concept of people defeating heaven and replacing it. It is more about the pursuit of faith and liberation. This book describes this aspect very well.

Ah, this is the first time I've seen a protagonist in a DND novel who develops such a deep relationship with the mind flayer, and the writing is so awesome, damn. The characterization of the characters is very profound. Everyone who interacts with the protagonist is not simply a tool to promote the development of the plot. They have their own background and motivations, like a living person. The fighting scenes are also well written, the writing is very good, and the plot rhythm is also good. What? If you ask me what is the most difficult to understand in this article? Then I will say it generously... Polly! ! ! ! ! Little mage! ! ! Ah! ! I don't care! ! After returning to the ground this time! I want to see Lao Lei and the little mage have a vigorous love affair! ! ! !

The most poignant thing about this book is the protagonist's "impure kindness" - he does not talk about ideals like traditional protagonists, but enters the world of adventure with a pragmatic utilitarianism: when accepting a commission, he will first calculate the reward, when encountering danger, he will first assess the risk, and will even bargain with his companions to "share an extra 10% of the loot." But when he looked at the seriously injured little mage in the ruins, cursing "trouble", he took out the only holy water in his hand; while using evil magic, he destroyed the cult ritual. This contrast of "calculate interests first, then consider conscience" makes his kindness more real - it is not the heart of a Holy Mother who does not eat the fireworks of the world, but after weighing the pros and cons, he still chooses to stick to the bottom line. Utility makes him live longer, and kindness makes him go further. This kind of "justice with fireworks" resonates more with people than pure idealism.

This is the kind of sword and magic world I've been looking for, a good book that extends the setting of the world from the details of life instead of long sections of popular science, and doesn't involve too many systems and numerical values! I've only read Chapter 13 so far, but I didn't find it boring or draggy. I really enjoyed it, and it's my first time to leave a review.

This year's first Western fantasy book with feelings, the author's control of growth, emotions, and plot are completely unlike that of a newcomer. He is even inferior to most old writers. He is suspected of being an alien demon.

I was deeply attracted by this book and read it in one sitting A very good adventure novel. It is not a strange Chinese-style Western fantasy, but a real Western fantasy world full of swords and magic. It uses DND as the main background and stitches together some of the medieval Warhammer settings (there may be settings that I didn't see) The protagonist has an "evil sense of justice". He is decisive, brave, and always puts himself first, but at the same time conveys goodwill to the people around him. He has his own code of conduct and bottom line. He has a lovable personality and the setting of heavy armor, long sword and magic is really cool. The supporting characters are flesh-and-blood, and different races have their own language styles, which are very interesting. The little mage, half-elf, and Yankee in the first volume, the little gray dwarf in the second volume, and the three companions of the dragon-slaying team are all impressive. It's not too dense, but I think it's just right. I've witnessed the growth of the protagonist bit by bit. From a small town adventurer at the beginning to a dragon slayer who can compete with legends, Renato's adventure continues. Come on, author! It's really fun to watch! Write about five gold coins again!

The rhythm of the story is well laid out, and the descriptions of the characters are very vivid. Although it is not refreshing or intense, but from a personal taste, I like this kind of novel with detailed descriptions. Come on, author, I will come here every day to update!

This book is not like Tomato's. It's very playable at the starting point. The story is smooth, there are no harmful bugs, the protagonist's character is consistent in words and deeds, and the writing is logical. The author updates quickly and violently [Like][Like][Like] It's been 3 months since I wrote the dungeon. When will I change the map? [Face covering]

It is a rare and excellent Western fantasy work with clear logic, sophisticated writing, and online character IQ. There are no obvious poisonous points. The shortcoming is that the plot is a bit cliché and needs subsequent development. It has the potential to become a masterpiece.

The writing is very good, but the score is low, at least close to 9 points. Among the character attributes, one called "Determination" is not appropriate and should be changed to "Will." The plot is pretty good, not too bad. The writing is good, but there is just a little too much dialogue.

Baizhang feels pretty good after reading it. Characterization is okay. A trainable novice mage (who was stolen), a stabbed elf aunt (to be resurrected), a female thief who fished in troubled waters (to be online), a naughty dwarf (who is completing her oath), a foul-mouthed dark elf (to be trained), and a cunning mind-eater (who is generating bad ideas). The protagonist is the Chosen One (don't care where the power comes from), and it conforms to the concept of survival in another world (the premise is that you can take the mission) as long as you give enough experience (you have to come up and strike with a sword even if you are a god) The plot is quite good (in line with the plot of the novel). It's unexpected and reasonable, giving readers some room for imagination without causing any serious harm (at least it's normal) Suggestions: 1. Come up with a plot twist (come with some surprises) 2. The whole point (hell jokes will also work) 3. Two more chapters (not enough to read) There is still room for improvement in the upper limit of novels (from niche running groups to foreign persimmon recommendations). Post-reading evaluation needs to be added Update speed is a problem! Secondly, the author can open up a lot of knowledge and start with the warlock. Now, if the readers can write whatever they want, they will not go further. When the plot outline is permeated with undue bias, the road will take twists and turns. Even if the road is bright, the route will be tortuous. If the author's original intention is to make a pocket money job from the novel, then the upper limit of this novel is there. Unintentionally inserting willows and willows will create shade, but deliberately and eagerly seek success by uprooting the seedlings. After five chapters, I just saw that the map has been changed and the protagonist has been upgraded. No more. . . Is this gone? Alas, go live in a bookshelf!

Trust me, you just have to read it and you won't regret it. This is not the kind of formulaic, routine and ubiquitous fast food web article. The author's writing style is very solid and delicate, and the characterization is very vivid. Each character seems to be alive, rather than a tool to promote the plot. What surprised me the most was the emotional description. It is obviously a Western fantasy theme, but the emotions between the characters are written in a very sophisticated and natural way, without being pretentious or blunt, and many details are very touching. In addition, the author's control over the growth of strength is also very good. Readers can not only see the protagonist become stronger, but also understand why he is stronger. Although there are cheats, they are not completely defeated by cheats, but constitute a growth process together with hard work and choices. It is precisely because I can read such carefully written novels that I can't stop reading Tomato novels.

I have a rather picky appetite. Except for the first two chapters, which I felt were a bit fuzzy, they were good. What made me most comfortable was the emotional line. There weren't so many reasons and descriptions, and everything felt so natural and natural.

I have read Chapter 121, and I would like to comment. The combat power is not inflated, the behavior is regular, and the logic is not confusing. It is absolutely a good book. The emotional lines of the characters are not messy, everyone has their own ideas, their own rules and logic of behavior, and they will not suddenly become the protagonist's vassal. The half-elf, who has always sacrificed his family for everyone, ruthlessly kills his fallen comrades for many years, and will not be merciful to the protagonist who looks extremely like a fallen person. A girl who pursues knowledge and magic wholeheartedly will not give up her ideals for the love of the protagonist. The combat power does not expand, and the battle is steady and steady. There will be no disgusting situation where the protagonist increases his combat power, and then the whole world has the same combat power or even stronger, constantly crushing the protagonist. The story background and character settings are very consistent with DND. It's great. I didn't change any unconventional character design. It's in line with the world view.

I couldn't sleep at night and read it in one sitting. Gosh, it's really NB, the plot is smooth and the characters are fleshed out. At the same time, I have always wanted to find a novel about the DND warrior class, but there are always a lot of mages, poets, paladins, warlocks, etc., And there are almost no warrior classes. I know this is a warrior profession with "no special features", but I really want to read a novel about the warrior profession. Although this book now has some spells, it still fights in the warrior's fighting style, and it can be seen that the author has something to say in the description of combat. It is really enjoyable to read. In addition, if I have to find fault, it is that the author did not seem to point out two of the few characteristics of the warrior. One is "tide of action". This is something that comes to mind when I see a warrior, and I think it is very handsome. It is another action obtained by "using powerful skills, a strong body, and extreme control to allow the body to briefly break through the constraints of time." I feel that the author can really blow this thing up. The other is "expertise". Whether in DND5E or DNDPF, warriors are built on the basis of many expertise, including "Great Weapon Master", "Critical Mastery", "Shield Master", etc. Even if you really want the protagonist to enter the mythical path in the later stage, you can try the game Wrath of Justice (DNDPF version) The "Critical Mastery Set" in this book is "Proficient in Critical", "Proficient in Critical" and "Proficient in Critical" (yes, the expertise is really called this). These specialties, when clicked, can make the character truly "sword, fire, sword, sword". How should I put it? This really allows the character to chop the enemy into powder with one knife. All in all, thank you to the author, the writing is really good

There is not much to say about the first volume, the plot is very good, I will leave some subjective opinions later. The second volume is poor. There are too many sections that are useless or boring or both. The literary youth disease is too serious. The author's pursuit has obviously not been realized. It can even be said that the cart is put before the horse, so that individual characters are poorly created, but a lot of space is spent. Slow heating is not about mixing all kinds of things unscrupulously, you have to make necessary trade-offs. The processing of long threads is not very good, so I won't talk about short threads. Anyway, this book focuses on slow-burning. If it is still in the early stage, then there is nothing wrong with it. Of course, many things are quite good, such as the growth and interaction of the characters, as well as the emotional rendering and normal narrative writing. Compared with the first volume, the difference lies in the density of plot and valuable information. Personal opinion: It's not cool enough. Using various game settings doesn't make me feel the cool feeling that a player (to be precise, a modern person in the 21st century) should have. Don't tell me that you want to enjoy reading Xiaobai's novels. Similar stupid words used by niche Jiahao brothers to cheer themselves up should not appear here. If you don't have your own thoughts, try not to talk to netizens. Normal people should be able to get pleasure from the plots of online novels in many ways, not just slaps in the face and pretending to be cool. Some of the routines and formulas are borrowed from the game from reading the book reviews, but it seems that the degree of originality is a bit low, and it feels like they were copied mechanically. It feels like path dependence will soon be required. The author seems to like a certain sense of fate, but unfortunately he doesn't handle it well. This is just a writing method, not a necessity or a condition for sublimation of the plot. Don't use this book as a training tool. Finally: Everything in the online novel serves the plot; I hope this volume will be a good story.

A very good DND novel. The description of Drow is very good. Unlike other novels I have read before, Drow is like a human bandit with pointed ears and tanned skin. It successfully made me prejudice against Drow [laughs] Although the Underdark chapter is a bit long and the atmosphere is a bit depressing, the dwarf jokes from book friends in the commentary lighten the atmosphere a bit. For example, on a ship sailing on the sea, the people on it were lured into the sea by the siren's song. Only one dwarf was still on the ship because the dwarf could not climb over the ship's railing [smile] It means that whoever is stabbed under the radar will die. Maybe this is the price of being a big boy of Dakuer. Xiao Ke seems to have survived, that's great [laughs]

Each person's personality leads them in a different direction. This is how I felt when reading this novel. It is this sense of reality that "character determines choices, and choices determine endings" that attracted me to keep reading. Leslie in Volume 1 is the most vivid example. She has her own ideals, conscience and bottom line. These three are the foundation of her character. Because of her conscience and bottom line, she had to kill the druid who had raised her but had already fallen into evil. Because of her ideals, she joined the Harpers and stayed away from home for many years, enduring the infamy. Because of her rational to almost paranoid standard of justice, after discovering that her old friend Reggie's sanity was distorted, she did not hesitate to deceive and kill him. Everything is not accidental, but her character pushes her to make inevitable choices. She is used to separating rationality from sensibility, and cannot bear the influence of sensibility on rationality. Her tough attitude when she sees Renato's abnormality also stems from this. At this point Renato has no escape and is forced to kill her. Because of this, Leslie's end is not a tragedy forcibly arranged by the plot, but a route decided by herself. I really felt from this novel the positive power that a "real" character can bring to the work. The more flesh-and-blood the character is, the more readers will be drawn to her fate. I hope the author will continue to maintain the consistency of this character's internal logic in subsequent plots. When each character's ending is written naturally by his or her personality, the story takes on real life.

To be honest, this is the best DND novel I have ever read. Some people say there are too many knives. I want to say that this is a normal world. Is there a perfect ending in the real world? People are a collection of contradictions and have their own paranoia. Bards died at the hands of their companions for their children, half-elves died of paranoia about cults, barbarians died of glory, and dwarves died. Master Ren died 20 years late for his oath. This is the real Western fantasy world. There is no perfect ending. The brave man saves the world, marries the goddess and reaches the top. It is all fake. The truth is that the brave man has great achievements and dies of betrayal. The real world is also like this. It will not be merciful just because you have suffered too much and finally got on the right track. The blows of reality are never unreasonable. So humans are complex creatures.

As a fan of the Western fantasy genre, this book can be said to be the T0 of the Western fantasy adventure genre in my mind. I think this book is comparable to "Records of Working in Stormwind City". Because I don't play World of Warcraft, but I play Baobao 3, and my personal taste is not like the plot where there is always a world-ending crisis pushing the protagonist. I think this book is even better. I have never read most of the old books, but among the western fantasy novels in recent years, I can say that this book is the best one I have ever written. It took me 4 days to read the latest updates from the beginning, staying up until three or four o'clock every day, and getting up in the morning to continue.

Not bad. When I first read the ratings, I thought it was not very good. But so far, my evaluation is that it is a very good western fantasy adventure novel. Let's talk about the two popular dnd novels with Goblin in the title that I came up with. This one is more comfortable to read than the other two. It's really described more naturally, and it doesn't start from beginning to end, and there are no clichés (it keeps writing about the same hobby or coaxing other characters into NPCs in a few words, which makes it uncomfortable to watch) Although it is still a normal plot, the descriptions of different characters have their own characteristics. And it's very emotional to watch (although it's not the kind that gives you goosebumps, after all, it doesn't have a climax or anything like that) I still hope that the author can slow down a bit in the early and middle stages, and add more details, and create charming companion characters. Anyway, good luck, author. This is the most comfortable adventure novel I have seen on various platforms in the past two years. Hmm, let's water it out a little more. If I had to say it, it might be the same as Storm City. The work record is more like the main character is not a particularly cold-blooded person, nor is there a particularly perverted and indifferent environment. At least there is love and peace in it, and all teammates will not be killed. Overall, it is above the standard. If you are in a book shortage, I recommend it (unfortunately, there is no climax plot that particularly touches me, such as the awakening and transformation of a certain character. The work is not particularly obvious, which is a pity) All in all, it's still worth seeing

Very good, a classic adventure novel, very interesting. It can be said that it is better than most novels on the market. Although it has some flaws, it is obvious that the good aspects can completely cover it up. The protagonist is a smart person, and the author has also written a lot of small details to show it. The positioning of the protagonist is very clear, and the cheating is not very bad. It can be regarded as a helper to advance the plot and can reasonably improve the protagonist. The addition of the female supporting mage is also a reasonable way to join the team. I will see how to form an adventurer team later, but overall it is very good. It's a pity that it's a new book, so I can only read these.

I have finished reading the first volume now. The overall writing is very good, and the portrayal of the main characters is also very distinctive. However, the part where the protagonist kills Lailas is a bit deliberate. In the second volume, I return to being alone again. I hope I can see Pearly again soon [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ]

This is my ideal adventure novel in another world, with feats and regrets, excitement and loss. Although some characters died, they were like boulders thrown into the lake, causing waves that linger for a long time. Especially the departure of the old dwarf made me feel pity and at the same time I was deeply moved by that spirit. The characters were portrayed very well and they seemed to come alive on the page. Although Balin appeared in only about a hundred chapters, when I read the novel here, I will definitely remember this dwarf who sacrificed himself to fulfill his oath and protect his descendants.

It's a good Western fantasy, with a good author. It doesn't have those impetuous and cumbersome settings, but has a good story that is real and a little embarrassing. The protagonist is both the protagonist and an ordinary person walking on his own path. The IQ of all the members is online. Everyone has flesh and blood, is very real, and has his or her own ending. It may not necessarily be a good one, but there are regrets, but they are all achieved by firmly following the heart. Every major supporting character's departure or departure makes people's hearts tremble. I have always believed that only words that can touch people's hearts are good, and this book clearly does that. The author has truly written the Western fantasy in his heart. Keep up the good work. The number of words is still too few. Please add more. It is so interesting and enjoyable to read. Your readers are looking forward to the next journey.