Became the Band's Mastermind Because of Over-Investigation.

It was really super delicious when I went there. I was spinning 360 degrees, dazzling, dazzling, dazzling. Is this male protagonist really invincible if he changes his setting? () A semi-game nerd from a journalist family, he is probably a semi-cold and facially upright type character with good looks. His daily spoken language is various game metaphors and three-character colloquialisms. His hobby is investigating strange and old news. He has a strong curiosity. He is a good person and likes to meddle in other people's business but is unwilling to admit it. When people around him say it, he will give short and vague answers. If he is criticized to the point where he can't resist, he will look away. He has an extraordinary thinking and thinks of defending his friends immediately... It's too cute for me to go here. Don't tell me that I want to conquer the pink-haired milk dragon. If it were you, you would want to do it too.

Well, let's put it this way, this novel is really well written, and the author really pays attention to the handling of interpersonal relationships. Chapter 14 initially solves the interpersonal relationship problem of Hen Card, which I really think is very strong. Then the main plot is a simple story of the protagonist investigating a strange story and accidentally getting involved with a girl in a band. However, the novel also uses a lot of metaphors about games. If you don't understand it, it may be a little difficult to understand. But overall, this novel is still very well written, and I really support it. (This is the first time I have written such a long review. Haji, I will write it for the rest of my life just for this review (laughs))

Japanese light novel style fan work, seriously underrated. Those who like to watch Niku, but hate Niku's procrastinating and indecisive plot are in luck. The overall rhythm is very comfortable, and as a fan work, readers do not need to have read the original work. As long as they have seen the character's memes, it is enough to roughly smooth out the relationship between the characters. The author often updates chapters of 10,000 words, which is very large and can be fully managed. It is highly recommended.

The writing is great, and it is more realistic than all the girl band fanfics I have read so far. It is like a light novel writing a story. The story structure and ideas are also very novel. The writing style on Tomato beats most novices (light novels and fanfiction), but the platform of Tomato... The taste is a bit unique. To be honest, the popularity of writing on Mao is definitely higher than now.

This book currently mainly covers gbc, mygo, mujika, and lonely rock (not sure if the author has his own ideas about what to add in the future) The main plot has multiple female protagonists in the harem, there is an IF solo plot, the writing is very good, there are no obvious logical flaws in the plot processing, and there are some secondary settings, but it is quite comfortable to watch (such as merging Hatsuka Hatsune into one person, and deleting the ethical plot like "Thunderstorm"). The author has just finished the college entrance examination and is revising the text, but the basic main plot has not changed, and you can watch it directly. According to the author, the plot of this book will last until graduation from college. Protagonist image: His career is a student, his dream is to be a reporter, he is currently the head of the Ministry of Information, he likes to study the truth of ghost stories, he is very active, he takes things very seriously, he likes to play games, and he is used to explaining problems from a game perspective. He seems to have a high sense of music, but he doesn't seem to know how to play an instrument. Personal complaint: [After reading the latest chapter, I feel that the protagonist is a combination of a psychiatrist and a detective. In the running group, I secretly rolled psychology, investigation, library and persuasion (charm? Because the appearance is quite tall [laughing]) 80% of the time, and the inspiration is also very high; he behaves like a righteous partner, and will do his best to help when he sees injustice. Of course, it is limited to watching When I ask my friends for help, I won't go looking for injustice (probably), and I won't just rush in for help. I will investigate and collect evidence, and I can take out a notebook everywhere and start recording; the tsundere who can't stand up to the straight ball will be played between the palms of the hands [smile] (I'm talking about you, Chuhua [smile])] Summary: This is a band fanfic worth reading. Personal evaluation is nine out of ten. 2026.7.14.

Oh my, this is really a treasure in tomatoes, at least I have finished reading two volumes so far. It looks super comfortable to me. Haji writes 10,000 words a day, which really beats his peers. In addition, the plot is smooth and the rhythm is comfortable. I give it five stars [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

This is a masterpiece that is seriously underestimated. It is the best novel about a girl band that I have seen written by Tomato so far. The characters are vivid and three-dimensional, the characters are well restored, and the number of words in each chapter is also sufficient. Although it is a harem novel, it will not be accepted casually. Each one has a deep emotional foundation, the protagonist's personality is also very good, and each character has its own if line. The number of words is also sufficient and the details are in place. There are also some extras. It is updated daily with thousands of chapters and currently has a lot of words, so it is very worth reading. And there are no surprises in the book. Very recommended

Quite good looking Japanese writing style is light but the rhythm is tight It breaks away from the weirdness of the protagonists in most "aboriginal" genre comics. The story written by the male protagonist in ordinary daily interactions is quite youthful, and perfectly fits the core of the band's most fundamental purpose. As a comprehensive comic, it cleverly avoids the role of multiple protagonists. Is the emotion of the protagonist specifically love or friendship? The emotional line is unfolded through daily interactions. The seemingly ambiguous and seemingly pure relationship is very suitable for first-person writing. In short, whether you want to see a group portrait of youth friendship, or you want to see the ambiguity of a harem in a comprehensive manga, this book is a good choice. Before the college entrance examination, I saw the author saying that he had to stop reading to prepare for the exam. It was a pity, but I was so nervous preparing for the exam that I gradually forgot about this book. School is about to start now, and when I read this book again, it is still shocking and delicious, and it still gets better and better the more I read it. I hope the author will get better and better as he writes more

The writing style is really good, the white space is very charming, and it completely expresses its own characteristics. This is not a traditional girl band novel, and the protagonist is basically not involved in the band affairs. It is rare to participate in the incident from a perspective outside the band. It does not follow the original plot line, but is almost completely original. The main plot is harem + single female protagonist if. The writing style is very young and has a youthful feel. The protagonist has a mature and rational character, an amazing background, and a good upbringing, but he always does good things in a measured way. Possible problems: At present, it only focuses on some characters, and other characters have very few scenes (Ryo, Riki, Soyo, Mewmeng, Hailing, Rupa, Xiaozhi have necessary appearances, but there is no personal plot and no mainline scenes). There is no darkness of the Toyokawa family, and the setting of the twins Chuhua is not used. It's not an illegitimate daughter, and the number of words in a single chapter is long (but it's really fun). Currently, the famous female protagonists are Mu, Chuhua, Xiangzi, Boqi, Nina, Subaru, Aine, and Lantern. They were only added in the fourth volume. Considering that the author said that the main plot will continue until the protagonist graduates from college (currently a sophomore in high school), there may be more female protagonists. The author returned from the college entrance examination and said that it will solve many problems and is worth looking forward to. It is personally the best girl band fanfic in 26 years.

It's very beautiful, and there's a lot of it in one sheet, which is quite filling. It's completely different from the 2,000 words a day that some hydrology writers write. The style of the novel is light and unfolds in the first person. The author's talk at the end of each volume has a very Nissin feel to it. It uses a lot of game metaphors, and those who like playing games will probably like it. There is nothing OOC about the characters at the moment (the Hen Card has changed from a god to a normal person). The emotional description is very delicate, and the protagonist has become a succubus. And how come our Saint Ai Yin has to become a dog or something (angry)

I read the first 3 volumes in one go. The writing is really good. The male protagonist's image is very distinct. Mu's IF line is really generous. I wrote almost 40,000 words. I'm really happy. My body spots have faded after reading it.

The author's writing is really to my liking. The protagonist has a strong sense of agency, especially the handling of getting acquainted with many girls at the beginning is very natural, but becoming an intervenor later is not so novel. In fact, I am not too fond of the model of writing the heroines separately, so that other characters may lose the opportunity to appear... I prefer a writing style that is more group portrait, and try to integrate as many characters into the story... Also, where can I get rich without thorns? ! I want to see An and Subaru's teeth! !

Needless to say, it is a great band novel that perfectly inherits the advantages of light novels and avoids its flaws. The only regret is that the author is going to take the college entrance examination. Wait for the author to come back. Believe it, you don't need a reason to believe it. I still want to say a few more words. It's been a long time since I've seen such a good light novel, which makes up for the regret I had after reading Nisei. There is no pretense, and the warm and delicate writing style does not require gorgeous words. The protagonist is stable and reliable, has ideas and actions, and is qualified not only in Riqing, but in any novel. But do good deeds without worrying about your future. I wish the author success in his studies and a speedy return.

I have read the latest chapter, the overall pace is very good, and the content is large and full. There is a main plot and daily life, and the character of the protagonist has also been established, which is very interesting. Haji has said that there will be no Lily, and all the ambiguous plots will be female protagonists. When the time comes, there will be a single female protagonist if line and a true ending harem line. Friends who like girl bands don't miss it

What I want to say is that this book is very well written. It is considered to be the best among domestic light novels, and it has the flavor of excellent Japanese works. I have always been very picky about novels, so in a world where domestic novels are homogeneous and fast-food-oriented, it is difficult for me to find novels that allow me to truly immerse myself in reading and thinking. Therefore, the style of Japanese light novels is very attractive to me because of its delicacy, reality, and complexity. Now my reading standards for domestic online novels have dropped very low. Many times we can only choose some movies that are relatively less childish in style, less juvenile in plot, and less pale in description. They are enough to be read. Although there is no depth of thinking, they can also be used to simply pass the time and have a good time. This book by the author gave me a surprise. Although the portrayal of some characters is slightly flat due to too many characters and not enough space, the flaws are not concealed. The overall rhythm is very comfortable, and it also has a certain depth. It will not make me feel bored (maybe because I have not watched this series so I am not familiar with the plot), and it even makes me want to write a book review. Thank you to the author for bringing me such a work. I look forward to the author's high-quality output in the future.

This is my first time writing a book review, and I am currently at the end of the second volume. The first person narrative of this book seems to have the feel of a light novel. I often see various memes in articles, most of which are game memes, but there are also some anime memes. The protagonist explains various things and likes to use games as comparisons. It's quite fun if you can get them. At least I think the behavior and motivations of the characters are very delicate, and the communication with the protagonist is also normal, without seeming too awkward or so-called licking (Lao Lian's connections) All in all, it's very to my liking, and many of the jokes are enough to make me smile knowingly. As expected of you, Hajisaku.

Let me tell you something. When I first read it, I thought it was an experienced author. The plot arrangement, the continuity of the story, etc. Are very comfortable. It doesn't look like a newbie at all. The writing is very good, Xianyu, and the amount of updates is considered to be a lot among the authors of Tomato.

Let me first talk about my overall feeling of reading this book. It feels very relaxed and the events are handled very smoothly. Whether it is the heart-to-heart talk of Group C or the subsequent handling of Xiao Mu's family events, there is a sense of smoothness and the overall reading is very comfortable. Let's talk about characterization. The protagonist Ren Kiritani is currently my favorite protagonist among all the Korean novels. He is a capable, responsible, and very rational character. When dealing with the affairs of girls, he is not just a simple Asasi, but a very rational and mature behavior that reaches out after thinking about whether he can shoulder the corresponding responsibilities. He is a reliable adult character (laughs) Secondly, I would like to mention Xiao Mu's parents. I was very surprised by the author's portrayal of them. He did not directly portray them as pure godly parents, but really and seriously discussed Mu's family relationship. The portrayal was also quite excellent. It was an unexpected surprise.

The standard Japanese light novel style is still described from the first-person perspective, which is quite rare in Chinese online novels. There are no system glitches, it's a campus youth love story that relies entirely on hard work and sweat. Oh my god, one chapter is 1.6K words. It is written exactly according to the specifications of a light novel. It can no longer be called a web novel. This is a light novel. No wonder I haven't read a few chapters after reading it for a long time. The author is really amazing.

My evaluation is that it is one of the best among band fan fiction. Whether it's the male protagonist's behavior and correct outlook on life, or the lack of deliberate conflicts, the plain but warm and interesting daily life is very attractive. The author of this book clearly wrote that the true ending is the harem, but he also wrote personal lines, so you can choose to read it based on your personal preferences. (The main character He He's love story is a little too strong, and I just finished Zhi Mu's story line when I was chasing it.) Two chapters of about 40,000 words, a period of life from high school to old age, so plain and heartwarming that I was deeply moved after reading it. (Seeing this, the story feels the same as the ending. I also think that it's okay to see this.) However, how the author will deal with the harem is also exciting. It is a bit difficult to imagine a harem for someone with such a three-dimensional outlook as the protagonist. [Thinking] Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it. [Learned]

Excellent first-person novel, delicious and rare, must try😋 The style is a bit like Nikkei, but the plot will be relatively compact and won't feel as long as when reading a light novel. The writing is very good and fresh, and the overall atmosphere is plain, but interspersed with various collisions and emotional ups and downs. Also, the main character is actually a tsundere, right?

There is one rare novel that I am willing to read even if it is a harem. I have discussed with others before whether single or multiple female protagonists is better, and the conclusion is single. Because if there is a single female protagonist, even if the love line fails, the main story will not be greatly affected, and the love line is just a branch line. The emotional line of multi-female protagonists is the main line, and emotions occupy a key space in the story. In the end, when I think about it carefully, it's not that having a harem with multiple heroines is not good-looking, or that pure love is required, but that most authors can't write these stories well. Once there are too many characters, the original characters will appear flat, and the second-generation characters will tend to be OOC or too stereotyped. But this article handles this aspect very well. The emotions heat up as the story develops, without seeming to overwhelm the protagonist. Each character has a whole volume of pen and ink to describe it, and other characters will not be left out in the cold. Maybe the writing style and inspiration are not top-notch, but the layout of the novel's story is definitely top-notch.

I just saw the latest chapter, it's so delicious and sweet. The emotional line is delicate and the weight of the characters is well balanced (it can ensure the rapid advancement of the personal emotional line while writing a personal volume of a certain character, and the appearance and smooth progress of relationships with so many characters in gbc, lonely rock, and mygo. Hajixian, you are really sweet. The super invincible Duan Shui Master is here). The plot is also very sweet, and it is not tiring to read at all. The article style is delicate and smooth, plain and ups and downs without losing humor. Finally, I would like to add that because Rencai had no sense of presence in the early stage, I thought that the younger sister was not competitive: I solemnly declare that I have never made any slanderous remarks about little sister. The little sister is so strong✋😭✋. In the seventh volume, his performance is really invincible, he is no longer weaker than Xiao Mu. After reading Mutsumaaki, I felt like I was about to enter the personal line again, and Nina had to be more proactive. It really feels like a super girlfriend. If Mutsuki is about Ren falling in love with each other while helping Mutsuki, then the seventh volume is completely about Ren and Nina going on a date and meeting a parent by the way. It's completely like a couple in love. So sweet😋😋😋. Ruoye Mu? (No concern) Forget her, it doesn't matter. There is no moment to mourn for Mu Zai's invisibility in this volume. Next up is the version t0 girl-girlfriend-proactive girl! !

Highly recommended, the story does not have any clichéd plots, the characterization is in line with the original work, and the writing style gives people a very comfortable feeling [thinking]. It is very relaxing to read, so I read it in one go. I am so high now [angry]

Shuang [Love] Many things are handled very delicately. The male protagonist is also portrayed as a mother. The way of handling Saki's thunder is also very natural. Compared with other comprehensive comics, this book has a slower pace and more comfortable writing. For every girl, Lian is indeed an inseparable existence [Love]

Telegraphic dialogue, compact plot, delicate descriptions, distinct characterizations, in-depth character understanding... The best fanfic I have ever seen! ! ! ! ! [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] (Five exclamation marks for details [smile])

I like this book very much. It is quite good among band fans. I was actually put off by the title and pronouns at first, but I had already read all the band articles that I could read, so I wanted to give it a try. The results really exceeded my expectations and I can't say what the book was like, but it's definitely worth a read. I really like this book. Especially for interpersonal relationships, I have read a lot of band stories that have a lot of extremely irrational emotional changes, such as blushing and succubus physiques, and formulaic band stories. For example, first go to Yuqiu as a deskmate, join the astronomy department, go to the astrology hall, meet Chuhua, help Little Lonely, and then a series of formulaic tactics. The formulaic process is also well-written, but after most band stories are written like this, I feel like my nerves are like Pavlov's dog. After reading the first chapter, I know what the process is. The first step to the death of a novel is to let readers guess what you are going to write. I hope that the band novel can really let a hundred flowers bloom instead of being formulaic. I hope that the protagonist has an arc instead of just being Asashi. I also hope that go mujica Everyone in GBC is not an iconic character. I want to see a gradual relationship between the characters instead of a succubus physique. I want to see the arc of the character's growth instead of a static decoration that needs to be exploded or suddenly pulled out when the plot requires it (right Kakimoto Hiroshi), In short, I am very happy to see a band novel with a relatively mature style and novel ideas. So Ernegai author, let me see your limits.

(Personal opinion) Although this book is written in the first person, I can still read it very well even if I usually only read in the third person. If you are worried that you are not used to the style, you can give it a try first. The author's writing style is very gentle and not very explosive. Bloodthirsty audiences who expect explosive explosions may find it too bland. The plot of this book always solves problems in the protagonist's easy handling and gentle speech, but this also makes the plot full of a sense of leisurely relaxation. As of the latest chapter so far, the romance atmosphere is not very strong, and the relationship between the protagonist and the girls in the band is making steady progress (it is hard to imagine that the author's gentle writing style will write about party strife, so let the plot continue in warmth and harmony). I hope the author can keep writing, and I will always look forward to the subsequent plot. [Blowing kiss]

The protagonist has a pretty good character, a detective who is enthusiastic and has a sense of justice. The character's personality is distinct and not broken. The first person is originally considered a taboo in online writing, but this one is like reading a diary. It does not add unnecessary descriptions to tell readers. It is all about the feelings and speculations from the perspective of the protagonist. Five-star recommendation, really well written!

The writing is delicate and the emotional descriptions of the characters are very good. Reading it as a light novel does not feel inconsistent. Although it is a comprehensive comic, you do not need to understand all the works in detail. The reading threshold is very low. After reading the original work, you will feel another way, that of Duochu ecstasy. I used to watch the plot of Hen Card and I felt very awkward. After reading this book, I felt much better. This is what a girl band should be like. It's like a dark battle royale and I don't know what the meaning of the band is. Sure enough, the orthodoxy lies in the second creation. [Sending my heart] Recommended masterpieces [Please update]