As Soon as I Passed Through HP, I Was Picked up by a Future Object.

I don't know if you understand the comfort of not dismantling the official version and respecting the original work very much. If you are a fan of the original Jagged novel and want to have some fandom, I think this book really meets the requirements. So far, the development of the plot line and the emotional line are very good, and the rhythm control is pretty good. The original protagonist is very suitable for those who like to watch gentle and controlled characters, and all the cool points are outstanding. The main CP of the love line is from Nian Shang. It basically covers all the characteristics and jokes of Nian Shang (wow), and it is very reliable.

I have been following this book for a long time, and this is my first time writing a long review, so let's just talk about it casually. I like the style of this book very much, and it is a breath of fresh air among HP fans. Many protagonists in the fandom are tasked with saving someone. It's not that that's bad, but I personally prefer this calm and calm feeling. After the protagonist Xiao Yanqing settles down, his first reaction is to improve himself. He does things with brains and not impulsively. The plot progression has a natural and natural feeling, which makes people feel at ease. The character setting is also very interesting to me. A reserved and introverted young man, a gentle, smart and transparent partner. The age difference of thirteen years creates a sense of long-lasting companionship, like I thought I was just accompanying him for a while, but ended up walking back home. The author Yu Luoluo is also very attentive, updates steadily, and responds to comments seriously. You can feel that she is sincere to the characters and readers. All in all, it is a very heart-warming book. I recommend it to friends who like a gentle healing style. It will not be a loss for you to invest in it.

I like it very much. The first volume is mainly about the campus life of the protagonist, and the emotional line is a bit slow. The frequency of the second male protagonist's appearances should be less, and it should be faster in the future. I am currently reading it in daily life, and I feel pretty good. The last sentence is that it is the most delicious in the new year. As I said before, the new year is awesome, but this new year is different from what I have seen in the past. As an older man, Yu Heng is gentle, tolerant, mature and steady with a bit of humor, but in his heart he feels helpless and lonely when facing the death of his parents. This gap is the entrance for others to get close to him (that is, Yanqing) under his perfect character. He is very emotional. I don't know anything about it (a piece of wood), so as a controller who should be able to handle things with ease, I need Yanqing to take the initiative and then take the initiative emotionally. Yanqing is the first to be emotionally enlightened, and Yanqing is the first to take the initiative (and in the article I read, this is a plot that will only appear in the next year) Yan Qing's actual age is already 22 years old. That bad childhood brought shadow and precociousness to him, but he was raised as a child for a few years. He is definitely dependent on Yu Heng, but not strongly. He puts Yu Heng and him on a more equal footing. His love lacks some impulse, and what remains unchanged is determination. The relationship between Yanqing and Yu Heng can clearly feel Yu Heng's love and care (I don't know how to say it, but I still have something in my heart but I don't know how to express it!!!) (In short, the first year I have read is about long-term control and temptation, and the second year is about the impulsiveness and youthfulness of teenagers. The author's writing is very different. I like it!)

It's very interesting to watch. It's rare to find HP's original two-male protagonist that suits your taste. It's really great this year! ! The interaction between Yan Qing and Yu Heng is very cute, and the interaction with Evander is also very interesting. The rough draft is also very interesting. I want to steal Yan Qing (bushi) Looking forward to the development of the plot in the future. It's so painful to follow the series. More to come! Update soon! Looking forward to the fourth grade dance

Oh, let's write a long review today First of all, I really like big books! ! ! The plot and emotional lines are perfect! The most important thing is that this is indeed the longest book I have ever read. He describes each grade in more detail, so the plots that should be included are basically there (this is particularly good). Maybe because the more and more detailed the plots, the more it feels like the protagonist is really living in it. And the protagonist's character is also very good. I like both protagonists very much! ! ! Regarding Lin's life experience (I can't, I feel so bad), but it is undeniable that he works hard enough, is smart enough, and rational enough. He is really strong. Even if the living environment is so bad, he never gives up completely, including Yu. I also like the characters of the supporting characters. The three little Harry Potter characters are very well written. Some of the emotional changes are very detailed. Like Lin's roommates, they have very full characters. Each one has his or her own characteristics, including small conflicts between them, and then they are dealt with and resolved. Then this article is mainly about the plot line. The emotional line develops slowly and is long-term. Haha, but maybe because I like the book "Harry Potter", so I am looking forward to the emotional line. However, I think the progress will not be too slow. It is the emotional line that is supplemented and the plot line is the main one, which is the icing on the cake. But it's still a pity. If I had read this book again when it was finished, I would have enjoyed reading it all at once. But thinking about it, it's not bad to follow the serialization. I think it's a support all the way, and I can also give priority to the plot. When the update is finished, I will just re-read it a few times. Oops, it's my first time to write about this kind of product, and I feel like my thinking is confusing, but it's really well written! The author is very good at writing! Big and awesome! (Say important things three times) (PS: Damn, can you release 100 chapters one day to scare me to death)

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Very beautiful\(//∇//)\Lin Yanqing and Yu Heng are both cute

It's good-looking, without too much interference in the main plot, and the highlights of the trio are not forced on others, but Yan Qing also has his own highlights, and the interaction between the young lovers will not be very fast. It feels a bit like a long-term flow, and there will be a process of two people slowly falling in love with each other. The two protagonists are not weak, they are both strong, but Dumbledore did not pay special attention to the protagonist because of this. He still paid attention to Harry as in the original work. This is the first HP fanfic I've read, and it's also my favorite one so far (maybe I prefer both protagonists to be original). I'll keep following it ៷>ᴗ<៷

It's very beautiful, and Yan Qing is also very cute [laughs][laughs][laughs]. I just hope that the teacher can suddenly update Chapter 100.

It is a super nice book with a very novel subject matter. The relationship between Yu Heng and Yan Qing in the book is very sweet, and the whole book is very enjoyable to read. I have also reached a period where reading everything is boring, and I saw this book on the list at that time. Then it got out of control, and I felt like I fell in love with this book. I liked the plot in the book, the characters in the book, and the two of them getting along. Finally, I hope that the author will get better and better, more and more, and the chapters will become popular.

Very nice! ! ! Really like this everyday plain style! ! ! Looks super healing! And there is no excessive interference in the plot of the original work, just follow nature! ! I really like it

I don't understand why such a beautiful article only has so many points🥲I've tied it in almost two days•ᴗ•💧Yan Qing is a growth type, which is very good, and the original characters are very suitable, not OOC at all, and the big brain is really big, very powerful (//∇//) I will always support Da Da😘

There are almost no surprises. The love and career lines are laid out very well. It unfolds slowly and step by step. I love it very much. There are almost no surprises. The love and career lines are laid out very well. It unfolds slowly and step by step. I love it very much. This is the best Harry Potter book I have seen for so long. I highly recommend it. Why doesn't the rating go up? I'm tired of saying "super beautiful". I can say that this book really loves the characters. I hope more people can read it.

Very well written! The character of the protagonist is very distinct, and the original character is completely non-ooc [flying kiss] [flying kiss] Xiao Yanqing is really, really cute. Do you dare to suddenly update a hundred chapters [poke]

I think it's very beautiful The most gratifying thing is that the teacher respects the original work very much, and Yan Qingzhen integrates it very well without any sense of abruptness. The plot line is very smooth, the writing is also very delicate, and the system is very cute Personally I think it's worth reading Come on, teacher＾0＾~

Especially beautiful. . . Oh my gosh, I haven't read a book in a long time. The God of long flowing water. It's really good to watch without thinking. Lin's career line is very exciting, and now it's the plot I want to watch the most. I beg the author to update more (goddess, you should take care of yourself too). I like you, goddess (OS, it would be great if there were more scenes of Lin's battle-damaged illness and weakness🤤🤤🤤) Lin's personality charm is really great, and the gentle, long-haired man is awesome! ! ! Yu is also very good. May the couple be happy forever. . . It should be updated to the emotional line soon. I look forward to it. My friends are also very good. . The roommates are all gentle and like Hermione. She is so beautiful. Lin is so beautiful. No one will dislike Lin's ૮₍ˊᗜˋ₎ა. It's really beautiful. I don't know what to say. It's been a long time since I've seen a piece of writing that suits my taste. I feel like all the bad writing I've seen has been purified. Young lovers, please keep going. . .

It's really good-looking. It's different from the HP fanfiction I've seen before, and it's not OOC at all. Yanqing and Yu Heng are really close to each other, Yu's sense of reliability and Lin's occasional childishness despite being a cold beauty are very lively [Send Heart] [Send Heart] [Sparrow Food Masterpiece] [Sparrow Food Masterwork] I don't know why this book's rating is so low, at least it should be 9.5 Or higher. Maybe it's because the update hasn't been finished yet.

Super Invincible Cosmic Thunderbolt looks great. This is a novel about the author's OC. The author loves his OC very much, and the protagonist has the image of the author. The author's writing is very good, the plot rhythm is very good, the protagonist and the Iron Triangle are good friends, but the protagonist has his own life and thoughts, and it does not occupy Harry's plot and highlights like some HP novels. The relationship between the protagonist and his partner may be slow to develop? Can it also be said to be a slow heat? Both of them are very gentle, and then... They went to NBA in 2018! ! ! ! Why is the rating so low?

I have written many book reviews, but I still don't know what to say. I really like the emotional line of this book, which is very delicately written. I don't know how to express my love for this book, so I invited my friends to read it. ٩( 'ω' )و Hehe ^ ^

For characters who have not fallen in love with the people in the original book and have not participated too much in the plot, they may resurrect them out of regret, but they may also choose not to resurrect them because of the plot, core and characterization of Harry Potter. It's simply wonderful. It gives me the pleasure of encountering an orphan when life is hopeless.

Ah! ! How can it be so beautiful! Move the small bench and prepare to wait for the young couple to get together! Yu Luoluo! ! You are my god! You are so good at writing! I can't imagine how excited I would be if they were together! ! [Adoration][Adoration]

Very nice! ! ! The large writing does not interfere with the basic plot of the original work, but it integrates its own characters very well. Awesome! ! ! ! (My expressive ability only allows me to repeatedly emphasize that it looks good. Cry. I have been following it and the emotional line is not abrupt. I hope the author will release 500,000 chapters.

I am super happy and read the updates every day. Yu Luoluo is also a very good person and wrote about Hengqing, a young couple. Although it is a painful period of time waiting for Yu Heng to wake up, the author said that the sweetness will start soon. . . . Hehehe, super looking forward to it! ! ! ! [Shy] I can't imagine how excited I would be if they confessed their feelings to each other, so I'll just transform into a screaming chicken! ! ! ! 😋

It's shocking and delicious, the character creation is particularly complete, the growth is also uniquely gradual, and the various descriptions and psychological anatomy marks are comfortable and three-dimensional. The plot is also very interesting. The charm of the characters is very well rendered. The rhythm is also well controlled. The emotional line is smooth and flowing. It takes its time to shock and taste delicious. Yamiami, it's delicious, a great period of temptation and ambiguity😋😋😋

This book is really beautiful, and the writing feels very down-to-earth. The relationship between the two protagonists is also very good. It perfectly sums up the advantages of Nian Shang. Nian Shang is awesome. Our Yan Qing is also very cute. I accidentally tied it. It feels a little sour, but it is very reasonable. The author is awesome. No way, I came back for a follow-up review a day later. After tying the score, I felt that I had great stamina. We in Hengqing are such an ordinary, gentle and gentle couple. The two of them get along so cutely Yan Qing is really a very gentle person. I feel soft-hearted about the way he gets along with the people around him. He is very reliable but also very cute. I feel that Yu Heng is a person with the mature charm of an adult wizard. He is very stable and very short-tempered. But sometimes you can see a very contrasting side of him. Passionate yet restrained, Hengqing 99

It's super pretty. Baby Yan Qing is so cute and smart! And the emotional pull between the two is super touching! I feel so good after watching this [full] and am already looking forward to more emotional lines in the next two (☆▽☆)

It took me two days to finish this book. Perhaps because this is the first work, the author's writing style was a little green at the beginning, but by the middle of the article, the improvement in writing style can be clearly seen. The writing style is very comfortable, peaceful but not dull, lively but not impetuous, and it is also very fascinating after entering the main line. At least for me, there is no situation where I don't want to click in again after exiting. Then I like the character of the protagonist very much. Of course, my love for the Ravenclaw protagonist is part of the reason, but Yan Qing's intelligence, tenacity, gentleness and calmness are also a big point. I also like his author skin very much (≧▽≦). All in all, he is such a cute kitten ((つ≧▽≦)つ The emotional line is also very good, nothing has been rushed. Author, teacher, do you know how rare this is? Oh my god, I love it. Double strength, set in the new year, extremely delicious≡ω≡ Finally, a bonus point that I really like is that the author prohibits the use of AI to generate pictures in the comment area. The comment area is very clean, very clean, and there are no ugly pictures to ruin my mood (God knows how desperate I felt when I saw those ugly pictures in other comment areas). Moreover, this book has a situation that is almost not found in other HP fanfics, that is, everyone is very peaceful. There were no quarrels or cliques in the comment section, and fans of every character got along well with each other. The atmosphere is very good and healing. I personally think this is a really important and surprising point, because the other HP comment sections are basically in a row. The author's teacher is also cute. It's obvious that he loves his baby very much and is a very gentle person, Ako. All in all, I like it very much and will always support it~ෆ╹ .̮ ╹ෆ

I was attracted by the cover at first. This book did not interfere too much with the original work. I felt that the author created the characters very well. I really like this kind of story about long-lasting water♡(.◜ω◝.)♡ Hengqing 99ദ്ദി˶ｰ̀֊ｰ́ )✧

It's very interesting. I suggest the author divide the papers into second and third grade according to the timeline. This way, those who want to read the emotional line can quickly find what they want to read.

First of all, I'm going to NB this year! HP, with two male protagonists, I have watched a lot of them in the past year, and I have also watched a lot of the three together. However, the more I read this book, the more addictive it becomes. It's really great! ! ! For the first time, I felt that there were two chapters per day, and one chapter was only about 2,000 words long. It was not enough to read! I'm going to watch it again.