Hp's Parents Have Been Side by Side with Snape for Thirty Years

To be honest, the only shortcoming of this book for me is that it is serialized [crying]. The first is the parent generation, which I like very much. The parent generation means that the original work has less fixed plot points and not many focused characters. The author can rely on the well-known background of the HP magic world, and at the same time he has ample room for development (so the ability to expand the plot and recycle details is tested), and does not fall into the cliché plot of the fixed links of the child generation (I really get tired of reading too much). And the author, Mr. Pumpkin Cart, played it very well! The plot line is very clear and clear, with some unconventional undercurrents laid out, laying some hooks and quickly picking up without any delay. My writing skills are very solid, and I suspect that it is from a teacher who has written works on other platforms. Please don't leave, I will always follow you [crying], old bookworms will understand it at a glance. The plot is written without any waste. What the protagonist does to achieve what result, and what her psychology is, are explained one by one in a few simple paragraphs, making it easy to follow (this is really not simple). The content is informative and logical, and the logic is rigorous but not exaggerated. The plot temperament of the first and second volumes is very stable at this stage. It seems that the emotions are within the controllable range. Just like the protagonist herself, it makes people feel safe and want to follow her. Her origin is tragic, but her vulnerability is not deliberately portrayed because she believes in her and this is not a problem for her. This is the confidence given by the author, Mr. Pumpkin Cart. The main content of this book focuses on the personal growth of the protagonist. It is easy for HP fans to write around the original CP (such as SS), and because the readers already know enough about the original CP itself, it is easy to write the original protagonist as a background with no growth and character arc, and write the plot as a plot to push the protagonist (that is, what the character needs to do here, rather than what the character himself wants to do). But this article does not. Seeing the tie here, the protagonist herself has a strong subjectivity. She believes in her own choices. She discovers her own ambitions in constant confrontations with others and gets what she wants. This is where the highlight of the character comes from. And I'm very grateful. Nowadays, I don't focus on the description of appearance. I only know from some scattered aspects that it should be good-looking. The female protagonist is very satisfied. Oh, let's talk about the sense of CP between the protagonist and the ss. Wow, I feel like the woman is still on top. Although the relationship has not been confirmed yet, the desire to control is really concentrated on the woman at this time. You can see in several Sijiao fan books that the protagonist said to Sijiao, "You can make up a reason for me to stay overnight, Severus. You don't have to tell me the reason. Just let me in." Then she goes in! Door! Got it! ! Oh my God, this is so domineering! Oh my God! Isn't this cool? We won't lick this one anymore! Let's directly cooperate and win-win to meet your needs! Let's talk as equals, family members! ! ! Well, we haven't started talking yet, it's just the adult group that's great! It depends on someone of about the same age talking to the Sri Lankan teacher! Talent! Cool! Underage people should study hard for me, damn it! ! Okay, let's stop here first. Mr. Pumpkin, please hurry up and update. Thank you. Emmmm I don't know, I feel that the story fell into a slump after Lao Fu was injured and dormant, and started to become relatively flat (it may also be that the emotions of watching the update are intermittent, and it is not as comfortable as before in one go). The wording is not as rigorous as before, and the frequency of modern jokes has become more frequent. From time to time, it is used to make people laugh, and pure translation is not required. But this kind of thing is a loss for me personally, let's take a look. And it is not recommended for those who are more rigorous in research. Female protagonists who have a general understanding of the plot and characters can watch it.

It's super good-looking, and the characters are very realistic. There's no OOC, the original heroine is not obtrusive, and her personality is sober but strong and smart. She's not 100% kind or 100% evil, and there's no brainless blackmail or brainless flattery. [Blowing a kiss] The heroine knows what she wants and works hard to get it. The emotional line is not deliberate, it is very natural, and the interaction between the two smart people is also very interesting. There is not too much detail about the pain of the original family, and the focus is on the self-consistency and growth of the protagonist. Seeing now, the author has also laid out a lot of foreshadowing, which is very interesting. The writing is also very good, not procrastinating, and the plot is compact. I personally have very high requirements for writing and plot, and I really like this article. Although I didn't like Snape's CP before, this article successfully sucked me into the trap! ! [Laughing][blowing kiss][love]

There was actually a slight problem with the early description, which almost made me abandon the article. Because the heroine's tragic experience, life experience and some small settings are too similar to the male protagonist. She is a carbon copy of the male protagonist, so there is a feeling that the heroine was created just for the male protagonist. But the further you go, the better it becomes. This feeling is no longer the same. The heroine has her own pursuits and desire for power, and her character background is still somewhat different from the male protagonist. The author describes each stage very smoothly. He even has his own original main plot line, which is very integrated with the original plot. The degree of control is also very good. It does not feel like it is an original plot. It mainly introduces the heroine's life experience, and there is not a lot of foreshadowing and the Riddler. It is very comfortable to watch and does not dwell too much on the original work. The emotional and friendship lines are particularly well written. The heroine has gained her own love and friendship and has her own followers. This part is also very enjoyable. The quarrel with the male protagonist in the middle period was like a ghost of a man and a woman. It smelled like a sea of hatred, and it felt particularly dank. Abnormal love is so cool. I stopped watching it after seeing them together. I still prefer to watch the pulling feeling when we are not together. All in all, it is a good book. The female protagonist can be read with confidence. The female protagonist is not a good person, so it is very enjoyable to read.

(This is my first long review, please forgive me (*/∇＼*)) This is the most HP-friendly book I have read so far. Personally speaking, there is nothing OOC about it. The plot is very natural. The heroine is super charming. She is rational and intelligent and must avenge her revenge. It is so handsome [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart] And the emotional line with Sri Lanka is also very natural. The most outstanding thing is that it is very consistent with HP, from the narrative content to the characterization to the protagonist's growth and core depth (unlike many Thunder fanfics that have nothing to do with HP except the setting). The biggest feeling during the process of reading is that smart people are similar. The author's writing style is a bit like Rowling, with British humor in many places, which is very interesting (I don't know if the author is a party to the original work, so I apologize in advance<(_ _)>) I hope this book can be read by more HP fans✌︎˶╹ꇴ╹˶✌︎

Say! What good can I do to you? I haven't read it for a long time, and today I read over a hundred chapters. When I first read this book, it was because of my love for the Sect and its title. Oh my God, there has never been a heroine who could choose Voldemort's side from the Sect and stay with him all the time. I was a little excited when I started reading. After that, I couldn't hold back the corner of my mouth. Hehehehehehehehe, they all have mouths between them, which made me even happier. Now I'm starting to read it again. I was a little worried that the author's writing might not be good at the end, so I picked it up and read it. The more I read, the more excited I became. Hehehehehehehe. I think I'd better re-read it from my short story to catch up on the plot.

A very good-looking article, even better than some articles rated 9 or above. Finally, it doesn't have the OOC smell of Sri Lanka's CP. There should be a female lead from the Snake House. It's so delicious.

It is really the most neat and reasonable development of Snape's relationship that Tomato has seen so far. The settings added are also very interesting and not obtrusive. It is really well written! ! ! ! ! !

The emotional pull between the two is really exciting! It belongs to the kind of dog that makes a little fight more enjoyable and tastes like an old married couple. Overall it's still very good! It's just that the front part may be a little anxious, and I personally found the conflict with the Gryffindors a bit boring, but the back part is really beautiful! Especially the two chapters about the awkward conversation! ! The story has developed into the third volume, which is completely shocking and delicious. It is well worth reading! [Adoration][Adoration] It's really delicious! ! [Cry][cry]

It's really beautiful! ! It is really not easy for me to find a favorite HP article about personal training. The structure of the whole text is very clear, and the wording is also very on my point. It's really nice to read these few articles during my weekly holiday. The daily descriptions are very vivid, and the heroine's own thoughts are also described very three-dimensionally, which makes people feel that they are growing up step by step. Highly recommended! !

Very good, ah, ah, ah, ah, but there are too few emotional lines between the heroine and Si Jiao, not enough at all, boss [crying] [crying] [crying] And can there be less contact between Si Jiao and Lily? I really can't like this kind of person, and those four predators, please log off immediately, I can't stand this kind of bully at all [vomit] [vomit] [vomit]

This is the best fanfic I have seen recently. The plot is very smooth and there are no surprises. The portrayal of the protagonist is also very good [like], and there is no OOC. I really love this book. Please don't give up! Many of the fanfics I read before have been discontinued. It's been a long time since I've seen a book that suits my tastes so well! But everyone should also pay attention to rest. If you are really busy, don't be too stressed. Your health is the most important thing! ! !

To be honest, there are really not many books that satisfy me. I have read only two that satisfied me, and this is the second one. The CP is Snape, which is very common, but it is rare to write such a beautiful book. There are few OOC books about the family generation, and the relationship between Snape and Lily is also handled very well.

I have a question: After reading part of it, I feel that the plot is well written, but I would like to ask whether the heroine's leg and foot problems will improve back to a normal state later, and whether the heroine's appearance will still be so sloppy later on. Because I tend to control my appearance. Although I respect the setting of an ordinary-looking heroine and have no intention of asking the author to change, this affects my decision of whether to continue reading.

It's good. Lily basically has no plot, and will not have any love with ss. Friendship is not worth mentioning in front of the alliance between ss and the heroine. Then the author writes ss to be neutral and a little good, so it is understandable that ss chooses to betray Voldemort and protect Lily in order to leak the secret. Because he took the initiative to tell the prophecy and involved his friends, so he felt a little guilty, so he protected Lily. It is logical and this article is worth reading. I feel that in the later period, she will change from an ambitious and strong woman to a true, kind and beautiful woman (mark Chapter 180)

The plot is reasonable and logical, and the whole book is written from the perspective of the heroine, who is not a good person in the traditional sense and has growth and mistakes. The characterization of Snape fits my idea of ​​Snape very well. All in all, very nice.

Hohohohoho I was definitely excited to see this novel. It didn't destroy too many characters, and on this basis it maintained some British humor. Moreover, the heroine is very strong and has her own ideas. It won't be tied to Si's body. Both of them have their own things to do... No, no, no, no, [angry][angry][angry], it was tied at once, and I was undoubtedly disappointed to find that the author hadn't updated it yet. [Cool][cry]

So pretty! ! Sri Lanka deserves the best! The best of everything! Let the two of them be entangled together like this! I want to possess you fiercely, but you just need someone to love you toughly⁽⁽٩(´͈ᗨ`͈)۶⁾⁾This is not a two-way rush! ! ! The author's writing is excellent! I think the rating is too low! I want to give it full five stars! ! 😈

I have read the first 5 chapters and they are very suitable to my taste. They are very interesting. I will give my second review after I understand them better. Here comes the review~ I feel like I'm a bit of a spoiler. I rarely write book reviews, so I can't keep up with this level. Please mind reading it if you don't read it [Sending my heart] The story is very interesting, it's a sibling story, the heroine is one year older than Si Jiao, and now Si Jiao is in a relationship with Felicity (the Valentine's Day chapter🥩 was so exciting hehe, it made me crawl in a dark and twisted way) Si Jiao is not OOC, and the female character is also very good. She only has a little conscience and is good at the research and treatment of curses, potions, black magic and souls. During the Death Eater period, she also used her colleagues for experiments (Death Eaters who had a miserable life not only had to face their crazy bosses, but also faced the backstabbing of their colleagues). Moreover, she is a dastardly type of heroine. She secretly placed a localized alchemy product on Si Jiao's body. After being discovered, she was still confident and admitted that she wanted to keep a tight control on Si Jiao's whereabouts. She even regretted not adding a monitoring function. The heroine came here and Si Jiao was very happy after being angry. She felt that the heroine "cares about him so much." After the big fight about the espionage incident and talking about it, he just used his patronus to express his love directly. The Sri Lankan teacher in that chapter was simply a tsundere cat! Mao'er is so proud after having a girlfriend~ It's so cute and I love watching it, the author must not stop updating [blowing kisses] (does this count as a spoiler) (After reading other people's book reviews, I found that some people could not accept being taught by Sri Lanka to be a double agent, but I think this is where his humanity shines. Lily is his best friend he met before entering Hogwarts. Even if they part ways and take different paths, he will not want Lily to die, let alone Lily. Li died because of the prophecy he leaked. In this book, he provided intelligence to the Order of the Phoenix and acted as a spy just to make up for his mistakes. He didn't want his former friends to die because of him, that's all (now it's because Voldemort is not a good master, so he is willing to be a double agent when Old Voldemort returns in the future). The Sect itself is not a very cold and unkind person, so it will not be used as a spy unless Voldemort is completely killed in one's own generation, or the heroine has a strong family background to fight against Voldemort, and can protect the Sect, and does not join the Death Eaters.

It's so awesome, I won't allow such a great book to not have five-star reviews! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

The writing is delicate, lively and interesting, and the heroine's setting is super interesting. You won't feel embarrassed when you read it. The plot is not cliché or bad, the characters are not OOC, and the protagonist's outlook is normal. I haven't seen the love part yet, but I really like this book. I personally think this is the best fanfic I have ever read. It would be better if it could be faster. It is simply shocking and delicious! ! ! [Adoration]

Super beautiful, highly recommended

It looks great, keep it up!

I hope it can continue to be updated

I like this dual-power setting

Absolutely amazing. It's the first novel with a villainous heroine. I enjoyed it so much. It's the first time I've seen Sif like this. It's so interesting.

Come on, author, your writing is beautiful. Don't feel pressure, just update freely, but be sure not to abandon the article.

It's so beautiful, I will follow you forever

It's very interesting. If you want to read the emotional line, you can go directly to the third volume. I don't know, I think it's quite consistent with the original work.

I really like the heroine's character and I think she matches well with Sif. [Laugh]

It's nice to watch. The heroine is really good. She's very similar to Snape, but very different. She has her own career and pursuits and won't revolve around one person. It's really good. The only drawback is that there are few updates