[Very angry] [No fixed heroine] [Business] [Movie making]
"Welcome Mr. Li Qiankun from Xiangjiang to bring us a song "Into the New New Era""
Reader comments
Different Liangkun, different young and Dangerous.
It's not so much Young and Dangerous, but more like a time-travel development flow with a club background.
It's quite interesting to use new era ideas to make a fortune [laughs evilly]
Jianghu is not about fighting and killing, but about human relationships. The Black Society is essentially an organization that exists to make money.
To be honest, the writing is very good, the dialogue is very Hong Kong movie style, the story rhythm is smooth, the pressure and excitement points are well designed, and many twists and turns are very cleverly designed. I would like to remind the author here! I saw that the plot designed by the author is going to enter the mainland today. This is not appropriate. Because of the mainland's legal society, the plot conflict brought about by the protagonist's identity cannot be used, and it will become a commercial farming story. It is better to write him to develop in Europe and the United States, and face the Italian gang, the Irish gang, and the old money family. This kind of co-development of the underworld and business is the most exciting part of your book!
The current book's logic is very smooth. Pig's trotters are the reborn black boss of a non-serious social animal. They are still growing in a short period of time. They are superstitious about the halo of pig's trotters, so they are a bit too vulgar, which makes it not exciting enough, but it can be explained. It is a rare good grass among tomatoes.
It's pretty good-looking, and I don't say too many nice things. (The following bits are just made up of words [laughing]),,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
It is written from another perspective about the brand new Liang Kun, who has transformed from a club to find Zheng Xing. The plot is slowly building up, and it is not an invincible novel. It is still very interesting if you have the patience to read it. At least it's much better than Tomato's current copy-paste➕AI.
It's a pity that it's not a Hong Kong variety show. The circle is too small, many things are not developed, and there are too few character portraits. I can only create my own characters, and the original characters are not vivid enough. The entire main plot advances smoothly. Without any ups and downs, the plot will seem too bland, and after a long time, you will lose the motivation to read on.
It's very interesting, and it focuses on operations and making money. It's just a bit slow, which means that most readers will be screened out and won't continue reading. Come on, author
The writing is really good. In the fanfic, both the writing, plot and logic are very good. I think the author is writing seriously. This book was absolutely popular a few years ago.
The writing is average, the plot and events are laid out very carefully by the author. If you like this subject, it is worth reading.
It's actually pretty good-looking, it's a time-travel management kind of thing, not a traditional slasher-to-the-bottom Young and Dangerous novel.
It's cool, it's so cool, just give it a try. The protagonist never suffered a loss from the beginning to the end. He is the only one who deserves this evaluation if he counts others.
The direction is good, but the climax of the novel has relatively few antagonistic events. And the relationship between the underworld is too plain. Moreover, there are too few time divisions and the event lines are confusing. But the intention is good.
Overall good, the score is low, IQ is relatively online, not stupid, slightly slow-tempered
It's quite good, a business war novel in the style of Young and Dangerous.
Good-looking, different Liangkun, you can take a look
The writing is very interesting. I recommend that you add scenes of killing people from time to time. It is too clean and a bit like a commercial novel, even if you add a supporting character of killing people.
Good, very good, very good, very
Very nice looking
The plot is interesting and ups and downs
Okay, fine grain and grass
Real description of human nature
I like it very much, keep going
Apart from taking too many films, I don't think there's any big problem. I don't understand why the rating is so low.
Books that suit my personal tastes, follow them up
Pretty good. The content is quite interesting.
The writing is pretty good, you can read it with your mind
Excellent production, highly recommended by bookworms of ten years
Same world, different Kun brother!
There's not so much fighting and killing, there's more worldliness, the writing and plot are online, it's worth a read
Clear logic, online IQ, a rare good book
The book is very good, the plot is too natural, the writing is sophisticated, the characters are not OOC, the male protagonist is powerful and will not make people feel brainless, good book reservation [like]
A good-looking Hong Kong drama, the characters act logically
Different Liangkun, different young and Dangerous. It's not so much Young and Dangerous, but more like a time-travel development flow with a club background. It's quite interesting to use new era ideas to make a fortune [laughs evilly] Jianghu is not about fighting and killing, but about human relationships. The Black Society is essentially an organization that exists to make money.
To be honest, the writing is very good, the dialogue is very Hong Kong movie style, the story rhythm is smooth, the pressure and excitement points are well designed, and many twists and turns are very cleverly designed. I would like to remind the author here! I saw that the plot designed by the author is going to enter the mainland today. This is not appropriate. Because of the mainland's legal society, the plot conflict brought about by the protagonist's identity cannot be used, and it will become a commercial farming story. It is better to write him to develop in Europe and the United States, and face the Italian gang, the Irish gang, and the old money family. This kind of co-development of the underworld and business is the most exciting part of your book!
The current book's logic is very smooth. Pig's trotters are the reborn black boss of a non-serious social animal. They are still growing in a short period of time. They are superstitious about the halo of pig's trotters, so they are a bit too vulgar, which makes it not exciting enough, but it can be explained. It is a rare good grass among tomatoes.
It's pretty good-looking, and I don't say too many nice things. (The following bits are just made up of words [laughing]),,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
It is written from another perspective about the brand new Liang Kun, who has transformed from a club to find Zheng Xing. The plot is slowly building up, and it is not an invincible novel. It is still very interesting if you have the patience to read it. At least it's much better than Tomato's current copy-paste➕AI. It's a pity that it's not a Hong Kong variety show. The circle is too small, many things are not developed, and there are too few character portraits. I can only create my own characters, and the original characters are not vivid enough. The entire main plot advances smoothly. Without any ups and downs, the plot will seem too bland, and after a long time, you will lose the motivation to read on.
It's very interesting, and it focuses on operations and making money. It's just a bit slow, which means that most readers will be screened out and won't continue reading. Come on, author
The writing is really good. In the fanfic, both the writing, plot and logic are very good. I think the author is writing seriously. This book was absolutely popular a few years ago.
The writing is average, the plot and events are laid out very carefully by the author. If you like this subject, it is worth reading.
It's actually pretty good-looking, it's a time-travel management kind of thing, not a traditional slasher-to-the-bottom Young and Dangerous novel.
It's cool, it's so cool, just give it a try. The protagonist never suffered a loss from the beginning to the end. He is the only one who deserves this evaluation if he counts others.
The direction is good, but the climax of the novel has relatively few antagonistic events. And the relationship between the underworld is too plain. Moreover, there are too few time divisions and the event lines are confusing. But the intention is good.
Overall good, the score is low, IQ is relatively online, not stupid, slightly slow-tempered
It's quite good, a business war novel in the style of Young and Dangerous.
Good-looking, different Liangkun, you can take a look
The writing is very interesting. I recommend that you add scenes of killing people from time to time. It is too clean and a bit like a commercial novel, even if you add a supporting character of killing people.
Good, very good, very good, very Very nice looking
The plot is interesting and ups and downs
Okay, fine grain and grass
Real description of human nature
I like it very much, keep going
Apart from taking too many films, I don't think there's any big problem. I don't understand why the rating is so low.
Books that suit my personal tastes, follow them up
Pretty good. The content is quite interesting.
The writing is pretty good, you can read it with your mind
Excellent production, highly recommended by bookworms of ten years
Same world, different Kun brother!
There's not so much fighting and killing, there's more worldliness, the writing and plot are online, it's worth a read
Clear logic, online IQ, a rare good book
The book is very good, the plot is too natural, the writing is sophisticated, the characters are not OOC, the male protagonist is powerful and will not make people feel brainless, good book reservation [like]
A good-looking Hong Kong drama, the characters act logically