A Guide to Surviving as a Young Triad Member

To be honest, the writing is very good, the dialogue is very Hong Kong movie style, the story rhythm is smooth, the pressure and excitement points are well designed, and many twists and turns are very cleverly designed. I would like to remind the author here! I saw that the plot designed by the author is going to enter the mainland today. This is not appropriate. Because of the mainland's legal society, the plot conflict brought about by the protagonist's identity cannot be used, and it will become a commercial farming story. It is better to write him to develop in Europe and the United States, and face the Italian gang, the Irish gang, and the old money family. This kind of co-development of the underworld and business is the most exciting part of your book!

Different Liangkun, different young and Dangerous. It's not so much Young and Dangerous, but more like a time-travel development flow with a club background. It's quite interesting to use new era ideas to make a fortune [laughs evilly] Jianghu is not about fighting and killing, but about human relationships. The Black Society is essentially an organization that exists to make money.

The current book's logic is very smooth. Pig's trotters are the reborn black boss of a non-serious social animal. They are still growing in a short period of time. They are superstitious about the halo of pig's trotters, so they are a bit too vulgar, which makes it not exciting enough, but it can be explained. It is a rare good grass among tomatoes.

It is written from another perspective about the brand new Liang Kun, who has transformed from a club to find Zheng Xing. The plot is slowly building up, and it is not an invincible novel. It is still very interesting if you have the patience to read it. At least it's much better than Tomato's current copy-paste➕AI. It's a pity that it's not a Hong Kong variety show. The circle is too small, many things are not developed, and there are too few character portraits. I can only create my own characters, and the original characters are not vivid enough. The entire main plot advances smoothly. Without any ups and downs, the plot will seem too bland, and after a long time, you will lose the motivation to read on.

It's pretty good-looking, and I don't say too many nice things. (The following bits are just made up of words 🤭),,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

It's actually pretty good-looking, it's a time-travel management kind of thing, not a traditional slasher-to-the-bottom Young and Dangerous novel.

The direction is good, but the climax of the novel has relatively few antagonistic events. And the relationship between the underworld is too plain. Moreover, there are too few time divisions and the event lines are confusing. But the intention is good.

It's very interesting, and it focuses on operations and making money. It's just a bit slow, which means that most readers will be screened out and won't continue reading. Come on, author

It's pretty good, I rarely persist in reading so many chapters. Later on, there were too many scenes going to the mainland. The scenes in Hong Kong are still good to watch. It feels a little delayed in the mainland. But it is indeed a good book.

The writing is really good. In the fanfic, both the writing, plot and logic are very good. I think the author is writing seriously. This book was absolutely popular a few years ago.