救赎：从公共厕所捡到校花开始

Brothers, let me evaluate this novel objectively. The broken halberd holds the wine and the poem is brilliant, and the sword points at the edge of the Huangdao Meiyou. Positive and exciting, Kanwanbuli's song for the deceased. Ahem, to be honest, I personally think that the previous story is not very good. Although the various settings are acceptable, it still feels a bit inconsistent. However, starting from the college chapter, the author's writing style has made a qualitative leap, and the plot is full of sugar. I have not skipped a chapter. As for time It can be said that everything that should be skipped has been skipped, and there is no ink. It is just wonderful content, and it is not sloppy. I personally like this novel very much. I hope that the author can write a better story in the next work. This kind of feeling of being firmly chosen by others is something I cannot envy.

Not bad, the description of details is okay, the male and female protagonists are also okay However, there are also small shortcomings. 1. The pace of the male and female protagonist's confession is too fast, only about a week. Personally, I think the campus beauty's confession has a sense of sympathy for each other. There is too little foreshadowing, and it feels like a free gift. 2. The description of the supporting characters is relatively average. Can you give me some personal suggestions? I will write a little bit about Shura Field, but after all I have to write about Yandere [Eating Melon] Let's focus on describing some of the close friends of the male and female protagonists, otherwise it will be easy to get bored just looking at these two. Please write about the yandere attribute in detail. After all, most of them come here for the title of the book. Overall, it is a very good campus love article. I hope the author will continue to work hard and update it! ! [Blowing kiss] I've caught up with the main force, but the pace is a bit too fast. I also feel that the male and female protagonists really don't need to be too anxious to do hate, and they should take the college entrance examination with peace of mind first. But the author really knows how to write about Liu Bei. Except for the Dragon Lady book that I followed, this one is the best about Liu Bei. [Eating Melon] I still hope to wait until the hero and heroine go to college before starting to work on it. I feel like I can only write a middle chapter in this book, but if the college life is well written, it will be around 300. Come on, author [blowing kiss]

I recently read a lot of sweet redemption stories, and this one is one of the few that I think is well written. However, I always feel that the author failed to control it well in the later period. The plot between the best friend and the younger sister just ended. The ending was a bit abrupt and hasty, but the flaws are not concealed. This is a true two-way running, with a lot of sugar sprinkled, and no knife. Personally, I think the two injuries the male protagonist suffered during college are not considered knives. Anyway, as a sweet story, it is still highly recommended. If you have the opportunity, I hope to see similar works by the author. Come on.

I heard it this morning and it's pretty good now. It's possible that I have no resistance to this kind of setting and just like this kind of similar book. I'm not a very old reader, so there may be something wrong with my evaluation, but I still want to point it out. To be honest, the pace is a bit fast, but I quite like it. The details are not handled well, but it's already very good. Come on, I've only read half of it, but I'll give it five stars first [Love]

Yes, the male protagonist and the female protagonist are both relatively miserable and then redeem each other. This kind of thing is really great. Pure love Saigao [blowing kiss]. It just seems that this book is not very popular. It's a bit [learned]. It's a pity [almost crying]. I hope the author doesn't stop the book or it's unfinished. [Cover face]

It was so enjoyable to watch and I couldn't bear to see it end suddenly [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

Nice work, fluent language

After reading it, I still have more to say. After all the hardships, the two protagonists finally became successful and had friends and family. And in the later period, the author made a friend deal with Shen He. [Laughing evilly] Great, come on, write about Liu Bei's eldest brother.

Okay, author, the speed of the car [laughs crookedly]

The back part is a bit hard to watch, but overall it's okay.

Update quickly! It's so slow. Even the donkeys in the production team are not that slow. I can't watch it enough. This is worse than killing me.

The daily lives of the male and female protagonists are very sweet. I hope they don't write about brotherly love.

Very good, very true, I like it very much

The writing is good and very readable. Not bad.

The content is very rich, and it reminds me of secretly falling in love when I was in school. [Like][Like][Like] It looks good, I love it, I like it, I must give it a five-star rating! [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

The emotional expression is very straightforward, but I feel that some details in the story have not been handled well. Please give it a good review to encourage it.

In fact, the writing is quite good, but the impression of this childhood sweetheart and these family disputes is really bad. Everyone is reading it because of your introduction and the title of the book. You don't want to make too much space for these contents. I hope the transition to college will be quicker in the future, and I'll give you more sweet treats [Chigua]

The writing is good and the logic is clear. It is worth reading.

Smile without saying a word, and you'll be right next time [laughing]

It's very sweet. I love watching it. I watched three o'clock in one go.

The content is good, good-looking, love to read, please update more [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

The poisonous point is Qingmei, she pulls and hugs her. The advantage is that the heroine is so good and very sweet.

Chapter 154 was reviewed as soon as I posted it

It's the first time I've written something like this, it's already pretty good.

Although the writing is a bit immature and the plot is a bit cliche, it's still good for a redemption story.

Five-star praise, please support [Chigua]

A story about two broken hearts comforting each other, pure love, I love watching it [Sending Hearts]

It's very interesting and worth reading, but the author doesn't know much about it and I'm a bit reluctant to finish it.

The writing is good, but the heroine's name is always spelled incorrectly [face covering] [face covering]. I hope the author will pay attention to it.

Quite outrageous, to be honest