[Eternal Life] [Funny] [Daily] [Jianghu] [Sister] [System]
Are you still worried about being alone forever?
Are you still feeling lonely because your old friend has left?
These must be very difficult for you, and you must be very upset!
But... What if there is a sister who lives forever with the protagonist?
And he's very clingy and cute?
The most important thing is that my sister still likes to step on her brother's face with her fragrant and soft jade feet?
Do you still like to get into your brother's clothes when you sleep?
…
Alas... Changsheng is so lonely as snow!
An old friend is like a leaf falling in the wind, but she is always there!
Accompany yourself through year after year, watching the wind, the snow, the mountains, the scenery, the sea, the world, and parting together...
…
When my brother gets into a fight, I hit him, but when my brother is being chased, I disrupt the situation.
When my brother is cooking, I lift the pot; when my brother is sleeping, I make a mess
I shushed my brother while he was taking a shower, pretending to be stupid and smiling with his lips pursed.
My brother was surprised and asked what the heat was. I said, "Tian Shui, don't be surprised."
Sister: Hehe (˵¯͒¯͒˵)
Later, the brothers and sisters would travel around the world wearing black silk hoods.
Where did the black stockings come from?
Ah~ Hahaha! (Putting hands on hips and looking up to the sky laughing)
Of course my sister just took it off!
Reader comments
Yes, it's okay. In fact, it's difficult to combine immortality with comedy. After all, if you write about immortality, there will inevitably be partings and sadness. Even if you use some fragments to make it funny, the main tone will still be immortality, which is difficult to integrate. Some fragments outside the main tone can be funny, such as dealing with enemies. However, once a negative characteristic of immortality appears, such as the theory of longevity, it is almost impossible to be funny, because sadness and comedy cannot be both, you can only choose one. If you also add comedy, then this novel is very likely to become a knife. And because there is a contrast between comedy and tragedy, the first few chapters are fun and happy, but more than ten or hundreds of years have passed since then, so the level of this book may not be low.
Come on, big brother who writes about the emperor's uncle
Let me give an evaluation of Lao Zu first. The plot is long and flowing. Of course, the main reason is to watch my sister. I have been raised since I was a child and I just like it [laughs]. But I have to say that the description in the front is a bit too much. I hope there will be less in the later part. If the flow rate is 300,000 words, I have also seen the 300,000 words of Lao Zu. The latter is 500,000 and 800,000. I just wanted to say goodbye and gave up. The audience is there, so I will continue to review it later.
Shen Qingluan leaned gently to his right side, with a slight blush on his cheeks, and carefully got into the lapel of his clothes. His head poked out from the right collar, one to the left and the other to the right, just enough to protect both sides of Gu Changsheng's neck.
This is a harem story.
Harem novel, poisonous
It feels like it's over.
In addition to his sister, the male protagonist will also find other women in the future. I was startled at the beginning. I thought it was a Shuanghao longevity story, but I didn't expect it to be a harem story about the male protagonist. I cried to death [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][vomit] [Spit] [Spit] [Spit] [Spit] Toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic Toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic.
No, there are details. Author, have you killed the review? O(∩_∩)O
The author should be given five stars for his daily battle of wits and courage with Shen He, but it's okay based on some minor points. After all, it can be seen that they are used as sacrifices to pave the way for deepening the relationship in the future. However, it is still a minus point, but this cannot deny the author's profound background in describing the imperial way.
Support the author, it is rare to see an author who updates every day. The main reason is that the author really drives it when he has a car. There are not many authors who are as bold as Tomato. [Think]
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
It was the first time we met and we had nothing to hide from each other.
The plot of the first dozens of chapters is blunt and very long. The writing is good. The subject matter is quite good.
Yes, it's okay. In fact, it's difficult to combine immortality with comedy. After all, if you write about immortality, there will inevitably be partings and sadness. Even if you use some fragments to make it funny, the main tone will still be immortality, which is difficult to integrate. Some fragments outside the main tone can be funny, such as dealing with enemies. However, once a negative characteristic of immortality appears, such as the theory of longevity, it is almost impossible to be funny, because sadness and comedy cannot be both, you can only choose one. If you also add comedy, then this novel is very likely to become a knife. And because there is a contrast between comedy and tragedy, the first few chapters are fun and happy, but more than ten or hundreds of years have passed since then, so the level of this book may not be low.
Come on, big brother who writes about the emperor's uncle
Let me give an evaluation of Lao Zu first. The plot is long and flowing. Of course, the main reason is to watch my sister. I have been raised since I was a child and I just like it [laughs]. But I have to say that the description in the front is a bit too much. I hope there will be less in the later part. If the flow rate is 300,000 words, I have also seen the 300,000 words of Lao Zu. The latter is 500,000 and 800,000. I just wanted to say goodbye and gave up. The audience is there, so I will continue to review it later.
Shen Qingluan leaned gently to his right side, with a slight blush on his cheeks, and carefully got into the lapel of his clothes. His head poked out from the right collar, one to the left and the other to the right, just enough to protect both sides of Gu Changsheng's neck. This is a harem story. Harem novel, poisonous It feels like it's over. In addition to his sister, the male protagonist will also find other women in the future. I was startled at the beginning. I thought it was a Shuanghao longevity story, but I didn't expect it to be a harem story about the male protagonist. I cried to death [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][vomit] [Spit] [Spit] [Spit] [Spit] Toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic Toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic, toxic.
No, there are details. Author, have you killed the review? O(∩_∩)O
The author should be given five stars for his daily battle of wits and courage with Shen He, but it's okay based on some minor points. After all, it can be seen that they are used as sacrifices to pave the way for deepening the relationship in the future. However, it is still a minus point, but this cannot deny the author's profound background in describing the imperial way.
Support the author, it is rare to see an author who updates every day. The main reason is that the author really drives it when he has a car. There are not many authors who are as bold as Tomato. [Think]
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
It was the first time we met and we had nothing to hide from each other.
The plot of the first dozens of chapters is blunt and very long. The writing is good. The subject matter is quite good.