After transmigrating into Battle Through the Heavens, he becomes the young lord of the Spirit Clan, one of the eight ancient clans. When the Spirit Clan is wiped out, his bloodline power is stripped away, but he manages to survive.
He meets Xiao Yan as a child, and the two train and grow together.
“I’m just a avenger who has to survive.
One day, I’ll make the Spirit Clan’s requiem echo through the Soul Clan’s graveyard.”
If I keep writing like this, this book will be the second Battle of the Sky. The protagonist should have his own path!
I have read 50 chapters, and it is honestly not interesting. A little change makes no difference. It feels like re-reading the plot of the original work. Take cultivation as an example. Most of the chapters in cultivation are about the cultivation of Yao Lao and Xiao Yan. There is almost nothing about the protagonist's cultivation, and then there is a little about the alchemy. The plot has basically not changed. Can you tell me how it differs from the original plot...
Secondly, the perspective is always on Xiao Yan's side. There are some on the protagonist's side... But not much, you know. We are here to see the fanfic, not the original work from another perspective.
So at least the first 50 chapters I read are not attractive at all. How can I retain readers? Chapter 50 is already a lot, but it doesn't have any interesting features at all. No matter how exciting the later chapters are, you won't be able to see them. Bao 🤦
I can tell that as long as it is someone who has targeted Xiao Yan, the character and behavior in this book are completely written in the direction of a minor villain. For example, regarding Nalan Yanran's breakup of engagement, a few direct conversations here turned into a deliberate humiliation of Xiao Yan's father. And it's because the protagonist elevated the nature of the matter with a few words. Another example is Xiao Yu, who changed from the "hostility" caused by the "jade legs" in the original work to a shrew and villain who doesn't wait for the right thing to happen. You have to say what the protagonist has done that affects other people's characters is fine, but the protagonist has done nothing but encourage Xiao Yan.
Everything is very good, keep up the good work
Why are matryoshka dolls so interesting?
Generally. . . .
Why is it all written from Xiao Yan's perspective? The protagonist is you, and you become the foil.
If I keep writing like this, this book will be the second Battle of the Sky. The protagonist should have his own path!
I have read 50 chapters, and it is honestly not interesting. A little change makes no difference. It feels like re-reading the plot of the original work. Take cultivation as an example. Most of the chapters in cultivation are about the cultivation of Yao Lao and Xiao Yan. There is almost nothing about the protagonist's cultivation, and then there is a little about the alchemy. The plot has basically not changed. Can you tell me how it differs from the original plot... Secondly, the perspective is always on Xiao Yan's side. There are some on the protagonist's side... But not much, you know. We are here to see the fanfic, not the original work from another perspective. So at least the first 50 chapters I read are not attractive at all. How can I retain readers? Chapter 50 is already a lot, but it doesn't have any interesting features at all. No matter how exciting the later chapters are, you won't be able to see them. Bao 🤦
I can tell that as long as it is someone who has targeted Xiao Yan, the character and behavior in this book are completely written in the direction of a minor villain. For example, regarding Nalan Yanran's breakup of engagement, a few direct conversations here turned into a deliberate humiliation of Xiao Yan's father. And it's because the protagonist elevated the nature of the matter with a few words. Another example is Xiao Yu, who changed from the "hostility" caused by the "jade legs" in the original work to a shrew and villain who doesn't wait for the right thing to happen. You have to say what the protagonist has done that affects other people's characters is fine, but the protagonist has done nothing but encourage Xiao Yan.
Everything is very good, keep up the good work
Why are matryoshka dolls so interesting?
Generally. . . .
Why is it all written from Xiao Yan's perspective? The protagonist is you, and you become the foil.