
Picked Up by a Soldier Girl from the Start, I Have No Choice but to Help Her Go Pro
开局被军娘捡了只好带她打职业
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- Ongoing
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- 574k Words
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- Urban
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- Urban High Martial Arts
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- 14h ago
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- Fanqie
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The Era of Military Girls: Why are all my military wives losers? Rotating spiral ash machine The type of two-dimensional military girl is really rare. The development of the plot involves some details related to command, and the writing is relatively detailed. At the same time, there are not so many personal things, and the emotional expression is relatively restrained. Well, I brought this up because I had seen a similar theme before, and then the author "denounced Fang Qiu" in various ways. It may attract people who agree with him, but as a pure reader, I just feel that there are too many chapters and the plot is just stopped. The character creation is also relatively vivid. There is no such thing as a particularly bloody existence. The latest chapter has reached the traditional stage of manifesting saints in the human world. I wonder if it will become vulgar. So far, five stars.
A good book. If you like big scenes and melee battles between large armies, you can read it. Except for the protagonist and a very small number of elites, the tactical thinking of the others is still at the level of World War I. The tactics of fighting World War I with the equipment of World War II involve the three armies of the sea, land and air. The scenes range from a few divisions to several army groups. Because the setting is a game, there are no political and technological influences from other military cultures during the battle. The battlefield can be ever-changing, the technology is all in the late stage, and the numbers are relatively fair. You can even have the United States, the Soviet Union, Germany, Britain, Japan, and China in the same camp, and you can watch pure battles.
So far, I have seen 40 chapters that are free of thunder and tend to be pure daily life. The gameplay is very similar to an unpopular sandbox game. It is not war thunder anyway. I personally feel that the part where I take on Boss Shen is very paced. Don't stop writing about your daily routine just because no one praises you for your daily writing (probably no one praises you www Five stars does not count, so I give it four stars.
I have read half of it now. The subject matter, content and plot are okay, but... There are a lot of repetitive contents. Some people commented that AI writing is like this. I thought about it and it is true. I just wrote the first paragraph, and I have to re-write the second paragraph. The overall plot is pretty good, but it would be a bit annoying to skip repetitive content.
The author's subject matter is very good, he is very thoughtful, and it will catch the attention of people who like World War II themes. You can refer to the book "Racing Girl" by Roo Goose and write more about daily life. Fighting is fun, but daily life should also be fun. The daily life of a military girl must also be interesting.
The theme of military girls is rare, but I feel that the author's game settings are a bit not rigorous enough, because according to the author's settings, armored soldiers, a strong assault force, will definitely be useful in team competitions. Finding five specializations to make 100 will definitely have a different effect than finding five averages to make 100, and you will not necessarily lose. Then there is the troop ratio in the game. If the troop ratio is not based on attributes, my evaluation is that the military girl with extreme specialization attributes is a better single-service commander. The military ratio given by the author in the previous game does not reflect the extreme and imbalance of Hannah as an armor with extreme specialization. Next is some suggestions. The author can actually add a buff to each department according to the department he has set, and set a certain number of competition military points. For example, set a total force of 100 points for a large competition. For a large battle, set an elite infantry division with 1 point and an armored division with 5 points. Then the competition military force ratio cannot be higher than 1 of the ratio of that service in your own ability value. 50%, For example, if the infantry is 20, the armor is 95, the air force is 50, and the navy is 35, then the military girl can only spend a maximum of 15 points of 100 points on the infantry and 37.5 On the air force. However, she can also accumulate 71.25 Armor points, enriching the protagonist's military combat plan under extreme conditions, and also explaining why military girls with balanced attributes are popular, because the commander's tactics will be much richer. At the same time, the attributes should also limit the maximum number of commanders a military girl can command. Otherwise, a military girl with 20 infantry points cannot command 15 infantry divisions, which is a bit ridiculous. Of course, these are all my own suggestions and are only used as a reference for the author. Finally, let's give a high score first to support it, and adjust the score according to the content later.
It's okay, even the protagonist only has an advantage in the first one or two years at most. When the protagonist has a certain reputation in the later stage, you will be analyzed by others. At that time, your uncle can do it, and everyone else can do it. Plus, his talent is not bad. At that time, we shouldn't have to worry, and we probably won't be able to write it by then. After all, those are the only famous battles
I think this theme is quite new, a bit like the local girl who roasted goose, But the shortcomings are also obvious. First of all, the AI flavor is too strong. It starts with classic long and difficult sentences, such as "It's not... But..." And other redundant sentences. I really can't accept the electronic rice, which greatly affects the perception. Then there is too little daily life, not much interaction with the military wives, and the characterization is not outstanding.
It's pretty cool, and this book probably won't end all of a sudden, right?
Just seeing the Desert Fox salute you will make you react. Kaz's soldiers