Quick Travel: After Replacing the Evil Female Supporting Role, She Was Favored by the Group

The female protagonist got a very good sword and was forced by the system to give it to the male protagonist. The next day, the male protagonist told his senior brother that he needed a good sword to spar with each other. Oh, by the way, after the male protagonist kissed the female protagonist, he kissed the second female protagonist. The second female protagonist even sat on the male protagonist's lap with her clothes disheveled and almost kissed him. The male protagonist even yelled at the female protagonist that she was great. Everyone should go see it. I can't be the only one who is angry [laughing]

This is a sadistic article (a very sadistic article about the heroine, anyway, the first world is like this). The author's writing is very good, and the writing and plot are very natural, but it is really too sadistic and I can't stand it anymore. The heroine keeps getting hurt. It makes me feel so painful and aggrieved.

I was shocked to see such a low rating. In fact, it was a bit unfair. Although the male protagonist in the first world was very annoying and poorly written, the author's writing style is definitely better than that of more than 60% of Tomato authors (and the ending is quite good, the female protagonist soared), and the story is relatively mature. I will cut it. It's a pity that the chapter is over. The second world has been very interesting since the beginning. I give five stars to support the author who writes well. After all, I don't want to read mindless stories. In the story, everyone has changed their view of the heroine because of her changes. The heroine also changed her original destiny, which is still very interesting!

In fact, I think this is a huge scam. The system weakens the host's feelings in order not to affect the author's subsequent tasks. You find that this is done first and then played out, and the host's opinion is not listened to at all. Moreover, after weakening the feelings, it will gradually forget its original intention, saying that the story is still going on, but it never tells the host what the final full value is, which is terrible. Is the system really there to complete the plot and fulfill the original owner's wish? Let's not talk about the purpose of training the heroine into a robot that completes the task. It's like wearing the skin of the plot to absorb luck [laughs] The whole story is more like the winner writes the ending, and the position determines the role. Yeah, the character depth could be improved.

Overall, the plot is very compact and the logic is very strict. You don't just fall in love with the heroine at first sight. It is a gradual process. The heroine is also growing up, but she has a tendency to physically abuse women. In order to complete this task, the heroine suffered far more pain than he received care. The second point is the creation of the male protagonist. The overall story line is a bit like the one about chasing your wife in the crematorium, but it has become so serious that the male protagonist has done something very excessive and the female protagonist can no longer forgive it. He is not talking about something that he may suddenly wake up to. His tug of war is too long, which may be a bit difficult to accept. Overall it's pretty good. Not all mindless plots are logical. But it is true that if it is a female protagonist, it will be more uncomfortable to watch.

Just finished watching the first world. It's totally the writing style of a mature boss. The plot settings are natural and flow smoothly! The heroine has scenes with many people, but the logic is as tight as a mortise and tenon structure! Those who thought there would be no follow-up will be filled in in the future, which is very good! The heroine is hard-working, talented, and kind-hearted. She is the kind of person who can help the world even though she has great achievements. However, she does not think that she is a big shot. She just works hard and plays her various roles in a pragmatic way. I really like it! After watching the first world, I felt a sense of loss, and the withdrawal reaction was yes. Love watching! Write more! ! !

When watching it: the perspective seems to downplay the pain suffered by the heroine (actually, there are not many descriptions, I felt an inexplicable feeling when watching it), while highlighting the damage suffered by the male protagonist. My feeling is: I hope the heroine can cherish herself more. I just felt that in the first world, the heroine had a low opinion of herself. Or maybe I looked at it too quickly and swept it all away.

Why? I didn't pay attention to read that this is a new article. Not a single story is finished [crying][crying][crying]. I was so excited when I read it that my pillow was wet. Then I found that a story was not finished [crying][crying][crying]

In fact, I really think it's good, because if you take away the pain and treat it as a task, it's actually not bad. I quite like this kind of retelling of the original plot in various ways,,, yes. (The first world) And I think what hurt the heroine the most is her own growth experience, ah, of course, except for the last one who was misunderstood and exiled in a series (but I don't think anyone should be blamed for this, it is the conspiracy of the original heroine, and the male protagonist is just what he thinks he is at most (this is only used to support the abuse of the heroine) I like to see the results. The result of the first world is that the heroine becomes a god, yes I'm a moderate female dominatrix and can watch

Uh-huh, it's a bit sadistic. The male protagonist kissed the original female protagonist but said it was accidental. I can't do it anymore, but I still have to persist and watch it.

It's very interesting, but the article is too short! Not enough I read the latest chapters, and I still feel there are some problems. I think the author doesn't care what the comment section says, it's your own book, you can just write it at your own pace. I think the previous chapters were very good, but the recent chapters seem to have been very sloppy in order to reach the ending, and the holes have not been filled. The sadistic male protagonist in the end is not particularly satisfying. I hope the author can polish it more.

Very nice, I like [shy][shy][shy], I can't get enough of it

Super beautiful, highly recommended♥（＞ω)ノIIIIIIｌll×10000000♥

Big cheers for the author! It's very logical~ This feeling of slowly working hard is so good! Although Bai has read Chapter 23, I still want to continue reading~ Please update~ This is not enough~

The idea is very novel, no nonsense, very beautiful

It looks good, hehe, it tastes delicious😋

It's nice to look at and very innovative!

Very nice, recommended

Very good, the author should write more, looking forward to it

It was still acceptable before Chapter 48, right?

It's good-looking. Come on, don't be fooled. It's hard to find articles. It's even harder if it's good-looking and doesn't suit your appetite.

Highly recommended, I personally think it looks very nice. I have been following updates, but today it suddenly ended and I still feel a sense of loss. The author will release a new book soon.

The second world is quite beautiful and a true group favorite! The first one is a bit sad, and I'm looking forward to the third world as well. I hope the author will continue to update [shy]

It's very beautiful, it's not a torture novel, the author's writing is very good, believe me [shy] It would be better if the settings of the first world could be changed. There were many negative comments in the comment area, and they must have been from the point of sending the sword. I was going to be furious at the time, but now it feels better.

It's very, very good to watch. I feel that the heroine is very independent and has personality. I like it. The plot is also very attractive, but the updates are a bit slow.

Very beautiful, highly recommended. The writing is very good, I particularly like the heroine. It doesn't ruin the character, but also fits the development of the original plot. Just like this type.