Transmigrated to the Late Ming, I Use Dream of the Red Chamber to Give Chongzhen the Inside Scoop

It looks good, I would like to give you some suggestions (I don't mean to give you any writing advice, I just want to correct my mistakes): When double quotation marks are quoted in paragraphs, use a front quotation mark (") at the beginning of each paragraph, but only use a back quotation mark (") at the end of the last paragraph. The back quotation marks are omitted in the middle paragraph, and the front quotation marks are not omitted. For example, in Chapter 1, the text reads: "The incense nest has been built in March, and the swallows in the beams are too ruthless. Although you can peck at the flowers next year, you won't be able to leave your empty nest alone. " There should also be double quotes before the second paragraph: "The incense nest has been built in March, and the swallows in the beams are too ruthless. "Next year, although the hair can be pecked, it won't be easy to leave an empty nest. " If there were more paragraphs, it would look like this: "The March Incense Nest has been built, "Liang Jianyan is too ruthless. "Although the hair will be pecked next year, "But I don't think people will fall in love even if they go to Liang's empty nest." That is to say, when a paragraph is not finished and a new paragraph is started, the quotation mark (") must be in front of the new paragraph, and the final quotation mark (") is not placed until all the words are finished.

The rhythm is well controlled, there is no unnecessary plot, and it is very enjoyable to watch. The characters in the plot also have obvious growth lines. I like the heroine very much, she is courageous and courageous. Finally, I found a good novel. Hahahahahahaha. This is what I deserve after reading so many ridiculous novels. The only regret is that this article is still a small seedling. The author and teacher must keep writing. It is very interesting and interesting. I like it. (ᕑᗢᓫ∗)˒

I feel that the portrayal is quite good, but I think many people may be attracted by Dream of Red Mansions and are a little curious about whether there will be any plot related to Dream of Red Mansions later on. I think the reason why it's relatively cold is because people haven't seen any elements of Dream of Red Mansions.

Yes, this is the first time for a female channel Chongzhenwen.

It's very well written, don't let it suck at the end 😢 Please, it's very beautiful.

Now I am truly impressed by the author's writing style and ideas. As someone who agrees with the Soyin School of Dream of Red Mansions, I couldn't help but fantasize about another possibility before, whether this ending can be saved. I am very grateful to the author for writing this article. I hope you can stick to it [please update]

So it's not that I can't finish the novel! It's not that I always abandon writing easily! But it's true, I can't stand it! When you encounter such a good book, you can really read it to the end! Sometimes when I read a book and wonder if I have some disease, I always give up easily! It turns out that it wasn't me who had the problem, it was the person who wrote the book who couldn't keep me buried in it. 👀

Nice! The heroine is brave, resourceful and has a lot of character. Although it has its own system, it seems that it only gives out tasks and rewards to the heroine. There are no exaggerated cheats. It relies entirely on the knowledge and strategies of the heroine to overcome difficulties. Sometimes I can't help but worry when I see the heroine in danger. The sense of immersion is quite strong. Overall, the writing is still very good! Come on, author!

Can the boss do a sideshow in the future and let them see the history of the heroine with and without the heroine (´∀`*)

Not bad, good, clear logic, the heroine is smart, perceptive, and courageous, very good, come on, the author is great