Pirate: Yangcun! the Strongest Pirate Group!

The most amazing thing about this fan work is that the author found the perfect balance between two completely different tones of the work. The original work of Pleasant Goat and Big Big Wolf is a unit drama-style children's comedy, while One Piece is a long-blooded epic. The author cleverly transplants the core of the former "solving problems through wisdom and unity" into the latter's "dreams and bonds" framework. Pleasant Goat's strategy is no longer to tease Big Big Wolf, but to survive in the cruel sea; Big Big Wolf's invention is no longer to catch sheep, but to find his son. This sublimation of motivation allows the character to gain room for in-depth growth while retaining the original charm of his character. The work does not simply play the gimmick of "character time travel", but carefully considers the reasonable positioning and development path of each character in the world of pirates. This kind of creative attitude is really rare in fan fiction. The writing is smooth and natural, making it very comfortable to read. The dialogues are particularly vivid and the images are very strong.

In fact, I feel that it is better to use the new gray character to bring Qili. I can cut down the Qili, so that it is not considered a strange hero. The upper limit is locked to Lone Heart Wolf, otherwise the performance of the child will be outrageous.

The technology of Big Big Wolf and the setting of the Pirate World are well integrated without being too abrupt. Good work, good writing, exciting content, five-star review.

Two books, I met two Yun fan books in succession. This one's Devil Fruit is not unpalatable. The previous one exaggerated that Douluo fan can kill soul beasts and explode soul crystals. Yu Xiaogang recommended geniuses to Wuhun Palace. Zhu Zhuqing is from his mother's Notting Academy [smile] First of all, your subject matter is good, but you'd better change it. There are a lot of minor flaws, and the introduction is not followed by the sequel. Find some evaluation videos like this and take a look.

In fact, the balance of combat power is done well. The sheep and sheep are not invincible from the beginning, and the growth line is very clear. Very enjoyable to watch! It's great, it's accurate, it's emotional, it's completely mastered by the author!

The episode of Whitebeard II tortured me so much, the sheep and goats were almost wiped out, but the desperate situation broke out and it was so cool! Okay, I love watching. Not bad, Ness.

It's okay. It's pretty good. Support [like]

It's super cool to find treasures.

Beautiful sheep's horn... So she is a unicorn fruit? The characters are very well drawn, and the language, gestures, and psychological descriptions are all delicate and vivid.

Come on, author, if it doesn't work, just find those who make animations and make some animations. Once you publish them, they should be popular.

I opened one at random and it was pretty good.

It made me cry. They obviously just wanted to go home, but they were sucked into such a big whirlpool. It's beautiful, so beautiful that you can't stop watching it. I highly recommend it.

I'm so lucky to have found such a beautiful book.

A very wonderful novelist, the writing is humorous, the scenes are described in detail, the characters' inner thoughts and the logic of the story are top-notch.

I came from the bookstore and was attracted by this wonderful plot as soon as I entered. The author's writing style is so good and his imagination is so big. I couldn't stop reading it.

I liked the scene where they fought against Moria, the teamwork showed its power for the first time, and the overlord color awakening was very reasonable. The picture is full of sense, very good, I like it

The story is quite interesting and has a strong sense of immersion. It is a very interesting book.

The structure is clear, the logical thinking ability is strong, the details are well described, the types of characters are depicted very delicately, and every action is vivid

This book is really well written, it is progressive, not exaggerated, and not brainless.

His writing skills are very good and his storytelling ability is very strong.

So beautiful! Come on, author, I will support you every day.

Lazy Sheep's lucky fruit suits him so well hhhh It's so beautiful that I couldn't help but give it a five-star rating.

The Gray Wolf technology tree is full, this is a true scientist! I stayed up late to read it, and there is no doubt about the author's strength.

The plot is compact, the plot advances at a fast pace, and there is no procrastination.