Hong Kong Movie: I Support Brother D at the Beginning and the Winning Streak

You are a time traveler, why don't you know anything?

The story is written very smoothly and logically, and there is nothing too dramatic. It is considered a good level among novel authors. The only problem is to write dialogues in Yue, which is friendly to southerners but unfriendly to northerners. Nowadays, the Internet depends on one's stance, and separatism and discrimination are prevalent. Putting aside the opposition, some words feel like they are created by combining Yue and Mandarin, such as "understanding", "wuwan", etc., Which makes me confused whether the author is a northerner learning Yue.

There aren't too many bad points at the moment. I personally feel that I can still continue to follow up. After all, there are too few people summoned by the Tomato Harbor Sect. I have basically finished watching some of them, so as long as there are no big problems, I can continue to watch it [laughing]

The writing is okay, but other people's books are too fast-paced. Yours is too slow [Laughing and crying] It doesn't feel like Hong Kong dramas are trying to grab territory. There are too many useless plots. Hongtai troubles the protagonist and asks Puffing Chicken for help. Is the correct approach for Hongtai to talk about numbers? He Liansheng tens of thousands of people, Chen Mei casually gives some benefits, and the protagonist will cry if He Liansheng doesn't help.

It's okay, but I don't understand Cantonese and it's too hard to read.

The writing is good and the plot is okay. It is written by Christine Yang. It meets the xp, but the update is a bit slow. The lines are mostly in Cantonese. If you don't mind, don't enter.

The author's writing is okay, although some Cantonese is a bit unfamiliar. There are also not too many irrelevant movies and TV shows.

You can see for yourself, it looks pretty good to me.

Encouragement to the author, come on

Isn't it true that Chuji was maimed? He has broken so many bones in just a few days and can he still walk through it?

The writing is actually okay, but it always lacks the feeling of a living person, which makes me feel like I am completing the level.

This is the first time I've seen a book on Tomato that doesn't contain poisonous spots. Maybe the only small drawback is that I don't understand the plot.

Just don't use Cantonese.

Looks good at the Hong Kong comprehensive circuit

After reading Chapter 13, I hope the author will not make the protagonist too powerful personally. After all, this book is about brothers.

It's very well written. Why is it only 5 o'clock?

Compared with others, it is relatively novel

It's rare to find a good book

This book is really good. I read it in one sitting. It's just too short. I've already saved it. The author should write it quickly.

Not bad, not very brainless. The style is more cautious in the front, but conflicts often occur in the back. It is recommended to focus more on development.

It's pretty good. The characters' IQs are all online. The plot is reasonable and the logic is smooth. But the updates are too slow [smile]

It's well written, unlike other systems that become invincible as soon as they come out and want to go to heaven.

A very good book, except that the word count is a bit short, the rest is fine.