[Quick travel + snatch the male protagonist + immersive role play + no fixed cp]
There are always some supporting characters in the world who can't get enough of the male protagonist. Even if they sacrifice their souls, they still want to get that person.
Lin Shuran, the gold medal host of the game, is best at playing with people's hearts. She accepted one "obsession order" after another, taking the place of those unwilling souls to win the male protagonists they wished for.
Use the most perfect camouflage for the most precise hunting. Never failed.
[World One: Roommate's Love Brain Boyfriend]
She felt so distressed that her roommate was squandering her boyfriend's affection wantonly, so she had no choice but to do it for her.
[World 2: Twin Sister's Fiancé]
My sister's fiancé is handsome and gentle. Fortunately, my sister loves her sister and is willing to give her everything.
[World Three: Husband's Brother in the Chronicle]
If her husband can't give her the good life she wants, then she can only ask her eldest brother for help.
[World 4: The dumped ex-boyfriend]
After not seeing each other for many years, my first love boyfriend is getting married. Sorry, this is her own money, not for marriage.
[World 5: Women disguise themselves as men in elite colleges]
Once you break into her world, you are not allowed to leave. Even if you are of the same sex, you can only fall in love with her and then humbly pray for her love.
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Reader comments
Mark, after watching the updated two worlds, the relationship development is a bit fast, but this is a fast time travel with multiple male protagonists. Due to the space limit, it is not a big problem. The male protagonists' feelings for the female protagonist all have a reason, so it will not appear abrupt.
There aren't any weird points, but there are two small points that I think you can pay attention to (How did I start the whole writing guide)
1️⃣The puppy-shaped male protagonist doesn't feel three-dimensional enough, he's a bit of a tool, he falls in love with him as soon as he comes, and he still loves him more than necessary, so there should be less provocation and pulling.
2️⃣Some small bugs are very uncomfortable. For example, in the second world, the heroine went abroad for two years and it was as if she had gone to another world. She did not meet her family. The heroine's sister was engaged. The heroine was set as the group's favorite and she was not aware of it. The sweetheart who loved her so much would not fly out of the country to meet the heroine for two years. If you want to know the news about the heroine, you have to go to the heroine's home frequently.
Nice! I didn't like the first world very much, I didn't like the female supporting character in it, and it was a bit dark, but the second world was very nice! The heroine has a great personality and is so cute! Just want to be pampered by everyone! [Blowing kiss][shy]
It smells good. I love the dark and paranoid little villain of the heroine. I feel that the main text is much more surprising than the introduction and comments. I didn't plan to read the comments at first. The result is a hundred times better than the kind of text where you can guess the plot direction and clichéd characters with your eyes closed. There is contrast, tension and 🚗🚗
The disguise is just a hunting suit I put on casually
The second your heart begins to throb
You are destined to fall into the web I weaved
Listen, that heartbeat that messes up the rhythm
───is trembling in its submission
I have just finished reading the first world. It is quite interesting and has no obvious surprises. It is relatively simple. Who knows that after deleting 10 books and saving 8 of them, I finally have a sense of redemption to keep up with the bookshelves. [Cover face]
I like you so much
I like it so much (◕ˇ∀ˇ◕),,′
I really love the author's writing, it's very delicious and I ate it beautifully｡:.ﾟヽ(*´∀`)ﾉﾟ.:｡
Super beautiful, I really like it😘
Not bad, worth a look
Very beautiful and delicious😋
Originally I wanted to be a writer, but because it was so beautiful.
It's so exciting. I feel it's so exciting. The first world
I think it's good, but it's just a personal preference. [Smile][smile][smile]
Not bad, but the heroine was written as a dark little mouse at the beginning. It scared me. I thought the heroine was very humble. In fact, after her true nature was revealed, the heroine took control.
Not bad, great, the sister in the second world is super nice [shy]
It's super beautiful. Great author. I will always support you.
That's awesome, the writing is so awesome
Damn, can't you post a screenshot of your blog upside down? [Shy][Shy][Shy] I really want to see it
Mark, after watching the updated two worlds, the relationship development is a bit fast, but this is a fast time travel with multiple male protagonists. Due to the space limit, it is not a big problem. The male protagonists' feelings for the female protagonist all have a reason, so it will not appear abrupt. There aren't any weird points, but there are two small points that I think you can pay attention to (How did I start the whole writing guide) 1️⃣The puppy-shaped male protagonist doesn't feel three-dimensional enough, he's a bit of a tool, he falls in love with him as soon as he comes, and he still loves him more than necessary, so there should be less provocation and pulling. 2️⃣Some small bugs are very uncomfortable. For example, in the second world, the heroine went abroad for two years and it was as if she had gone to another world. She did not meet her family. The heroine's sister was engaged. The heroine was set as the group's favorite and she was not aware of it. The sweetheart who loved her so much would not fly out of the country to meet the heroine for two years. If you want to know the news about the heroine, you have to go to the heroine's home frequently.
Nice! I didn't like the first world very much, I didn't like the female supporting character in it, and it was a bit dark, but the second world was very nice! The heroine has a great personality and is so cute! Just want to be pampered by everyone! [Blowing kiss][shy]
It smells good. I love the dark and paranoid little villain of the heroine. I feel that the main text is much more surprising than the introduction and comments. I didn't plan to read the comments at first. The result is a hundred times better than the kind of text where you can guess the plot direction and clichéd characters with your eyes closed. There is contrast, tension and 🚗🚗
The disguise is just a hunting suit I put on casually The second your heart begins to throb You are destined to fall into the web I weaved Listen, that heartbeat that messes up the rhythm ───is trembling in its submission
I have just finished reading the first world. It is quite interesting and has no obvious surprises. It is relatively simple. Who knows that after deleting 10 books and saving 8 of them, I finally have a sense of redemption to keep up with the bookshelves. [Cover face]
I like you so much I like it so much (◕ˇ∀ˇ◕),,′
I really love the author's writing, it's very delicious and I ate it beautifully｡:.ﾟヽ(*´∀`)ﾉﾟ.:｡
Super beautiful, I really like it😘
Not bad, worth a look
Very beautiful and delicious😋
Originally I wanted to be a writer, but because it was so beautiful.
It's so exciting. I feel it's so exciting. The first world
I think it's good, but it's just a personal preference. [Smile][smile][smile]
Not bad, but the heroine was written as a dark little mouse at the beginning. It scared me. I thought the heroine was very humble. In fact, after her true nature was revealed, the heroine took control.
Not bad, great, the sister in the second world is super nice [shy]
It's super beautiful. Great author. I will always support you.
That's awesome, the writing is so awesome Damn, can't you post a screenshot of your blog upside down? [Shy][Shy][Shy] I really want to see it