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It's good-looking, and the male and female protagonists are very vivid and emotional. They redeem each other and are the collision of two different thoughts and souls from different eras. The female protagonist does not forcefully change the historical view of class. It is a short story but the content is very exciting, and it also points out the shortcomings of this systematic setting. There are some areas that still need to be improved. First, for example, are some parts of the content in the wrong order or written a little inconsistently (after the female protagonist kills and is caught by the male protagonist, why is she already with the male protagonist before but still entangled in the sibling relationship after she comes back)? Secondly, the rescue tyrant system appears too hastily. It was fine at the beginning, but it appears at the end to save the male protagonist, which is very inconsistent. The third male protagonist's thoughts change a little faster, especially in the modern episode, but overall it's okay. The fourth female protagonist wants the male protagonist to get better or change but later falls in love with the male protagonist. The emotional control is okay. The transition of emotions and thoughts is very natural. But I think the relationship between the male and female protagonists who have been separated for so long and then get together later is a bit abrupt. I think there should be more experiences to consolidate the foundation of this relationship. Okay, although there are some shortcomings in the author's book, I have to say that the author writes emotions very well and naturally, and the overall storyline is also good, so it is worth reading. If you like this kind of book, you can really read it.

A very good novel. Although the country is destroyed, it still has the determination to restore it. When the male and female protagonists became prisoners of the Qin Dynasty, they redeemed each other. The female protagonist taught the male protagonist many things. When the male protagonist killed someone for the first time, he said to the female protagonist: Sister, I am afraid, I... Am I wrong? The heroine will say: You are right, what is wrong is this world. For the male protagonist, home is where the female protagonist is. Later, the male protagonist slowly grows up, from a prisoner to a general and then to the king of a country. He becomes violent because of what happened when he was a child and wants to kill people. But only when the female protagonist is there, the male protagonist will restrain himself and change. The writing is similar to the original historical drama. The author wrote it really well.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhs me writing is really good, holy shit, it's beautiful

The first time I read the orthopedics article, I was very surprised. It was so good. I feel like my words can't describe my feelings. I suddenly realized it at the finale. The twist is really surprising and the twist is really sweet. But some people may not like this setting, but no matter what, you may fall in love if you keep reading...[Shy][Shy][Shy][Shy] If you still don't like it after a little more time, I can only say that everyone has their own preferences for radish and greens.

A very interesting ancient novel. The female protagonist fell in love with the male protagonist before she traveled through time. The male and female protagonists redeem each other! Sweet love story about Shuangjie! Very very beautiful! The ending is also very sweet. I wish our heroine Lin Qingyue and hero Murong Chong live happily together forever! Bless! Throw flowers!

This author's writing about historical figures is a bit interesting. His writing style is super good. God knows how rare it is in Tomato.

It's beautiful, the male and female protagonists are very natural in their descriptions.

I have been very interested in this period of history before, but I didn't expect to find this book and the writing is so good! Be sure to continue updating!

Very good I think the highlight is writing about other time-travelers (different time-travelers) The final outcome is reversed and wrote a modern follow-up.

Woohoo, when will my little couple be sweet? It's so cruel [crying][crying][crying][crying]

Super nice. The writing is super good. The plot doesn't drag. Really love it! ! ! ! Ps: Can you order more🥩?

Delicious😋 Love to see the bones of siblings

The capital letters are super nice (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤[Cool]

Super pretty, but too short [Adoration]

The flowers are sprinkled at the end, it's beautiful.

It's so good. Don't be be in the author's finale.

It's good-looking and makes you want to keep watching.

I feel it's very touching and beautiful [send heartfelt message]

It feels very good. It's my first time to try this kind of book. It's very amazing. The characters are rich. I like the heroine's character. Treasure [Blow Kiss]

The plot is relatively new. After reading it, it was a bit short and I felt it was pretty good. If it had been longer, it might not be as good.