Born with the Dao Seed, I Cultivated in Silence for a Century to Become a Celestial Immortal

I saw the latest 22 chapters. It is a traditional fantasy novel with a system panel and no tasks. The content is not bad. There are no old tricks of making enemies at the beginning. The protagonist only wants to cultivate immortality. The author writes two updates a day, a total of 9,000 words. I give it a five-star praise. I feel like I'm exaggerating too early, and it's going to be 4,000 words every day, and the operation of giving my enemies a way out in Chapter 34 is really hard to understand.

It's short and very interesting. The protagonist is devoted to spiritual practice. Chapter 34: The protagonist suddenly becomes the Holy Father and slips away. He has such a good heart. Please tell me earlier.

It's okay, nothing serious, and the writing is pretty good, but the data and typos are not rigorous. The data in the first few lines can be written wrong every few lines. There are quite a few typos and omissions. The author was reminded and did not change it...

I remembered that the setting of Yunzhuan should be based on the novel "Dao Dao Zheng Feng". The advanced exercises in this novel are all written in a special kind of writing. You must first master the literacy skills before you can practice the exercises. Of course, literacy is also closely related to the formations and talismans in the book. In short, if you want to practice to a high level, you must first master Li Wen, which is very similar to the protagonist who needs to master Yunzhuan at the beginning.

I would like to suggest that you check the quality of your characteristics before writing each time. When Insight first came out, it was written as blue quality, but after a few pictures it inexplicably dropped to green.

Classical fairy tales, both in terms of practice system and writing style, are very classical. If you are tired of the current style, you can give it a try. It is a poisonous book that can be regarded as edible. Some writing methods and routines are now outdated, but these classic routines are still enjoyable to read. To be honest, it is better than some unintelligible innovations in some books.

Judging from the looks of it so far, this book should generally be regarded as leaning towards the traditional classical fairy tale cultivation genre, and also incorporates some elements of refreshing writing. Personally, I think it's quite comfortable to watch, and there's no hostility at all, unlike some novels that give people a strong sense of resentment and hostility. There is currently no cp, no ambiguity, and there is a panel, but it can still be regarded as a genius. This talent can barely be regarded as cultivating immortality. To cultivate immortality, one must cultivate the mind, and talent, understanding and character are indispensable. However, strictly speaking, this should be regarded as cultivation, not immortality. It's a pity that there are too few traditional fairy tales and cultivators, and even fewer geniuses. Maybe it's because it's difficult to write such novels because I don't have any experience or insights. Everywhere is the kind of mafia online game where people fight monsters and upgrade to become immortals. Their cultivation is constantly increasing, resources are being grabbed everywhere, and their mood is not at all. They are not struck to death by lightning, probably because that world is about to end.

In this era of pursuing instant stimulation, you choose to feed the story with patience and let it grow naturally with its own growth rings and pulse. This is not only respect for craftsmanship, but also trust in readers' intelligence and emotions. Thank you for building these worlds, allowing all the gazes and sighs that have nowhere to stop in reality to finally find a home that they can land on and understand.

It's okay, but some of the plots are quite abrupt (not much, tolerable) and not as toxic as the reviews say, so far. Readers from the old era were not yet able to accept that they were on an AI ship.

Yes, the writing is acceptable, the plot is out of the ordinary, and the most important thing is that it is a brand new self-created version of the training system.