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Although I have only written a little bit, the story line, rhetoric, scene description, and picture structure are not new to me at all. This typical plot of being rich and then buying things to attract girls can be said to be easy to follow. I look forward to the plot unfolding later [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Please update]

The writing is very immersive and real, as if you were on the scene. This is good writing. When you have money, you don't spend it randomly. After your life improves, you start to do things that will benefit others. This kind of value is also very rare. There are just too many beauties and too many peach blossoms, which makes it look a bit awkward. It doesn't have to be about a beauty. You can also write about a confidant who understands you, a teacher who inspires you, or a righteous friend who helped you after you accidentally fell into trouble. Human emotions are diverse and should not be limited to men and women. It's a casual and refreshing article with fairly positive energy.

I have read about a hundred chapters before commenting. The first few chapters are quite satisfactory, but the latter chapters are really good, especially on business development and interpersonal relationships. I feel that the author should have done this in real life. I hope I can keep writing at this level. There should be more chapters. One chapter a day is not enough. Come on [Like]

Two days later, I read the latest chapter. There are three major turning points so far. The first is the trial and caution when I first got the system. The second turning point is the wanton behavior after having a large amount and doing what every man wants to do but dare not do. The third turning point is the action of realizing the idea of benefiting the people after having a career. The three heroines in the article each have their own direction. Because they have different starting points and different situations, Qu Waner has more of a gentle and gentle sister-like feeling. Ya, wait is a girl who has her own ideas and moves forward bravely for her dreams. Song Yuanyuan started out as a girl who had no ideas and just wanted to be loved. Although she didn't understand what love was, later she found her own direction due to the brief separation from the male protagonist and the guidance, and became a girl who can accompany the male protagonist to a higher level. So far, this book has broken the template of the powerful novels I have read for a long time. The characters are vividly portrayed. The author please don't be unfinished and the writing is really good! ! @ Continuing to follow up on the review, I don't know how many outlines the author has. At present, the short-term plot of the story should be the struggle with overseas capital. The business methods are clear and make people have the desire to keep looking forward to it. However, this plot is a bit too complicated. I feel that the confrontation with overseas capital is over within 10 chapters. Come on, author.

... I read the first few chapters well. I have seen the world, and I am not the kind of poor loser who earns 3,000 yuan a month to write cool novels [laughing]. So far, the writing style is acceptable. I need to read more.

The first few pictures looked very ordinary, but slowly something started to pick up in the later ones. The logic was clear and the writing was okay! Objectively speaking, give it a 4 stars, cheers!

Is it possible that after the protagonist died of starvation, his parents burned him paper money? The reason why these tasks are so simple is because he has a last wish that has not yet been completed, so he stayed in the earthly world, and these are all to dispel his resentment and send him to reincarnation, which is why the story in this book was created.

It's not overly bloated, and the characters are well developed.

It's pretty good-looking. Although it's a cool article, it's not mindless.

The mid-term business war is very detailed and real enough. The problem is that I first came here to read a cool article about punching and kicking an old classmate who was a gold digger. What you wrote now is very detailed and true, and it's not cool enough. See if there is a way to balance the fun rhythm with the real and specific details. [Like][Like]

The writing is pretty good The author has a lot of ideas about the life of the rich based on his own thinking, which are not very appropriate. Come on~

It's okay. There were a few minor pitfalls in the early stage, but it got better later on.

The writing is quite good, but it would be better if it had less AI flavor. The author has a good grasp of the outline, but in fact, the human flavor of the text should be improved.

A novel angle: Jack Ma said to a dozen of the world's richest men behind him, "This is our new game, let's see how a poor person uses this wealth after getting it [sneaky laugh]

Very interesting, good, recommended, worth watching.

8 Points. In fact, it is a business novel that is cloaked in a life-style novel. The business war is interspersed with some daily life. The protagonist's mentality of being poor and getting rich at the beginning and the original intention of founding the company are particularly well described. However, it is slightly more repetitive in the middle and later stages. Difficulties are encountered and solved, but the methods of various capitals are slightly different. Moreover, the correspondence between characters and events in the later period is very confusing. It may be that I was warned so I made major changes. Otherwise, it is worth reading during the book shortage period.

The author's writing style is very good and his description of things is very detailed. Come on

It shouldn't have such a low rating. It's a refreshing novel that is underestimated by many people. It's very well written in terms of plot direction and character portrayal.

How should I put it? Maybe my comment will not be seen, but I still want to say it from the bottom of my heart. The emotional description of the characters makes me feel like my 26-year-old female tenant.

Much better than other system writing, no routines, and comfortable to read [][][] Much better than other gods, but the author is too slow to update

It looks good, but the score is so low.

Write faster. Author of Ma Liu. Run quickly.

I also want to have a Tongzi brother like this🥺

It's very interesting, a classic and refreshing article. I have some material for my dreams tonight.

The detailed description and psychological description of the characters are both good, paving the way for reasonable logic for the characters' actions!

This is a professional author. The writing is sharp, the emotions are well laid out, and the emotional transitions are excellent. He is a rare master in the Internet literary circle and a rare masterpiece.

The writing is delicate, especially the description of the early days of starting a business, which feels like a similar experience.

I don't know why the rating is so low. I've read half of this book and it's pretty good among cool articles.

Okay, that's it. It's cool.

Really good, well written