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Our Lady of the Sky Island, comments and author's reply (he is still an 8-year-old child)

Please support me, I really like the Pirate Thunder Fruit fic. The second fruit greatly reduces the points. To be honest, the setting of two souls in one body has not been written well. For example, for physical and soul issues, there is no need to fuse the fruit into one to increase numerical talents. It can be directly written about the fusion between life and death or under special circumstances (fulfilling the last wish, etc.). Especially in terms of fruits, it is best to directly make thunder or create your own phantom beast species with thunder attributes. It feels a bit unnecessary to make thunder and eat phantom beasts in one. If the talent is really not enough, it can be solved by combining the soul into one plus understanding or using the physical body to use the fruit itself as a bonus in addition to the thunder-like body forging to solve the problem.

In fact, it's not bad. Why do so many people criticize it? It's logical. The front is okay, but the back is very smooth, there is no main line, and there is nothing I dare not do.

It's pretty good, but it's a little bit irritating. It's a free novel, so I can't ask for much. I heard that only four stars are considered for the rating, which is a bit low.

The overall writing is good, especially because the author has a good grasp of the overall combat power, unlike some fans who insist on grabbing all the best. However, since the protagonist is invincible very early on, a large part of the story of defeating monsters, upgrading, and fighting is borne by Lu Qi. However, the author only gave an ancient species out of restraint, which resulted in the fact that the main character in the battle part made readers feel unsatisfied. I hope the author can reconsider it.

The introduction element attracted me to it. In addition, I skipped directly to Chapter 40 and started reading, which felt pretty good. The previous part is basically about the contact with some original characters (Kyuji Island, Rayleigh, Baccarat). At this time, the protagonist is almost as strong as the deputy. Is there a nanny flow behind? Then I'm leaving. After all, the only pirates who can write are those who are invincible and have to develop their power to become nannies. I understand, but I don't want to see it

Not having two souls in one body and multiple female protagonists should be the highlight. Is it possible for the protagonist to have another soul behind the author? I finally found a subject I like, and whether I will accept the luck fruit. I think it is her on the cover. I think her devil fruit has great potential. If the luck is very good, wouldn't it be like picking up good things casually?

It was okay and there were no comments about the clone poison, which is that the protagonist has a blank soul that can switch and control the body without sleeping for 24 hours, and then after eating the second phantom beast species, the soul of the blank is probably occupied by the will of the devil fruit, just like the awakening of the animal system.

The writing is quite good, why is the comment section so abstract, and why is it posted on the clone? I didn't see the clone, so it's basically not that big of a poison. Did the author offend someone? There are a lot of people in this comment section talking about one body and two souls. Find a reason to become a dual-fruit ability user, a lot of people say this. Isn't it fused later? Before the fusion, I didn't touch a single woman. A lot of people still talk about one body and two souls, with multiple female protagonists [laughing and crying] [OK]

Values are consistent. Update quickly. Those women sailed to the Holy Land on their first voyage. It's really a revelation. I can't stand it anymore.

Not bad. Compared to those inexplicable fruits, the Pangu Fruit and the Golden Crow Fruit are much stronger. This one is at least within the framework of One Piece. Those inexplicable fruits are just like Guan Gong and Qin Qiong. If there are too many private designs, why write a fanfic if there are so many private designs? Just create original ones.

It's pretty good-looking. Why do so many people say it doesn't look good? There are too many female protagonists. This is not an ordinary number. Alas, the setting is quite good, but there is no main plot. I am tired of looking at it.

Come on, set the novel thunder fruit and the original fantasy beast dragon fruit.

Yes, the protagonist relies on his own strength to develop step by step. Not too hypocritical, follow up

Everything else is good, but the three generals are so strengthened. In the movie version, Kizaru can't even react to the red hair's attack. I heard Kaido and the male protagonist Kizaru pass by alone. I remember seeing somewhere before that two generals can contain three to defeat one Yonko.

Still looks good,

It's okay to see the back

Why is the rating so low? I've read dozens of pirate fanfics and I quite like them. Please update as soon as possible. Author One Piece fanfic, Phantom Beast Breeds, collecting Yamato, killing the Deserter King, Momonosuke, the most important thing is to go with what you want, be more domineering and show off, don't treat the Straw Hats specially, it won't look ugly when written, it's okay to be a little more cheating, I really like this book, come on

The plot and story are very well written.

It's pretty cool. Please rate it.

Come on come on come on come on

Just barely okay

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

The author should have a side job [Thinking]

Does the protagonist have a domineering and domineering look?

Hehehe, [laughing evilly] I like it, come on author

Okay, okay, I just don't know what it will transform into

The objective evaluation is 4 stars, but now there are too many people and machines, so 5 stars represents support.

It's pretty cool. No big problem. I just want to know if Hancock's slave mark has been removed (I really want to know if it hasn't been removed and it feels really uncomfortable).

It's really good. It's the author. You should give the protagonist another fruit [laughing and crying]. Two fruits are not enough. Give me another one, preferably the Momo fruit [laughing evilly]