I like Sukuna, so I looked around the platform for some good fanfiction. But I couldn't find a single story that suited my taste, so I decided to write one for fun. The plot is fictional, and any resemblance is purely coincidental. Please forgive any OOC moments. Feel free to share your opinions; if I see them, I might make changes (￣.￣). Also, I don't want to treat readers like idiots, so there's no brain-storage room in this book. You'd better keep your brains with you >ᴗoಣ
Here's what this book is about: At the end of the original manga, Sukuna says that if he gets another life, perhaps he could live differently. The idea behind this book is to write a Sukuna who isn't rotten to the core. But I'm inexperienced, so for now I'm writing him as someone playing a role. If I get the chance, I might write that version in my next book.
Okay, okay. Although I am a newbie, I feel that the writing is very good. There is not much poison. Everyone is talking about the lack of scenes of the protagonist. I think you can change the introduction and add a double protagonist. If you don't plan to let Shen Yan be the protagonist, add a fake one in front of the double. Come on, author.
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The writing is good, but the protagonist Su Nuo has too few scenes, and it feels like Shen Yan is the protagonist 🙂
When I first started watching it, my first reaction was that it felt like the Chinese version of Spell Return, where the uncle's combat power was suppressed.
It's pretty good, but the protagonist could have had more roles.
It's interesting, but as the author said, it would be even more interesting if Su Nuo himself came, but it's not enough for Su Nuo at the moment.
Okay, okay, it looks pretty.
You're the author, I approve of you [Admiration]
The book is very good, the subject matter is interesting, but the writing is not very good, I hope the author can improve it more
I don't know what to say, it's quite beautiful.