Traveling Through the World of Cultivating Immortals: Starting with a Recipe for Creation

I suddenly understood a truth. Some people actually don't care about what you write. They just want to find a place to have fun and wallow. It happens that you are unlucky and catch up with you. I went to see the people who wrote negative reviews for me. Their historical reviews basically gave negative reviews to all novels. At this time, I felt relieved. Besides, some people are really outrageous. They obviously don't understand it, but! Because they don't understand it, they must slander them. This is no different from Lafayette who said that cameras absorb souls and locomotives are monsters. Some people are really outrageous. I wonder about the novel platform. Isn't there only readers and authors? Where do the bosses and secretaries come from? Do I have to customize a novel for him? The plot must develop according to what he said? Otherwise, it is not well written? Can people really be so superior? If I feel that the writing is not good, then the negative reviews will be the end of it, and I have to show it off. Brothers, you can check out the comment section and tell me if my writing is bad, which one is objective? And I found that some people consciously find negative reviews and like them. Thank you @ for letting me see this paragraph, and thank @ Guyyan for writing this paragraph. Of course, the last paragraph is from my own home.

The author's writing style is very good, and the framework is very good. There are no immortal cultivators who have never broken up with each other, they are normal people cultivating immortals. Based on my 12,000 hours of reading experience, I tell all fellow Taoists to use it with confidence and it will definitely become popular. Comments are early. The main character's name is Li Yuanxi. The name of the little princess on the Internet becomes more and more outrageous as it goes on. If you look carefully, 90% of the novels are female-channeled novels. I spent a lot of money to buy them. 9.2 Comments. The first interview should be a very capable writer. Later, the female author took over.

Absolutely underrated book 1. This kind of heart-warming relationship between teacher and student is definitely a highlight, and it retains a touch of warmth in the cruel world of cultivation. 2. The setting of Goldfinger is also very good, not too old-fashioned, rather innovative and logically reasonable. 3. The character of the protagonist has two lifetimes of sobriety, insight into human nature, and a hint of kindness in his perseverance. He is not a virgin, but a real image of flesh and blood, who can gain a foothold in the world of immortality and be kind to those close to him. 4. Finally, and what I think is the most important point, the emotional foreshadowing is particularly good, and the gradually warming up feelings are very comfortable. I think there can be more female protagonists, as long as each female protagonist's unique characteristics are maintained. In terms of character, I currently think the three potential heroines are well differentiated. The gentle senior sister must become the first heroine. My suggestion is to add a unique and powerful development potential to each heroine, or a strong background, or a strong talent, or create a new system or something. For example, that senior sister uses pill fire as an offensive technique. The combination of Yin evil power and righteous spiritual power may become a great talent in the later stage. In this way, the female protagonist will be strong enough to truly accompany the male protagonist and grow together. We must add more heroines, but we must ensure that each heroine maintains a unique character, unique potential, and unique emotional line. When it's time to accept a girl, you must accept her, and you must not leave any traces of ink.

It's well written and enjoyable to read. It's just that there was no finishing blow or counter-kill when seizing the treasure. Also, it's well written. I hope I don't want the heroine for the time being, especially the senior sister! As a time traveler, all the goals must be to achieve immortality, including refining weapons, drawing talismans, refining elixirs, and forming formations. These are the processes of becoming an immortal. Don't because of some readers! If you don't like this, don't write like this. Don't be taboo, everything is for the purpose of becoming an immortal. The rest are all methods and professions on the road to becoming an immortal. It is best to be able to create your own Five Elements Cultivation Technique in the later stage. With this plug-in, I believe you should be able to create your own Five Elements Cultivation Technique.

It's the first time I've commented after reading so little. I'm currently at Chapter 115 and I've just read Chapter 7, but these 7 chapters are really well written, and the author's writing style is to my liking. And I like multiple heroines, I'm not a believer in single heroines Secondly, the author is very active, which is a plus point Finally, in fact, my rating for these seven chapters can only be 4 stars, but, again, if you have the ability, you write it, the pen is given to you, you write it, it is really given to you, and you are not good anymore, don't just talk about it. If you haven't tried something yourself, how do you know that others are not as good as you? Also, the author didn't give me 1 cent, so some people should stop shouting under my comments. If the subsequent plot is not good, I will still change the rating. There is another saying, a few poisonous points are not bad, nothing is perfect in the world

It's not like the frivolous novels nowadays. The writing is pretty good, maybe a little bit poisonous, but I don't think it's harmful at all. I didn't pay for it, I really think it's pretty good, and the content is not cliche. If I have to say it, I remember that the transition scenes are a little stiff (it's my own fault). I have been reading novels for more than ten years. Although I have not read any literary works, I have probably read all the novels of this era. I also tried to write a novel myself, but unfortunately I couldn't express everything in my mind through writing. Besides, the descriptions in this book are really delicate. However, the pace is indeed a bit slow. I practiced qi at 5 levels a year or at 4 levels. Now I have been practicing at 8 levels for at least 7-8 years. According to the host's setting, practicing will widen the muscles and Dantian. In this case, the subsequent practicing should be faster and faster. Although the conversion is only 20%, maybe the protagonist has a lot of experience? So this is the arrangement? From the author's message, you can probably guess that the protagonist should have accumulated a lot of experience in the past 50 chapters to get the opportunity to practice Qi 13 or 14. No one has ever broken through the foundation before, and successfully broke through the supreme foundation [laughs] So I personally recommend this book! [Laughing]

It is a rare treasure. You need to calm down and read this article because it is relatively slow to get started and there are not so many bloody plots. It officially enters the main line and starts with the battle between good and evil. I have read Chapter 163 so far. I feel a bit weird when I read Volume 2. The style is different from Volume 1. Volume 1 mainly talks about the protagonist's growth in the sect and getting along with his brothers. Volume 2 has not been finished yet, so I am not sure. In short, the protagonist has come to a place where there are no immortal cultivators. The reason why Volume 2 is strange is that the protagonist is a little out of character. I can see the protagonist's contempt and ridicule for mortals. , The original sentence is "The ridicule is not directed at the two people, but stems from the natural overlooking of the mortal warriors by the immortal cultivators." It is a bit uncomfortable. If it is Volume 1, the protagonist will not be like this. In his past words, even the immortal cultivators were once mortals.

The pace is slow, but the sentences are fine-grained, the descriptions are specific, and the sense of substitution is strong. It is not as fast-paced as Shuangwen, which allows people to get emotions quickly, but it has a unique calmness. Maybe it can be regarded as a breath of fresh air in the novel. [Learned][Eat melon]

The opening is eye-catching and the plot is very interesting. I want to know how it will be slapped in the face later.

The structure is clean, the writing is superb, and the sense of substitution is good!

Mortal Beginning, this simple fairy tale is my favorite

Proficient in all the arts of cultivating immortals! Like it, I want to see the protagonist crush it all the way

Hahahahahahaha! Done! Done! Master Tao, I am done! Hahahahahahahahaha 🤪💀☠️👽👹👺🤖~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This awesome book can actually be rated 9 or above, so good, so good, no matter what，，，~~~~~~~~~~

Finally, someone wrote about cultivating immortals in a realistic way. When it is time to cultivate, you should practice immortality but don't forget about life along the way. How can there be so many grand scenes in the world? Most of the time it's just ordinary, and it's great to practice immortality in the middle of life [OK]! It was also easy for us to read, unlike most other immortal cultivation novels. The protagonist does not seem to have come to this world to live. He seems to have come to complete a task and is in a hurry to be reincarnated [smile]. He is practicing hard every day, either in a martial arts battle or on the way to a martial arts battle. I don't know what's so interesting about that? I'm tired of it, it's always the same routine.

The writing is very good, unlike some novels where after reading one chapter you feel like everything else is terrible. The writing style of this book is so comfortable to read, and the development is very smooth. The only shortcoming is that I discovered it when I updated more than 100 chapters [crying]

The plot of this article has ups and downs and is full of tension. The portrayal of the protagonist is okay, flesh and blood, and conforms to some of my fantasies about the world of immortality. The plot has heart-warming moments of joy, as well as sad moments that make people sad. I really like the feeling of the protagonist improving his cultivation step by step. I look forward to the plot of meeting my senior sister again in the future. I hope the author will work harder [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

I think the protagonist of this book, including the supporting characters, are real people. Many other books I feel are not so humane, or are too dark and have a bit of extreme hatred of society. Because the composition is a novel, I just read it to watch him relax. If the novel is full of violence, I will feel very uncomfortable after reading it. Don't talk about what kind of society this is. Realistic, it is because society may be too realistic that I am willing to see this kind-hearted protagonist in novels. The novel itself is also a storybook. If it is too realistic, I think you should read the kind of bitter love book instead of this kind of novel. Many times I think this kind-hearted protagonist and a human protagonist are quite good. I hope the author will write according to his own outline. Come on author! ! !

Yes, the author's setting is deeply rooted in my heart. In all things, there is no yin, no yang, no rise. They are mutually reinforcing and restraining each other. Just like the classification of spiritual roots in the author's book, although the Heavenly Spiritual Root and Double Spiritual Root are cultivated quickly, their mana reserves are less than those of the mixed spiritual roots of the same level. Although the mixed spiritual roots are slow in cultivation, their mana is deeper than those of the same level. Mortals, their lifespan is not long, and they cannot cultivate earth-shaking power, but their feelings are the most passionate. In fact, I feel that in the author's world view, the three levels of genius, ordinary people, and mortals have their own ways to achieve freedom. I won't go into more details (after all, I am here to read the novel [doge]) Then there are the shortcomings. I have now read more than 50 chapters, and the author's handling of the characters' emotions is still a bit poor, especially the emotional changes of the two senior sisters (one is a family member, and the other is a painter). It is a bit fragmented and stiff, but I don't expect more. Come on, author!

Generally speaking, the relatively standard immortality novels are not surprising, the plot is quite bland, and the writing is quite good.

Damn, this is a rare good book. The story is very similar to classical fantasy, but there is a little bit of knives [face covering]

From the ordinary boy in Cangwu Mountain to the semi-invincible road after Nascent Soul, the most touching part of this book is that it writes the true background behind the immortal cultivator's "seeking immortality" - it is not a myth of extraordinary talent, but a legend of an ordinary person in a desperate situation, relying on a little chance and countless escapes from death, to survive.

I don't know why the score is so low, and not many people have read it. Personally, as long as you have a little patience, this book is still very readable and has no bad points. Although it has multiple female protagonists, it feels like these female protagonists are quite suitable for it. I feel that the setting of this book is indeed very good, but some are too wordy. For example, the addition of some modifiers can really make this article better written. Next to the modifiers, some words are completely unnecessary, but will make people feel uncomfortable. Like the tide receding, you can just write like the tide recedes, which makes people feel cleaner and neater.

This could have been a sweet and sad fairy tale

It's suitable for slow reading. I've read too many novels, and I prefer good stories. It focuses on rapid plot advancement. It's too docile and I fell asleep while reading it. But it should be a top-notch book. Judging from the ratings, it's okay.

The author's writing is delicate and thoughtful, and his writing skills are superb, showing his extraordinary literary heritage. This work is currently calm and far away from impetuous utilitarianism. It is like a ray of clear spring that cleanses the soul.

The writing is delicate and smooth, and the plot is laid out very naturally!

It's okay. There may be some flaws, but overall it's good and watchable.

Come on, come on, I am not prostituted in vain, I am giving stars ⭐Please write carefully✍🏻, come on, come on. Too little, too little, not enough. Thank you.

There's nothing bad about it. I have a strong sense of lightning protection. I just feel that the pace is a little slow. I want to watch it more enjoyable.

More updates are being added. I've seen the latest chapter in less than 2 days. It's great [please give me more updates]