A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: My Golden Finger Is Actually a Book

I suddenly understood a truth. Some people actually don't care about what you write. They just want to find a place to have fun and wallow. It happens that you are unlucky and catch up with you. I went to see the people who wrote negative reviews for me. Their historical reviews basically gave negative reviews to all novels. At this time, I felt relieved. Besides, some people are really outrageous. They obviously don't understand it, but! Because they don't understand it, they must slander them. This is no different from Lafayette who said that cameras absorb souls and locomotives are monsters. Some people are really outrageous. I wonder about the novel platform. Isn't there only readers and authors? Where do the bosses and secretaries come from? Do I have to customize a novel for him? The plot must develop according to what he said? Otherwise, it is not well written? Can people really be so superior? If I feel that the writing is not good, then the negative reviews will be the end of it, and I have to show it off. Brothers, you can check out the comment section and tell me if my writing is bad, which one is objective? And I found that some people consciously find negative reviews and like them. Thank you @ for letting me see this paragraph, and thank @ Guyyan for writing this paragraph. Of course, the last paragraph is from my own home.

The author's writing style is very good, and the framework is very good. There are no immortal cultivators who have never broken up with each other, they are normal people cultivating immortals. Based on my 12,000 hours of reading experience, I tell all fellow Taoists to use it with confidence and it will definitely become popular. Comments are early. The main character's name is Li Yuanxi. The name of the little princess on the Internet becomes more and more outrageous as it goes on. If you look carefully, 90% of the novels are female-channeled novels. I spent a lot of money to buy them. 9.2 Comments. The first interview should be a very capable writer. Later, the female author took over.

Absolutely underrated book 1. This kind of heart-warming relationship between teacher and student is definitely a highlight, and it retains a touch of warmth in the cruel world of cultivation. 2. The setting of Goldfinger is also very good, not too old-fashioned, rather innovative and logically reasonable. 3. The character of the protagonist has two lifetimes of sobriety, insight into human nature, and a hint of kindness in his perseverance. He is not a virgin, but a real image of flesh and blood, who can gain a foothold in the world of immortality and be kind to those close to him. 4. Finally, and what I think is the most important point, the emotional foreshadowing is particularly good, and the gradually warming up feelings are very comfortable. I think there can be more female protagonists, as long as each female protagonist's unique characteristics are maintained. In terms of character, I currently think the three potential heroines are well differentiated. The gentle senior sister must become the first heroine. My suggestion is to add a unique and powerful development potential to each heroine, or a strong background, or a strong talent, or create a new system or something. For example, that senior sister uses pill fire as an offensive technique. The combination of Yin evil power and righteous spiritual power may become a great talent in the later stage. In this way, the female protagonist will be strong enough to truly accompany the male protagonist and grow together. We must add more heroines, but we must ensure that each heroine maintains a unique character, unique potential, and unique emotional line. When it's time to accept a girl, you must accept her, and you must not leave any traces of ink.

It's well written and enjoyable to read. It's just that there was no finishing blow or counter-kill when seizing the treasure. Also, it's well written. I hope I don't want the heroine for the time being, especially the senior sister! As a time traveler, all the goals must be to achieve immortality, including refining weapons, drawing talismans, refining elixirs, and forming formations. These are the processes of becoming an immortal. Don't because of some readers! If you don't like this, don't write like this. Don't be taboo, everything is for the purpose of becoming an immortal. The rest are all methods and professions on the road to becoming an immortal. It is best to be able to create your own Five Elements Cultivation Technique in the later stage. With this plug-in, I believe you should be able to create your own Five Elements Cultivation Technique.

It's the first time I've commented after reading so little. I'm currently at Chapter 115 and I've just read Chapter 7, but these 7 chapters are really well written, and the author's writing style is to my liking. And I like multiple heroines, I'm not a believer in single heroines Secondly, the author is very active, which is a plus point Finally, in fact, my rating for these seven chapters can only be 4 stars, but, again, if you have the ability, you write it, the pen is given to you, you write it, it is really given to you, and you are not good anymore, don't just talk about it. If you haven't tried something yourself, how do you know that others are not as good as you? Also, the author didn't give me 1 cent, so some people should stop shouting under my comments. If the subsequent plot is not good, I will still change the rating. There is another saying, a few poisonous points are not bad, nothing is perfect in the world

It's not like the frivolous novels nowadays. The writing is pretty good, maybe a little bit poisonous, but I don't think it's harmful at all. I didn't pay for it, I really think it's pretty good, and the content is not cliche. If I have to say it, I remember that the transition scenes are a little stiff (it's my own fault). I have been reading novels for more than ten years. Although I have not read any literary works, I have probably read all the novels of this era. I also tried to write a novel myself, but unfortunately I couldn't express everything in my mind through writing. Besides, the descriptions in this book are really delicate. However, the pace is indeed a bit slow. I practiced qi at 5 levels a year or at 4 levels. Now I have been practicing at 8 levels for at least 7-8 years. According to the host's setting, practicing will widen the muscles and Dantian. In this case, the subsequent practicing should be faster and faster. Although the conversion is only 20%, maybe the protagonist has a lot of experience? So this is the arrangement? From the author's message, you can probably guess that the protagonist should have accumulated a lot of experience in the past 50 chapters to get the opportunity to practice Qi 13 or 14. No one has ever broken through the foundation before, and successfully broke through the supreme foundation 😄 So I personally recommend this book! 🤭

It is a rare treasure. You need to calm down and read this article because it is relatively slow to get started and there are not so many bloody plots. It officially enters the main line and starts with the battle between good and evil. I have read Chapter 163 so far. I feel a bit weird when I read Volume 2. The style is different from Volume 1. Volume 1 mainly talks about the protagonist's growth in the sect and getting along with his brothers. Volume 2 has not been finished yet, so I am not sure. In short, the protagonist has come to a place where there are no immortal cultivators. The reason why Volume 2 is strange is that the protagonist is a little out of character. I can see the protagonist's contempt and ridicule for mortals. , The original sentence is "The ridicule is not directed at the two people, but stems from the natural overlooking of the mortal warriors by the immortal cultivators." It is a bit uncomfortable. If it is Volume 1, the protagonist will not be like this. In his past words, even the immortal cultivators were once mortals.

The pace is slow, but the sentences are fine-grained, the descriptions are specific, and the sense of substitution is strong. It is not as fast-paced as Shuangwen, which allows people to get emotions quickly, but it has a unique calmness. Maybe it can be regarded as a breath of fresh air in the novel. [Learned]🍉

The opening is eye-catching and the plot is very interesting. I want to know how it will be slapped in the face later.

The structure is clean, the writing is superb, and the sense of substitution is good!