Stealing Pen: Catching Wu Xie at the Beginning

It's not the kind of way where you get along right away and then become a fan of everyone (to be honest, I really doubt whether it's really possible to get along so quickly or even become the backbone of the iron triangle. I think this book is more in line with the reality I imagined). The heroine's character is not a cliché of a little douchebag or a little sun (I've seen people get shocked by it), but a serious portrayal. The writing is smooth and the plot is vivid, and it can describe the cold atmosphere in the tomb. However, the heroine is too good at showing off, so she doesn't follow her to the grave much, so she's not too close to the protagonist group. 😂I quite like watching original dramas. The heroine is quite miserable sometimes. Although there are elements of others trying to trick her, the heroine's somewhat stubborn character and her desperate fighting style are also one of the reasons why she looks miserable. Sometimes it feels a bit hard, but I don't think it's aggrieved, but I just want to read cool stories and be cautious. In short, the score shouldn't be so low [crying] I don't want to see the magical reality that a well-thought-out article can get a score of six points, and a cool article with no brains and no bottom line can get a nine-point score.

After reading everyone's comments, I feel like I'm not very suitable for writing novels, so I'll just give it a try. However, I still have to say something here: don't think that Jiumen is a good person in the original novel. In the real world, there are no good people who can do this, they are all desperadoes. What is an outlaw? Betrayal, kill without blinking an eye, speak lightly and be trustworthy. This is the background of a tomb robber. And those who can become famous, including the fat man, the little flower, the black blind man, etc., Should not be easy to get along with, otherwise they would have died eight hundred times. Their loyalty will only be given to those who recognize it, such as Wu Xie. In the original work, Wu Xie and Xiao Hua are childhood friends. He also has a very charming personality and can impress everyone, so he will give people a different feeling from the Jianghu people. The protagonist is an outsider. He gets involved because he likes them. He comes up with whatever he wants, so he always regrets it, but he remembers eating and not fighting. If the author wants the protagonist to want to be their partner, the protagonist will inevitably fall. How to fall? From ordinary people to criminals. The bottom line is lowered step by step, dyed black bit by bit, slowly putting life and death aside, and discovering the restlessness deep in the heart.

Ah! I am the female protagonist, and I feel so frustrated. I really can't bear it when Master Shunzi or Brother Shunzi come out.

In fact, I thought it was quite good. The book review said that the heroine was very aggrieved, but I thought it was okay. After all, the heroine was just an ordinary person at the beginning. How can an ordinary person not panic when meeting someone like a gangster? Who can not be afraid? (I'm not scolding) But I think if the heroine is still so cowardly after going through one or two more dungeons, it would be a bit aggrieved (? As for the others, I think Fatty Wu Xie is a little suspicious. At this time, the situation is still unclear. They are too wary of the heroine, but they are a little weird. I don't think there is any big problem with the characters of the other people in Nenniu Wufang. This game is already halfway through and a person suddenly appears. Who can be more suspicious? Overall, it's still good-looking. Come on, author. The heroine has no CP and steals the pen to express friendship. There are really too few fics that have all four elements. You must write more. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

I think it's pretty well written. The story develops logically. The heroine can protect herself but is not so strong that she is brainless. The heroine's feeling of being forced to get involved in the world is very real. The sense of sinister dangers and unseen forces in Tomb Raiders Notes is superbly written. The restoration of the original characters and the level of participation in the story line are also very good. On the basis of everyone's understanding of the original work, the author's story can still arouse curiosity about what else will happen in the story line of stolen pens. The original character descriptions are not too weak to make people feel frustrated, and there is no savior descending from the sky to make the original work nihilistic. We not only pay attention to the original characters, but also pay attention to the fate of the original empathic person and dog. The author's writing is very charming, so don't underestimate yourself. Of course, some parts at the beginning were not that good, so I hesitated whether to continue watching. But this further shows that the author has made great progress in the thirty-three chapters, and his grasp of the story is getting better and better. I'm very much looking forward to the author's next creations. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It's not bad. There will be a bit of a toes-on-the-ground feeling at the beginning, but it will get better later. Also, the protagonist group is too suspicious. The suspicion can be reduced appropriately in the early stage, and a little more in the later stage. After all, Wu Xie really didn't think so much before the sand sea. It was Wu Xie who became suspicious from the time of Zanghaihua.

The novel describes a relatively cold and primitive relationship between the characters (in the early stage, they have not fully adapted or socialized. They seem to be aggrieved) (︡ω︠). Compared with other novels where they are the group favorite or even the all-in type of heartthrob, this kind of thing is actually more in line with the tone of the people in Jiumen (͏ ˉ ꈊ ˉ)✧˖°, Even if a person is really good, the order of time is also very important to the protagonist group. ꒰๑͒•̀ुꇵ͒•꒱و ̑̑, The protagonist group is very good to the people around them, but they may not give more to the heroine (especially if they come in halfway, and there is basically no interest connection, or even the position and purpose are unclear), and people's energy is limited, and there is intimacy and distance between people. And after reading the full text, few people commented. In fact, I was fascinated by it, because there are relatively few of this type. I looked at it more when I opened the first chapter. Come on (งᵒ̴̶̷᷅ωᵒ̴̶̷᷄)ง⁼³₌₃

Summary: It looks good. It feels very consistent with my impression of stolen pens. The atmosphere in the early stage is relatively depressing. The protagonist is always injured by the protagonist's group and is played by the old foxes. If you like reading novels, be careful. The writing is okay, but some plots are often abbreviated. It is worth watching. Other fans always write that the protagonist group is too kind, but in fact in that era they were completely "dangerous elements" and would never take strangers lightly. This may also be the reason why the heroine was so frustrated in the early stage. However, I still like the heroine's character. She obviously can't help herself, but she still wants to work hard to help the protagonist group (I regret it too). Every time the author describes the protagonist's injury, it feels so real. I also feel phantom pain when I look at it. Oh, it hurts so much. Although the author said that there will be cheats in the later stage, but can it save the protagonist from getting hurt? It makes me feel so distressed. I always get injured trying to save the protagonist group (psychological committee member, I am not happy). After reading the protagonist's destiny, I always feel that there will be a knife in the back🔪 Because many plots have detailed plots, the author did not describe it much, just briefly describe it. But this way, the whole story will be a bit perfunctory (personal feeling). I can understand the reason why the author wrote this way, but I think it can be described a little more🤔 I stayed up late today to catch up. I will add it to my bookshelf to catch up! I hope the author will continue to work hard and make more updates! Looking forward to more exciting chapters😚😚

There are many exaggerated and artificial words in the front of this book that describe the characters' psychology, which makes it particularly embarrassing to read. But as time goes on, the author seems to have figured out how to write a book. It probably started after the protagonist was sent to the ancient mansion of the Zhang family, and the writing became particularly smooth. The details of the characters are enriched and many additional new scenes are added. The characterization and polishing of the heroine's character are also more refined. It can be seen from the text that the heroine is a living person with flesh and blood. But starting from the second volume, it seems that I don't know how to continue the content of the first volume. I just ramble on about other things and it seems very tired. Generally speaking, as long as the embarrassing period is over, the subsequent settings, characters, interactions, and plot are all perfect, and this setting is unique. I have not seen a setting similar to this work so far.

Don't look at Lei Nanny's article. The heroine didn't want to get involved in the early stage, but in the end she "predicted" the Queen Mother Palace and the ancient building because of the kind thoughts in her heart. As a result, all bad things happened. Brain hemorrhage and fractures were commonplace. I couldn't do strenuous exercise in the future, so I took the risk of going to the ancient building. As soon as the work was done, I was haunted by a female ghost again. I really wanted to kneel down and beg the heroine to leave those things alone. I would end up half-crippled or dead.

Overall, from my point of view, this is the first novel that I am willing to read from beginning to end, and it is also the first novel that I have all the patience to finish. The heroine's character really pokes me, and the plot is also the type I like, but the opinions of people in the comment area It seems very big [laughing awkwardly] What they like should be the kind of stories that are enjoyable from beginning to end, without any grievances, and at the peak of their debut. They don't understand it, and they don't want to respect it. The author doesn't need to worry about them. You can rest assured to write your novel. Your novel is really good [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

The heroine is so miserable, she was screwed [face covering] The main plot of stealing the pen is hard to rely on, I hope the heroine can go home, although it is complicated, it is not dangerous hahahahaha

It's a very good book. The original characters are not OOC and their behavior is in line with the non-Wu Xie perspective under normal circumstances [Like] There is no point of interest in the popular sense. The protagonist has long legs and can run and has a mouth to talk. I have two companions, so I am not alone. Talented, growing, strong-minded, ruthless [cool] As long as it can be completed in the end, it will definitely be another good book [Like] [Like] [Like] Praise the author greatly! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It is currently tied and will be reviewed later. I feel good about myself, and I felt aggrieved in the early stage just for the sake of the Dragon King's return in the future (stop) In the early stage, the protagonist has no background, and he can only suffer the pain of being plotted against. But in the middle, he feels better. It feels like the protagonist has a kind of evil affection for the protagonist group () cough cough. The protagonist's comedy is mixed with her own indulgent madness. On the surface, she is destined to die, but in fact, she will not let you live well before death (this makes me happy😋) and the protagonist does not stay with the protagonist group like the traditional one. I feel that the writing of this plot is not abrupt and boring (I like it). I hope that the protagonist will feel more comfortable later when he joins the Jianghu (punching the Wang family, kicking Jude, beating, beating, beating). Let's talk about the fighting scene. In the early stage, I relied on a strategy of injuring the enemy by 1,000 and damaging myself by 800 (the fight with the evil ghost was really fun for me 🤤), but after training with the black blind man, it probably won't be like this anymore (come on!). Looking forward to what happens next. Let's talk about the character control. I don't feel that I am OOC. Their vigilance and investigation of the protagonist, as well as their contact and gaming are quite good. After all, they are a group of veteran characters. It is impossible for them to completely accept the protagonist after just a few tests. Overall, it's still worth reading ~ I hope the author will continue to work hard [shy]

It looks good, the plot is good, time travel + no cp, the protagonist looks like an idle fish and a lunatic who is messing around. Overall, it is good. It is not a loss if you invest in it, but it is too little to watch and wait for updates every day. The author works hard to get a good rating, but he must also be careful about being reported or attacked by negative comments.

Why is the rating so low? I really think it's great. I watched it overnight. The plot is very logical and not embarrassing. However, it is different from other traditional group pet stories. It is not a nanny story. As the introduction says, the heroine just wants to go home and test her boundaries. I really like the extra chapter. In fact, I feel that there are many hidden knives. The heroine's life experience is actually quite ugly. I have always ignored that she did not suddenly have a soul piercing, but really grew up from a little baby. The extra chapter is really sweet and sad. The extra episode about the heroine returning home really made me cry. My obsession is to go home. I finally went back. I just felt like I didn't have enough. The extra episode ended suddenly and I felt itchy [crying] I finally read a finished, not awkward and good-looking novel.

I've been following it until now. It's well written. It was logical and the characters were vivid. Why is it rated so low?

I had no interest in novels, I just watched the excitement, but it turns out that this novel is the only one that can arouse my interest. There are really very few novels nowadays that can be immersive. At least I have only seen this one, and I have never seen it before. I was really scared and excited while reading this book. I was scared because I was afraid that the protagonist would die. But I was excited because I finally found a novel that interests me. I was so touched. Boss, you are my god! And when I see the protagonist is a girl, I will leave it. In my impression, as long as the protagonist is a girl, there must be CP. I don't like to read it. I like strong women. There is no slander here. After all, I am also a girl, but the novels I read seem to have some kind of love brain filter for girls. The heroine must have a harem or date. This novel really perfectly avoided my red flags. I am really touched!

The writing is so beautiful, it has plot, ideas and writing style, and the plot is not cliché, full of ups and downs.

Yes, it's good-looking. There aren't many articles that are good-looking without CP. Especially the second half of the book, that kind of daily life, so fun, so warm, my aunt laughed throughout the whole process, I want to see more daily scenes later

I went and it looked great.

Looks great, cheers!

I generally don't like to read pirated fanfics with original protagonists, because most authors can't handle the original protagonist's participation in the original plot and the relationship with the original characters. This one has just the right distance.

This book is very real. The protagonist has his own "golden finger", but it is not embarrassing, but he slowly develops it and develops it. Her emotions change naturally, most of the plot developments are reasonable, and the connections are natural. All in all, highly recommended!

The perspective of the protagonist is so unique, and there are many, many more, but my writing style is not good. In short, one sentence is particularly beautiful [shy][shy][shy][shy]

Very good, I like the no cp one

Very nice [flying kiss] [flying kiss] highly recommended The author is so great. The book does not deliberately say that Xiao Zhang is greedy for money, but has a sense of loyalty. Xiao Zhang has a very unique personality, and her dog... Xiao Zhang, who traveled to this world, did not deliberately change his personality to cater to others and live his life as himself! (The big dog is so cute ε٩(๑> ₃ <)۶з)

I think it's pretty good-looking.

Ordinary people should have some innate supernatural power

Words are poor Anyway, it's very pretty