Sister, Listen to My Explanation! !

Finally see a normal brother-sister relationship😋 It tastes so bad 😭

Very good! Although there are actually many flaws in it, such as logic, clerical errors and common usage methods, these are not important anymore. The important thing is that I saw in it the doubts and inquiries that normal people should have, and that "direct" feeling (I don't know how to describe it, I kind of forgot what I was thinking at the time). Who knows the sense of redemption I felt when I saw this thing? After reading so many books, this was the first time I saw what should be normal. It is a very simple thing, but I have never seen any other author do it. It is so shocking and earth-shattering. No one understands how I feel. My lack of words cannot describe my strong feeling. It is like a starving person seeing the emergence of a village. I wanted to go to bed at 12 o'clock, but finally stayed up until 2 o'clock and couldn't stop. I just saw the updated part and saw this update speed. What else can I say? Please invite a great scholar to debate the scriptures.

I have read Chapter 42 so far, and I am posting some comments because I am aroused by certain emotions. There may be some spoilers below, no offensive language. First of all, the author's writing style is delicate, but this delicateness does not mean excellent writing style. Because it is in the first person, the description of the protagonist's psychology in the article is too rich, while the psychological description of the heroine is relatively small, especially when there are many repeated sentences in the description, it will appear a bit redundant. The advantage of the psychological asymmetry between the two parties is that it allows me to better understand the contradiction and fear of the protagonist facing these things, but it also makes the protagonist more cowardly (emotionally) and indecisive compared to others. Especially when Yuri is decisive because of her feelings for the protagonist, and Natsuki appears bold when facing the protagonist, the protagonist's psychology has always been focused on contradictions, hesitation, panic, fear, and escape. In contrast, the protagonist's performance makes people anxious. What I like most about this book is that the relationship between the male and female protagonists does not advance rapidly as soon as it sprouts, but it truly explores the impact of such a taboo relationship on the family and the ideological struggles of the parties involved. What I don't like very much is the emotional lines other than the heroine. It's not that I am obsessed with pure love, but because the appearance and handling of these emotional lines are a bit uncomfortable. Although Morikawa Yuki's plot is short, it greatly promotes the plot. What makes me uncomfortable is Natsuki now. Natsuki is a character with high emotional intelligence, but a lot of her emotional intelligence is used to deal with the protagonist's family. She is not unaware of Yuri's feelings for Hayato. When the scale of victory is not tilted towards her, she can express her love bravely (although I don't agree with the way). She is actually very good in her own right. But her subsequent behavior was not like a person with high emotional intelligence, or her high emotional intelligence was more reflected in her own interests rather than making the protagonist feel better. The almost taboo relationship between Yuri and Hayato has its own characteristics. The bond between family members is the basis of its characteristics. When the relationship between family exists, there will always be a layer of film between Hayato and Yuri that outsiders cannot interfere with. When Natsuki realizes Yuri's feelings, her behavior is aggressive. This aggression makes Yuri's already uneasy heart even more difficult to stabilize, and may even be a little paranoid. In the scene around Chapter 42, Natsuki's "declaration of sovereignty" almost did not even consider the protagonist's situation. This also went against the dialogue she told the protagonist last week to let the protagonist think about it, and broke the intellectual image of this character. I think the protagonist (Hayato) is portrayed delicately but not fully fleshed out. This delicateness is focused on some of his inner dramas. It's even a little uncomfortable because it's so delicate. At the beginning, he clearly knew that he had no feelings for Natsuki, but he was hesitant about Natsuki's affection for him, neither taking the initiative nor rejecting it. Accepting love affection from others without taking the initiative or rejecting it, and when you are already having an affair with someone else, is essentially a shameless mentality, because not refusing means you want to continue enjoying it, and not accepting it means you don't want to be responsible for it, and you don't want to accept the consequences. And then when the protagonist actually had a little crush on Natsuki, I felt very sad, especially on the other hand, Yuri was still feeling cold towards the protagonist. At this time, Natsuki's relationship with the siblings changed from competition to "intrusion", which made people even more reluctant to accept Natsuki. I hope that Hayato can grow up in the future, at least he should become able to reject the feelings he doesn't like, instead of being the person he is now who only knows how to escape, who only knows how to passively accept other people's arrangements and good intentions, and use this to make himself look innocent in his heart. I have caught up with the progress, and the emotional experience is higher than most novels I have read. I am very grateful to the author. I think I may have roughly understood the story that the author wants to express. In order to have a more complete emotional experience, I read a little more. I like this story, so I hope the author will work hard!

Although the harem looks very exciting, I still know in my heart that sooner or later, I will turn to the main palace - my sister. Yuri's image is very likeable, but the other female supporting characters also have their own merits. I really hope that it will have an ending like the "Sword of Sword 3" game that "got it all in". The later plot is more delicate and tense than the previous one. I hope the author can actually optimize the early content. Some people may not be able to stick to the middle and later parts.

Let me just say a few words first. I can't wait to finish reading before commenting. 10 Stars are entirely for the female protagonists, 6 stars will be deducted for the male protagonists The female protagonists (excluding the younger sister for the moment, I will make a final decision on the younger sister after watching) are all excellent and strong, and they completely deserve a better protagonist. The male protagonist is a negative score for me. He has some advantages, but one thing is that the male protagonist has always been unique in terms of emotions. It is self-evident to anyone. I saw that nearly 300 chapters are almost over, and I dare not confirm the emotions I have for other female protagonists. This would be impeccable in other genres, but it is placed in the harem, which greatly reduces the overall perception of the whole text. The preference is too obvious, and it makes the other heroines who love the protagonist so much feel so humble. I really feel unworthy of them. But there is no way, the author arranged their fate, it is really all thanks to the heroines to have these 4 stars, otherwise I would not even want to give one Because the author's description of some fragments was too detailed, some chapters were completely deleted, which also made the writing unsatisfactory. Secondly, it is recommended to just settle the screen next time. Regardless of the male protagonist, the whole book is still very good (the female protagonists are also good if they ignore someone and just open a hundred) The ending is unsatisfactory, and there is another scene of a love affair with another person near the end, which is difficult to criticize. It would not be bad if the ending completely let the heroines leave the protagonist and live happily on their own. I fantasized again, fantasizing that every heroine has a confession Conclusion: Harem for the sake of harem (pseudo harem) Finally, the harem I want to see is "Love to the nth power"

The last scene where my sister talked about something almost made me have a cardiac arrest. I was so uncomfortable watching it at the time that I was short of breath and almost died 😭(◍••) Fortunately, it eased up later. The contrast in the author's writing was too great. It may make people's heart rise and fall too fast. I can't stand it all at once. Overall, I still like this novel, but I don't know why the rating is a bit low. In fact, it's just fate that I came across this novel. You know, I searched for "eat meat without ambiguity"~(¯▽¯~), and I also wish the author better and better. I'm going to raise points

It's been a long time since I've seen a novel that aroused my emotions like this. It's been so long that I've forgotten the last time. I enjoyed reading the daily interactions between Yuri and Shiraishi and the various dramatic conflicts in the first thirty chapters of this novel (before Natsuki appeared). Yuri's feelings for Shiraishi are warm but cold, restrained but hot. The gentle embrace under the sunset, the kiss like a dragonfly during the photo shoot, and the gentle use of scissors to cut open the trouser legs soaked in blood and stuck to the wound. She can always completely see through Shiraishi's heart and always give Shiraishi just the right help. The previous plot of this novel gave me a feeling that was no less than any excellent light novel I have read, or even more so. Personally, I would prefer a single-sister heroine, and it would be better for others to leave it at that, just like Tomoya, Anzu, and Tomoyo in cl. So I actually didn't like it very much after the middle of the first volume. At around chapter 170, the emotional line finally became clear. Yuri and whether Natsuki will be added, the perception is much better. I'm looking forward to the follow-up development. I personally hope it will be a single heroine sister. Good luck to the author. The writing is great. I have a picky taste. I only like this sister series of yours in Tomato. Come on.

How can I put it, it's a bit awkward to write about a real girl like this and not have a harem. On the contrary, she is not as comfortable as a step sister. It makes people feel that a sister is not as good as a good brother. Other aspects are very good. The psychological description is top-notch on Tomato.

At the beginning, some high school boys were immature and green, but later on they gradually faced their obsession with forbidden romances. However, many pseudo-harem plots are indeed very exciting. I really want to watch them all! All! Want! I really like the role of the second female lead Natsuki😘

I'll go, Xiancao, it's very beautiful. It feels like I used to watch 24k Jun Er's girl control novel.

A very good work. It's just that I don't really like Japanese names.

I have been debating for a long time whether I should give it five stars. No, but I really like this novel. I will give it. I am afraid that it will be blocked by reviewers. In the end, I think this novel really deserves a five star.

The author is of a very high level, but this subject matter, no matter how well written it is, there is no room for development here. It is a pity. If it were in the east, it should be published openly, or adapted into animation, it would be a good work.

The plot is compact! True feelings revealed! Recommended! Some of the questions in the previous chapters have been revised. Thank you all for reading carefully. I will reply to your responses~

The writing is very good and delicate. Once you read it, you won't be able to stop. Immerse yourself in the illusion of the Mange Sharingan!

Japanese novels are pretty good [like] [send heartfelt]

Is this multiple heroines?

Stomach Pain (novel), the shortcomings are not hidden, but in the end I still made dumplings, there were a lot of twists and turns in the middle, the male protagonist's early image is also Asasi, emotionally slow but not slow at all in the details of life [laughter]

Are you single? I came here for my sister [to send my heart] It seems that there are many girls. There seems to be some clique fighting for the younger sister. All the people who came here have dispersed. Now I am a little confused. If I want to write about multiple girls, why should I use a single-girl orthopedics topic? [Awkward laugh]

"Eat! Love is coming or not!" (Chapter 237) 5⭐Natsuki. Other debts

It was a little off-putting at first, but later on we got hooked up. The author obviously knows how to tease readers' emotions, making them laugh with joy, but also laugh with tears.

It's very beautiful, but it's so edited that it's uncomfortable.

It's a pretty good light novel. Good luck to the author.

Feeling good now

Except for the unclear time, everything else is quite beautiful.

I recently listened to a Japanese song "Sugarcoat". Natsuki and her sister are a bit like what the lyrics say? ! More like a sister? ! !

Single heroine, sister, or multiple heroines? [What] This kind of theme is easier to develop with single heroine and sister, like a certain Kong development [shy]

It's really cool, but I don't know if I can win the review.

Is it really a single-female story? [Crying] Natsuki is really good [Crying]

Please author, I keep up with updates every day, can you please update more [I'm about to cry]