Yu Porcelain

The author's writing is very delicate and good. Both male and female protagonists are forced love types, but the portrayal of the second male protagonist is better than that of the male protagonist. In the early stage, the second male protagonist is a pure and innocent big dog. After experiencing the departure of the female protagonist, it can be seen that the second male lead will change. I hope he will be gradually seduced and will agree to everything but nothing. It's a soft forced love story, maybe for a newbie. The relationship between the male and female protagonists was a bit stiff in the early stage, and the possessiveness was inexplicable. I feel that the male protagonist's character could be a little more perfect, but the author's writing is very fragrant and very good. I recommend everyone to read it! Os: I hope that in the future, I can severely abuse the male protagonist, support the second male protagonist in taking over, and he must be able to protect the female protagonist!

This is the first time I comment and reward. The author's writing is very good, but it is really depressing. When I saw the heroine go back to reunite with her parents, I was so moved that I burst into tears. Then I went back again. I could feel the heroine's despair through the screen [crying]

The author's writing is very good. I really feel sorry for the heroine's baby at the beginning. I hope that I will torture the male protagonist severely in the future and let him experience the feeling of not having a baby.

The writing is really good, and the author's writing style is also good. I feel very sad, and it also describes the real situation after time travel. I also feel sorry for the heroine. I feel that she is really pitiful. The way home is too slim.

1. The author has a certain language foundation, which is an advantage, but it is also your disadvantage. There are large sections of repeated modifications in the text, resulting in modification > story, which makes the whole novel look very lengthy and reduces the comprehensibility. 2. The plot is flat and the emotional line is not sufficiently laid out, making the novel very stiff. Personally, I feel that the reason for the stiffness is: too much inner drama and lengthy embellishments, which is also very common in AI-generated writing. It would be better to use an easy-to-understand event instead of a long inner drama, and use events to describe emotions and comprehend emotions. For example: In a lively banquet, some people arrive first, some leave first, some eat lobster, and some eat cold dishes with chopsticks, but there will always be a day when I stand up and leave the banquet. When I was leaving, I looked around and realized that the faces on the table were all strangers, and their hair was darker than mine. I thought, maybe it's time. You realize [palms face] I won't type anymore... Although you have two shortcomings as examples above, you still have strong plasticity, please continue to work hard!! I am optimistic about you. [Learned]

The characters are vividly drawn and the emotions are described very naturally. The male protagonist is very paranoid and does not know how to love. It is written in the article that the male protagonist's father did not love his mother when he was a child, which makes his character presentation and his behavior more reasonable. The transformation of the second male lead is not stiff at all, and his character changes very naturally. The heroine has her own thoughts, goals and clear understanding, does not procrastinate in relationships, and knows how to love herself. Although it felt like the ending was a bit sudden, overall it was quite smooth. It felt very smooth while I was reading it. I read it for a long time without realizing it. I won't talk about other aspects, but the emotions and feelings of the characters in this book are really well portrayed. I look forward to the next work [Sending Hearts] After reading the preview of the new book, I feel that the image of the male protagonist is very different from the previous book. It is almost the same. The female protagonist has the same feeling as the previous book except that she does not want to go back to modern times. I hope there will be a bigger breakthrough in the character, otherwise it will not be much different from the previous book, but I am still looking forward to it [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

Nice! I like to read this type of novel. It suits my taste. I finished reading the updated chapters of the novel as if I was masochistic. I felt so happy. At the end, I whispered: I hope the second male lead will take the lead, hahaha

The author's writing style is very good. Although the female protagonist was suppressed everywhere in the early stage, I look forward to her growth in the later stage and the second male lead will take over.

Xianpin, if you like watching forced love, come on, the plot of forceful robbery is quite enjoyable hahaha 😁 Those who talk about torturing women may not be comfortable with this. This type of writing is all about forced love. You can read it as a Qingshui version of the post hehe, this kind of thing is very exciting [laughs] Just because you like watching it doesn't mean you like and agree with this kind of behavior. Reality in novels should be separated. I prefer the second male lead hehe. I didn't expect the ending, good guy [face covering]

Xiao Jue, I roast tender meat, An Hanhanhan😭😭 [Crying] I can't stand it😭The author's writing is quite good, but Xiao Jue is a bit naive, Anhanhanhan😩It's the first time I've been so malicious to a character in a novel, the author forgives me🥺I haven't finished reading it yet, wait for me to taste it again🎋

I really like reading be-themed articles. Who says every relationship has to be happy? Who says every heroine has good luck and meets the right person. I just like this feeling of imperfection and abrupt ending, leaving room for the reader's imagination. Author, come back soon to update your book, wait until the flowers have withered [crying]

The author's writing is very good, the plot is engaging and not procrastinating, and the treatment of the male protagonist is delicate, accurate, and brilliant. He is not the so-called mass-produced male who is "not close to women" and "will stick to it until the end." The female protagonist is not the so-called mass-produced woman who has "unparalleled beauty and is coveted by all kinds of men and is exiled" but can always protect the male protagonist. This makes me very comfortable! The heroine has a strong sense of "porcelain", her beauty is cold, delicate, delicate, fragile yet tough.

When I first started watching it, I thought it was just another cliché story about power and sex. But when "playing the game" turned into "relentless psychological encirclement and suppression", I was shocked to realize that this game had already deviated from my original view. Xiao Jue thought he could control the overall situation, but in the end he became the most paranoid hunter, imprisoning his prey and trapping himself in this cage called "love". I personally have very conflicting feelings about this character. He was too controlling and paranoid. I couldn't understand it at first. I watched it over and over again and felt that it was reasonable to be like this when I grew up in that kind of environment. My final evaluation was that it was pitiful and hateful. I both hope that he will take the blame for himself and that he will get his wish. Celadon is the kind of girl who can bloom flowers even in the dust. Her tenacity is never a slogan she shouts, but her instinct to stand firm in the wind and rain, and to grit her teeth and get up even if she falls in pain. Others only saw her skin was like cream, and her eyebrows were gentle and soft, but they didn't know what kind of hard bones were wrapped in that softness. Faced with the coercion of fate, she never gives up. Even in the most embarrassing situation, she can still earn a glimmer of hope for herself with a little clarity and tenacity. Her beauty never comes from dependence, but from the freshness of independent growth. Such celadon, even if it just stands there quietly, is like a piece of jade that has been polished by time. There is a power that cannot be underestimated in its warmth. I think the most touching and contradictory thing is the male protagonist's loss of control. When calculations and whims turn into sincerity, when the controller becomes emotional, those cold games become hotter. So I began to wait for an ending: will she break free from his shackles and run for freedom, or will he completely tame her with love? The first one I read was Unclean. It was quite uncomfortable at first, but I accepted it later. The author's writing style is really good and the characters are well created, so I am willing to finish this book, even if it is really super Unclean. It is so good-looking and good-looking. Keep up the good work, author⊙∀⊙!

The author's literary talent is so good, you can feel the heroine's helplessness, fear, and powerlessness when facing the male protagonist through the screen. The second male lead was very gentle before, but after losing the heroine, he also became sinister, ferocious and hateful. . . . Very cruel

Super good-looking, super good-looking, super good-looking, super good-looking, super good-looking. I personally think it's super good-looking. It's just my personal opinion. I feel that the author's writing style is very good, very good, that is, the author's writing style is smooth and flowing, and there is nothing particularly big or bad. Anyway, I quite like the author's writing style, and the author's writing style is very beautiful. I highly recommend this novel. It's very good-looking, very good-looking, very good-looking, very good-looking. The characters the author describes, the male lead, the female lead, and the second male lead are all very good-looking, not bad, not bad. Those characters are super good, good, good, good looking, good looking, good looking.

Although be. But I still want to know if the heroine loved the hero? From my perspective it's no different than falling in love with a rapist. Hope not. . Hope is like the thing in the palm of your hand. The heroine has never loved the hero. The male protagonist dies in the end and the female protagonist is alone and beautiful [shy]

Why can't I find the name of the scarf? [Cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

I will wait until the book is finished before reviewing it to see how long it is. The female protagonist can be tortured for 470,000 words. Let's see how many words of abuse of the woman first and then the man. [Punch Out] [Punch Out] [Punch Out]

Although they are all time-travel novels, this one clearly describes the different cognitive aspects of the two eras. I am very satisfied with it so far. The author's writing style is smooth and detailed, which shows that his literary skills are very good. I rarely rate books, and this one deserves it.

Boss, I am your trumpet, I want to knock you out until you are so cute and funny that you can go home

The second male must take the lead

It's simply a state banquet, the best

Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good!

My mom is so beautiful and the author is so good at writing! (≧▽≦)

The author's writing style is delicate and smooth, good!

It's very real, and it feels like it follows the character's personality, and there's no forced double cleanliness.

Good-looking, super good-looking

Beautiful, very beautiful

Too traditional description [Thinking]

Very good. The heroine always sticks to her own ideas.