Mastering Porcelain

The author's writing is very delicate and good. Both male and female protagonists are forced love types, but the portrayal of the second male protagonist is better than that of the male protagonist. In the early stage, the second male protagonist is a pure and innocent big dog. After experiencing the departure of the female protagonist, it can be seen that the second male lead will change. I hope he will be gradually seduced and will agree to everything but nothing. It's a soft forced love story, maybe for a newbie. The relationship between the male and female protagonists was a bit stiff in the early stage, and the possessiveness was inexplicable. I feel that the male protagonist's character could be a little more perfect, but the author's writing is very fragrant and very good. I recommend everyone to read it! Os: I hope that in the future, I can severely abuse the male protagonist, support the second male protagonist in taking over, and he must be able to protect the female protagonist!

This is the first time I comment and reward. The author's writing is very good, but it is really depressing. When I saw the heroine go back to reunite with her parents, I was so moved that I burst into tears. Then I went back again. I could feel the heroine's despair through the screen 😢

The author's writing is very good. I really feel sorry for the heroine's baby at the beginning. I hope that I will torture the male protagonist severely in the future and let him experience the feeling of not having a baby.

The writing is really good, and the author's writing style is also good. I feel very sad, and it also describes the real situation after time travel. I also feel sorry for the heroine. I feel that she is really pitiful. The way home is too slim.

1. The author has a certain language foundation, which is an advantage, but it is also your disadvantage. There are large sections of repeated modifications in the text, resulting in modification > story, which makes the whole novel look very lengthy and reduces the comprehensibility. 2. The plot is flat and the emotional line is not sufficiently laid out, making the novel very stiff. Personally, I feel that the reason for the stiffness is: too much inner drama and lengthy embellishments, which is also very common in AI-generated writing. It would be better to use an easy-to-understand event instead of a long inner drama, and use events to describe emotions and comprehend emotions. For example: In a lively banquet, some people arrive first, some leave first, some eat lobster, and some eat cold dishes with chopsticks, but there will always be a day when I stand up and leave the banquet. When I was leaving, I looked around and realized that the faces on the table were all strangers, and their hair was darker than mine. I thought, maybe it's time. You realize [palms face] I won't type anymore... Although you have two shortcomings as examples above, you still have strong plasticity, please continue to work hard!! I am optimistic about you. [Learned]

The characters are vividly drawn and the emotions are described very naturally. The male protagonist is very paranoid and does not know how to love. It is written in the article that the male protagonist's father did not love his mother when he was a child, which makes his character presentation and his behavior more reasonable. The transformation of the second male lead is not stiff at all, and his character changes very naturally. The heroine has her own thoughts, goals and clear understanding, does not procrastinate in relationships, and knows how to love herself. Although it felt like the ending was a bit sudden, overall it was quite smooth. It felt very smooth while I was reading it. I read it for a long time without realizing it. I won't talk about other aspects, but the emotions and feelings of the characters in this book are really well portrayed. I look forward to the next work 💕 After reading the preview of the new book, I feel that the image of the male protagonist is very different from the previous book. It is almost the same. The female protagonist has the same feeling as the previous book except that she does not want to go back to modern times. I hope there will be a bigger breakthrough in the character, otherwise it will not be much different from the previous book, but I am still looking forward to it [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

Nice! I like to read this type of novel. It suits my taste. I finished reading the updated chapters of the novel as if I was masochistic. I felt so happy. At the end, I whispered: I hope the second male lead will take the lead, hahaha

Xianpin, if you like watching forced love, come on, the plot of forceful robbery is quite enjoyable hahaha 😁 Those who talk about torturing women may not be comfortable with this. This type of writing is all about forced love. You can read it as a Qingshui version of the post hehe, this kind of thing is very exciting 😄 Just because you like watching it doesn't mean you like and agree with this kind of behavior. Reality in novels should be separated. I prefer the second male lead hehe. I didn't expect the ending, good guy 🤦

The author's writing style is very good. Although the female protagonist was suppressed everywhere in the early stage, I look forward to her growth in the later stage and the second male lead will take over.

I really like reading be-themed articles. Who says every relationship has to be happy? Who says every heroine has good luck and meets the right person. I just like this feeling of imperfection and abrupt ending, leaving room for the reader's imagination. Author, come back soon to update your book, wait until the flowers have withered 😢