"Soul Penetration", "Tie Tie", "Save Everyone", "Subsequent Expansion of the World View", "Judge by yourself if there are errors in the three views of the character"
Yunxi accidentally traveled through the world of Mita and took over the body of the latest version of Mita. She faced all kinds of interesting things and Mita in this wonderful world of Mita.
And started a wonderful journey.
Reader comments
The plot is indeed okay, just don't write it too fast, develop more emotional lines, don't rush the plot line, forget it if you can't change it at the beginning, you can slowly change it later. The characterization of the characters is reasonable and delicate. The most difficult to describe, Crazy Rice, has been designed to delete the code of the failed work, making it much more reasonable. There is also the newly added Amy, I like it very much.
The plot is indeed okay, just don't write it too fast, develop more emotional lines, don't rush the plot line, forget it if you can't change it at the beginning, you can slowly change it later. The characterization of the characters is reasonable and delicate. The most difficult to describe, Crazy Rice, has been designed to delete the code of the failed work, making it much more reasonable. There is also the newly added Amy, I like it very much.
Great, I'm in a panic, I can't be saved
[Laughs] Give yourself a five-star rating