Two Heroines! !
I want to read a book like "The True Daughter Suffers from Serious Dependence on This Cannon Fodder". I've been wanting to watch a double heroine drama lately. I'm looking for a campus novel. It's sweet (a little bit sadistic is fine) and the plot is not embarrassing. The writing is better. It's best not to travel through time.•ᴗ•Best
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I hope there will be many book reviews, the author will be very happy
I rarely read a book with two female protagonists. This book really surprised me. The two of them felt a sense of redemption. I felt really good reading it. It's so sweet and I enjoyed it! But why a new book! I finished reading it in one go. Can the author finish it before I open my eyes tomorrow [love][love][love][love][love]
It's really good to read. I agree with everyone's comments in the comment area now. It's amazing. God in the redemption novel! Hope it becomes popular. I don't think this book is meant to torture readers. I don't quite understand the long review. Even so, every book has certain poisonous points and it's impossible to make it perfect. Although novels are novels, sometimes don't be too harsh. In fact, even some new books or the first books written by novice authors are very good to read. The author, that time in the sect competition was really weird [laughing awkwardly]
Very nice. The writing is very good, and you won't be surprised if you travel back in time, just like modern people. Overall, it's well written and emotionally nuanced, but the problem of the demon species is difficult to solve. I hope there will be a way later It feels like the author's plot settings sometimes become more and more cliched. I really can't think of a plot in which the second female lead, Qing Shuang, saves the first female lead, Chu Yaoguang? If you can't think of it, don't think about it. Write it as normal. After the first girl escapes for the second girl, the second girl's abilities will increase greatly and then she will protect the first girl Chu Yaoguang. The plot in Chapter 16 is about facing a demon. It is clear that Chu Yaoguang has the ability to resist the demon, but he has to arrange a plot in which Qing Shuang saves Chu with his own body. Qing Shuang must be disabled before taking action. In order to increase the relationship between the two, I feel that this arrangement is completely meaningless and very abrupt. Very deliberate too. Don't say that Chu Yaoguang couldn't bear to kill for the sake of living beings. If he couldn't bear it, why was Qingshuang willing to take action after blocking the harm for her? This is like many old-fashioned scripts. The male protagonist is always one step slower and always waits until the last moment to take action. Even if you are a little slow, the arrangement here is too deliberate. You can obviously save the second female lead, but you still watch the second female lead block the knife, which makes you speechless.
@ Oh my god, this is the most amazing and beautiful Xiu Xian gl I have seen recently [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] It's really, really, really beautiful, the writing is smooth and vivid, it's so, so, so good 👍 It's beyond words! There are no words to express it! Oh my god, please don't stop updating. [Crying] It's really beautiful. As long as you keep updating, I will keep watching and following you. It's so refreshing to watch. [Blowing kiss] [Blowing kiss] [Blowing kiss]
"Xianpin", I haven't seen such a beautiful novel in a long time. The emotional line overlaps with the main line. Especially the experience of going down the mountain does not look as plain as other novels, and there is still a distance [licking the screen][licking the screen] What a fairy. Please give me more encouragement, the author.
The writing is delicate and gives you a sour feeling when reading it. Very nice! Too bad it's too short! Is Xiao Lu's growth line after the death of his uncle? Thinking about it makes me a little excited. I am Wu Zetian, and I want to order the author to write a hundred chapters a day.
Like! Ordered in by chance while eating, but it looks great! The logic is also very good, it is not an ordinary time travel novel! I have both righteousness and personal selfishness, and I really like this kind of salvation story where God wants to destroy you and I will destroy it. If you don't like your personal opinion, don't comment.
Not bad, nothing wrong with it
The content is exciting and the plot is interesting
It really feels good
It's pretty cool, keep up the good work!
It seems to suit my taste
Good-looking and good-looking. Why not a high score?
It's the first time I've seen this kind of subject matter, and I feel pretty good about it
Very good-looking [shy], with a sense of pulling and redemption
Recommended by a friend, it's a good read
I give it five stars, it's good-looking, the relationship between the heroines is very delicately written, I love watching it, the plot background has suspenseful points, remember to fill in the gaps. It was written in modern times, interspersed with ancient times, and mentioned memory. Maybe Shuang entered the void and found Yao. Was Yao reincarnated in the third life? This question awaits the author's plot continuation
This book is really well written and super interesting. The plot is very attractive. But I don't know why the author stopped updating it. Teacher, please come back soon [crying]
Beautiful, very detailed, well written Come on [Adoration]
From the sword test on a snowy night to the adventure in the ghost market, the scenes are described with exquisite atmosphere and the atmosphere is created particularly well, allowing people to immerse themselves in the world of immortality.
The plot design of righteousness forcing rebellion is very realistic. The so-called decent people from a well-known family push people with demon seeds to a dead end for their own interests. What is more terrifying than the demon seeds themselves is the human heart.
Chu Yaoguang's complaining campaign is so interesting. He looks cold on the outside, but complains wildly on the inside. He is unambiguous when it comes to defending his shortcomings. His character image is particularly vivid.
The plot is okay, and the character settings are also pretty good. Maybe a little knife? But overall it's very good, highly recommended! ! ! ʕᵕᴥᵕʔ
The design that intersects immortality and modernity at the back really pokes me [send my heart] When will the author update it?
It's okay. It's well written. The settings are also very satisfying. I haven't read such a good-looking book for a long time. More updates from the author [Love][Love][Love]