Transmigrating in Ten Days: The Whole Nation Helps Me Forge a Sect Token

I have reached Chapter 45. The subject matter is good, but the male protagonist starts to have fits as soon as he meets a woman. Some metaphors are also uncomfortable. It is recommended that there be less descriptions and hints of female figures. I'm really convinced. Even though I gave it 4 stars, some people said that I was dissatisfied with the author's writing style. Now you really want to give it 2 stars to express your dissatisfaction.

Tied 45 chapters. Counting food and grass, there are many clues and it is worth reading. When encountering a female character, the male protagonist will activate butter mode and deduct one star.

After reading Chapter 160, I can clearly feel the author's adjustments in the later period. The straightforward and explicit descriptions have been greatly reduced, and the appearances and plots of female characters have been reduced a lot. The previous situation was not so much a shift in the creation of works that was closer to the theme of patriotism and national destiny, but rather a product created by the market. The work was passively revised under market feedback. The previous deliberately vulgar description was the author's attempt to cater to some readers and thought he had an audience. Now he has hit a wall in the feedback from real readers. No one bought it, so he changed his strategy. The subject matter itself is novel and there is still something to behold. I am willing to give it another chance. But the early viewing experience was really bad. Almost every important plot point contained words and phrases that would not fit into the book. There have been several times when I have wanted to comment and curse while driving. As a female reader, those descriptions are not physical. The women described by the author reveal a stereotyped, vulgar, and lack of respect in both their psychology and appearance. Normal, self-respecting, privacy-conscious women would not wear such clothes, have such a mentality, let alone view themselves from such a perspective and logic, which is disrespectful to themselves. Rather than a lack of writing skills, it is better to say that there is a lack of understanding of women and there is a bias. This is also the reason for the 7.4 Points, which is uncomfortable! I sincerely hope that I will completely transform into a career-oriented person in the future, completely give up on the relationship line, and switch to no CP. Judging from the author's intention to collect love lines in the book, as of my review, there are about 1,300+ readers who have said they don't want a female protagonist, of which at least 800+ clearly expressed their preference for no cp, and only 300+ for single female protagonists. Weird relationships and multi-female stallion stories are both around 150. The data can already prove the audience of this book. Whether it is unrequited love or love, the public acceptance is very low. If you really can't write, just give up describing the appearance. If you are willing to learn and polish, you can search for famous articles, articles written by ancient people about beauties, look at portraits of ancient people, and use ancient poems and words. A romantic statement without a single word is far more powerful than a straightforward and materialistic description. The charm of a character is not only brought by skin, but also by conversation, talent, temperament and character. Gentle people may not be weak or tough, cold people may hide their loneliness, and independent people may be cold but not necessarily without warmth. People are complex and three-dimensional. If you break away from the flat labeling and write about the multi-faceted complexity of the characters, that is, from flat characters to round characters, then the quality of this book can increase it by 1.3 Points. I hope that my article can give the author some suggestions and a little confidence, and also bring a refreshing breeze to readers who are anxious about reading this article, and give the author another chance 😄

I feel that the author is quite interesting, and the content is very interesting and interesting. However, when describing the female characters, some of the words used make readers uncomfortable, but overall it is still very good. I hope that the author can continue to work hard 💕

There is no heroine, my dear, please, I finally found a novel that does not have a heroine in cooperation with the country. Please don't have a heroine 😢😢😢 Another very important point is that if you don't have a female protagonist, you must never have an affair with a female protagonist. Beg on your knees! OTZ The full text is a bit funny and humorous. The immigration policy implemented in the early stage is very good. This is what you have to do at this time. There are a little bit of small poisons but no big poisons. You can attack the enemies directly if you can beat them, and you can go on to attack the ones you can't beat. It's quite fun. Another point is that the author asked those national academicians to cultivate immortality first, which really made my eyes shine. I give you a thumbs up 👍! I hope the author's books will get better and better, but you must never have an affair with a woman when you decide there will be no heroine. This is deception in principle (I can't accept it, it's a bit obscene behavior → personal opinion)

Anyway, it looks pretty good now, but it's a bit lacking. I hope I can write more and make it more interesting. It would be a little bit more enjoyable, but it wouldn't be particularly acceptable if it has a female protagonist and it's not well written. Because a lot of people who write male videos tend to write that the female protagonist is very thin and fake. The portrayal of other female characters is also very good, but the portrayal of the heroine is thin, beautiful, innocent and weak, so I don't like it. If the author feels that it would be better to write a female protagonist, I would support it. Personally, I also like reading romance novels

After seeing the latest chapter, I think it's okay. It's about traveling through the world of immortality, surrendering to the country, and developing together. It's an old routine. The classic protagonist must be questioned. Crisis always turns disaster into good fortune. But it's still okay to read it when the book is short. Although there is nothing new.

The first update, Chapter 99. The setting is very novel and the plot is interesting. I look forward to the follow-up stories! Request no CP!

There are two poisonous points for pursuing from the demon cultivator. First, a peerless genius is threatened by a Foundation-Building Lung Mist, and the elders don't help the genius. I think it's impossible for someone who can become an elder to just think about the present. Second: There is a small part of yellow. Why is it becoming more and more watery?

Please give me a five-star review, it's really important to the sheep [Sending my heart]