Time Travel Ten Days Later: the Whole Country Helped Me Forge the Sect Order

I have reached Chapter 45. The subject matter is good, but the male protagonist starts to have fits as soon as he meets a woman. Some metaphors are also uncomfortable. It is recommended that there be less descriptions and hints of female figures. I'm really convinced. Even though I gave it 4 stars, some people said that I was dissatisfied with the author's writing style. Now you really want to give it 2 stars to express your dissatisfaction.

Tied 45 chapters. Counting food and grass, there are many clues and it is worth reading. When encountering a female character, the male protagonist will activate butter mode and deduct one star.

After reading Chapter 160, I can clearly feel the author's adjustments in the later period. The straightforward and explicit descriptions have been greatly reduced, and the appearances and plots of female characters have been reduced a lot. The previous situation was not so much a shift in the creation of works that was closer to the theme of patriotism and national destiny, but rather a product created by the market. The work was passively revised under market feedback. The previous deliberately vulgar description was the author's attempt to cater to some readers and thought he had an audience. Now he has hit a wall in the feedback from real readers. No one bought it, so he changed his strategy. The subject matter itself is novel and there is still something to behold. I am willing to give it another chance. But the early viewing experience was really bad. Almost every important plot point contained words and phrases that would not fit into the book. There have been several times when I have wanted to comment and curse while driving. As a female reader, those descriptions are not physical. The women described by the author reveal a stereotyped, vulgar, and lack of respect in both their psychology and appearance. Normal, self-respecting, privacy-conscious women would not wear such clothes, have such a mentality, let alone view themselves from such a perspective and logic, which is disrespectful to themselves. Rather than a lack of writing skills, it is better to say that there is a lack of understanding of women and there is a bias. This is also the reason for the 7.4 Points, which is uncomfortable! I sincerely hope that I will completely transform into a career-oriented person in the future, completely give up on the relationship line, and switch to no CP. Judging from the author's intention to collect love lines in the book, as of my review, there are about 1,300+ readers who have said they don't want a female protagonist, of which at least 800+ clearly expressed their preference for no cp, and only 300+ for single female protagonists. Weird relationships and multi-female stallion stories are both around 150. The data can already prove the audience of this book. Whether it is unrequited love or love, the public acceptance is very low. If you really can't write, just give up describing the appearance. If you are willing to learn and polish, you can search for famous articles, articles written by ancient people about beauties, look at portraits of ancient people, and use ancient poems and words. A romantic statement without a single word is far more powerful than a straightforward and materialistic description. The charm of a character is not only brought by skin, but also by conversation, talent, temperament and character. Gentle people may not be weak or tough, cold people may hide their loneliness, and independent people may be cold but not necessarily without warmth. People are complex and three-dimensional. If you break away from the flat labeling and write about the multi-faceted complexity of the characters, that is, from flat characters to round characters, then the quality of this book can increase it by 1.3 Points. I hope that my article can give the author some suggestions and a little confidence, and also bring a refreshing breeze to readers who are anxious about reading this article, and give the author another chance [laughs]

Anyway, it looks pretty good now, but it's a bit lacking. I hope I can write more and make it more interesting. It would be a little bit more enjoyable, but it wouldn't be particularly acceptable if it has a female protagonist and it's not well written. Because a lot of people who write male videos tend to write that the female protagonist is very thin and fake. The portrayal of other female characters is also very good, but the portrayal of the heroine is thin, beautiful, innocent and weak, so I don't like it. If the author feels that it would be better to write a female protagonist, I would support it. Personally, I also like reading romance novels

After seeing the latest chapter, I think it's okay. It's about traveling through the world of immortality, surrendering to the country, and developing together. It's an old routine. The classic protagonist must be questioned. Crisis always turns disaster into good fortune. But it's still okay to read it when the book is short. Although there is nothing new.

The first update, Chapter 99. The setting is very novel and the plot is interesting. I look forward to the follow-up stories! Request no CP!

Please give me a five-star review, it's really important to the sheep [Sending my heart]

Although it looks good, the yellow button on the back really makes me want to escape, but escaping is useless, so I came to urge the update. What a delicious novel! The progress bar is about to reach the end, and the "Update" button is about to appear - but is it really so? (Press pause) Here, please allow me to pay homage to the audience and ask you to take the time to listen to what I see. ⭐Ah, the legendary writer⭐ ❤️The gospel official of words❤️ 💔How long will it take for you to update a new chapter💔 📚Relive history! 📚 🌊Cross the ocean of text and data traffic🌊 ❤️Bring the latest updates right in front of my eyes❤️ 🤫The process of reading your text🤫 🎓Always reminds me of the happy time when I was a teenager studying🎓 🤲🏻If there is a one in ten thousand chance, you can update ten chapters a day🤲🏻 🥰My victory will be certain🥰 🥵In the name of readers, I will invite you to step into the prison of breaking news.

It's pretty good. I like this kind of plot where the country and the protagonist help each other before.

It's good to watch, I hope I don't write about the female protagonist, and I don't brush aside the details. I will continue to update.

Why is it only rated 7 points? Damn it, such a beautiful book will definitely be rated 9 points later. Children, if you pass by, don't miss it. This book is a super-combustible rebirth and time-traveling novel that combines "turning over to the country", "scientific cultivation of immortality", "some national luck competition", "industrial Cthulhu", "Chinese planting techniques" and "various humorous jokes". I have spent a day to catch up on it and left comments passionately, just to meet the author's conditions for additional updates. Fellow Taoists, please give me a helping hand. I hope the author will update the code soon. After I finish reading this excellent work, I will not forget your support. At that time, each person will give a high-grade spiritual stone in return! Uh-huh, if the author doesn't update it, I will go crazy T^T

Before reading the book, the review said that the description was uncomfortable. Maybe it's because I read the book faster or the author changed it. For now, it's okay for me personally and the plot is okay. Of course, everyone has their own opinions.

So far, it's okay. The key point of selling the sentimental plot is that you can clearly understand where to sell it. It can be read as a relief article (but you will feel bored after reading it for a long time. After all, the script is so overlapping and overlapping after reading it for a long time. The author always adds unnecessary subplots. I'm not sure whether I want to make a funny and misunderstood flow at the word count. Anyway, I couldn't laugh at all. I just felt that it was bloody and irritating. The divine narration was completely unnecessary and it was all God's will. As for the description of women they mentioned, it should have been changed when I listened to the book or read it. Anyway, I didn't pay attention to it. It's okay as a time-killing article. I've seen 300+ and I'll give it five stars. As for the actual reason why I gave it four stars, it's because the author of the second article has inserted a female core disciple next door to the god [laughs] to listen to the book for me🔥Click to the top and jump straight to reading at the speed of light.

I feel that the author is quite interesting, and the content is very interesting and interesting. However, when describing the female characters, some of the words used make readers uncomfortable, but overall it is still very good. I hope that the author can continue to work hard [Sending Hearts]

It's very interesting. It can reflect the feelings of family and country in the early stage. Later, it will show whether there is blind confidence in the world of cultivation. The characters are pretty good and rich. Overall, they are very good. It's really fun to read this kind of writing. I highly recommend it.

I have read more than 300 chapters. The overall writing is quite good, and the plot line is quite interesting. The good thing is that the male protagonist's actions after rebirth have received positive feedback, and the progress of joining forces with the country has skyrocketed. Anyway, I can't stop. At the beginning, there was something not very good about the female characters, but after the author corrected it later, there was no problem. Now I prefer to have no heroine. According to the personality of each character, what they say and what they do almost match each other, which is quite interesting. If there's something not so good about it, it's that women are jealous of each other. Waiting for the author to update a lot. I started reading yesterday and have seen more than 300 chapters. [Please give me more updates] [Please give me more updates] [Please give me more updates] [Please give me more updates] [Please give me more updates] [Please give me more updates] [Please give me more updates]

The writing is very good, and the plot is not muddled. It directly hands you over to the country and makes it easy for everyone to cultivate immortality. It also crushed the old crooks all the way, which was so cool! I hope there will be no heroine who will focus on her career and country. This is just the beginning, please keep updating! [Bookshelf plus one][Bookshelf plus one]

It's okay. It's not the kind that has a golden finger and surpasses all the others in the same period in just a few chapters. I've been looking for books recently and most of them are the kind of light-hearted ones that rely on plug-ins to become a boss. I saw the protagonist's own efforts. There are some small flaws, but the flaws are not concealed.

I particularly like this kind of novel where the country is the backing and the protagonist leads the country to take off and become stronger! Very beautiful, give the author a big thumbs up👍👍👍

I have finished reading with 15 chapters left. I feel pretty good. I can at least get a rating of around 8.5. I don't know if it's because of other people's malicious low-star rating or what. There are a lot of laughs. Come on, author, believe in yourself.

It's a reminder, it's good-looking, has no flaws, is logical, story-telling, and can be read. The big competition in Chapter 134 is a climax, a bit passionate and beautiful to watch. It has a story and makes sense logically. I like it.

I think it's quite fun. Except for the pornography, there's nothing that makes me uncomfortable. I just pretend I can't see those places [face covering]. After all, it's not easy to read a novel that suits my appetite. I hope the author can update it soon.

Laoyang's new book is still exciting I hope this book will be longer, one of the few excellent books on Tomato [Thoughts]

Ah, this book is so beautiful [blowing kiss], I read it all for him in one day. [Shy] Update soon. Just don't have a female protagonist, no way. [Aggrieved] After reading it, I just couldn't get enough of it. But luckily, I found meal replacement. [Staring] No one has any luck.

It feels very good. I don't know why the book reviews are so low [please update]

I beg the author to update more, it's not enough [crying]. I've been obsessed with this kind of novel recently. I don't know if there will be a female protagonist in the future. I hope there will be no cp. I see that there is no female protagonist at this stage [note]

I have been following it since years ago. It is a rare subject and it is very interesting. [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] Author, please update, it's better to scare me [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing]

Dots of starlight are distributed in every corner of the city, depicting the territory of Daxia. It is the light emitted by people from all over the country with flashlights. (The author is really good, but there are some minor flaws. It will not affect reading)

This book is like a beam of light, the writing is delicate and powerful, and the plots are intertwined. I fell into it as I read it. Every character is so vivid that you'll remember it for a long time after closing the book. It's worth staying up late to finish!

This is a cool article about cultivating immortals and adding national luck. Although there are some inconsistencies in the system of cultivating immortals and the logic of time travel at first, and there are also the shortcomings of many cool articles with too many Internet words, but the shortcomings are not concealed, you can keep reading, and the writing is not a noob. I recommend this book, and hope the author will update it soon [Sending heartfelt wishes]