[Growth] [You can watch it if you haven't played it] [Redemption] [No system] [Multiple heroines]
As a commander immune to the contamination of the Pamish virus, Ash met Lucia, Liv and Li and reorganized the Gray Crow team.
As this team continues to grow under his leadership, the bond between several people also deepens.
"I think it would be better if we still need to rely on outsmarting them." Ashiu said to the three legendary players around him.
"How to outsmart him?" Liv wondered.
"Lucia, what do you think?" Asked Ash.
Lucia remained silent, just put down the knife and silently pulled out a very thick dictionary from the bookshelf.
Seeing this, the corner of Satori's mouth twitched, "You'll beat someone to death with this!!"
Reader comments
This book is really good-looking. I have also found a few books related to dual combat before, but too many of them were cheating. After reading it, I felt that the plot was not at all right. The plot of this book is very well written. Although it does not have a particularly explosive plot, it is very comfortable to read. Especially for someone like me who has played Zhan Duo and is very picky about the plot, I have no problem reading it. I'm looking forward to the author's next plot. As long as the plot doesn't break down, I'll read your book as the second line of the dual-body plot [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]
This book looks pretty good, and the author's writing style is not bad, but it feels a bit boring. Why do you say that? For example, the plot of the main plot has been made a little more detailed, and it always feels "familiar", but some small details have been changed. I have finished reading the chapters I have written so far, and I am looking forward to the next one [Like]
It's pretty cool. I feel like the protagonist can do even more superhuman things than the original lead after becoming immune to Pamish [face covering]
The quality is very good, it has its own thing, and the commander of this novel is really useful in the early stage [face covering], he is simply a superman, this novel is really good, especially the theme of double combat, it is not easy [almost crying]
This novel must have taken a lot of time. It can be seen that some details are very attentive. The author has a very clear understanding of Zhan Shuang. Overall, it is a very high-quality Zhan Shuang article that I have seen.
When writing a Zhan Shuang fan novel, especially if Gray Crow is the protagonist, it is inevitable that the novel will be close to the original work (due to various reasons). How to add and reasonably integrate your own elements on top of this is the key - especially for those who do not follow the deus ex machina routine. Personally, I think this book and the next book "Death Retrospection" have done a good job, at least up to the latest chapter.
As for traffic, we can only say that we rely on love to generate electricity. Speaking directly on the two platforms of Maoke and Yangshizi, in terms of pure dual content, this one is already the top one in terms of traffic and quality.
I think the author, since you are willing to pick it up again after two years of being in Maogu, and you have even issued a special statement, it means that you probably have something to hold on to. It would be great if you can calm your mind. But if you really feel that too much utilitarianism in your head affects your writing, it's not impossible to call it a day. But then again, the content of the current serialization has actually equaled or even exceeded the author's old one. It would be a pity if it really got cut off.
Love too much
After staying up two nights in a row to read this fanfic, I have nothing else to say, except that I like it, pure liking and love. This magical book is already a fairy in my mind, an indispensable medicine, and an extremely outstanding work in the Zhanshuang fan fiction. I hope the author will update more
First of all, let's talk about the evaluation. If you see it, you'll earn it! I think this book deserves more than a 7.5, At least an 8.5, Or even a 9. In my opinion, even if you don't read the subject of war, this novel is quite unique and excellent among fan fictions. There are no brainless cheats or OOC. I only saw vivid characters telling fascinating stories. It is true that not every character has been fully developed so far, but I can really see the character arc of the protagonist. He is no longer an object or substitute brought in by the readers, but a flesh-and-blood person. This is really awesome. The author's writing style is really good in Tomato. I have never seen an article that writes the protagonist's growth so perfectly. At the same time, the plot has never been boring to me. It is neither a one-man show nor a redundant protagonist.
If you have played Zhan Shuang, you will be done without thinking. This may be Tomato's best Zhan Shuang fanfic; if you have not played it, the book itself is also a very good novel and very friendly to newcomers. You only need to make up for the settings of Pamish Virus. Photos of many characters can be found in the comments. I believe that as long as you don't dislike the subject of war, you will definitely like this novel. It's just that the subject matter limits its popularity. It perfectly presents the best fan fiction in my eyes. You must read it! ! !
Digression: The author must not stop updating if the data is not good. I have never read such a good fan novel, and I am really scared. Be sure not to stop updating, readers will do anything [crying]
The original chief was too much like a hero and a savior. His whole body was filled with the glory of divinity, but he had very little human side. He even just looked like an extraordinary person who existed only to save the world.
The protagonist Ashiu has a more humane side than the original chief. He can fight with his brothers and friends, and make some jokes in less formal occasions. He is more humane and more like an "ordinary person". Although this ordinary person is constantly being pushed forward, it is also better for us players and readers to get involved.
Anyway, the author wrote really well
What a pure war pair, 99%, rare [smile][smile][smile]
Very very good, the first one is just a foreshadowing, the rest is really beautiful, and the writing is not bad either, it gets better and better the more you look at it, and it's very polished\(//∇//)\
A rare fan, please support me
As a person who has never played Zhan Shuang, I can understand it after reading this book, and the impression is very good (it only represents my personal opinion) and it is highly recommended.
It's pretty good. In fact, I'm looking forward to the Shura Field later [laughing]
As expected, no one who reads the Zhanshuang fanfic is worried about knives. They probably feel that no matter how hard the fanfic author works, they can't write anything more knife-friendly than Cradle Parade and Cut into a Butterfly [Cool][Cool][Cool]
Although it is said that Zhan Shuang's fan fiction is alive and victorious, this one is really well written.
This is a long-lost high-quality fanfic. Both Xiaolu and Liv are written with great soul. I highly recommend watching it.
One final sentence: You won the i-TV competition [crying]
Just use a saber to decapitate Musashi Kyu-type. He is a superman.
The strongest fan level
No OOC, no messy system, no deus ex machina, the writing style is comfortable, and the rhythm is smooth. Even if it is not a fan, it is a high-quality two-dimensional science fiction novel, and the author's writing skills are also top-notch on Tomato.
The content is okay, but I'm curious about what the author will write next. After all, looking at it now, there is no chief at all [face covering]
Well, it's quite good-looking, and I can see that the author is very attentive. Although there are occasional typos in the article and some phrases that the author has not adjusted well, it does not affect the overall reading. The author should be writing a book for the first time, but if this book can be successfully completed, then the author should be regarded as a real new writer. Although the number of words is relatively small now, in terms of quality, compared with other Zhanshuang Tongwen, it is definitely at the forefront, although the number of Tongwen is indeed small.
You must keep writing, it's not easy to find a good Zhanshuang fanfic [Like]
I don't know how to say it, but it's quite beautiful [Like]
There are very few texts on Zhanshuang. This is the best one I have ever read on Zhanshuang.
Tomato basically doesn't have any good-looking books about both writing and writing. The early impressions of this book are pretty good, so I'm looking forward to it.
As of Chapter 121, I personally think it is very good. It is an excellent war novel and worth reading.
Let's give it five stars first.
Okay, it's rare to have both war and literature.
It looks good, but it's time to update [I've learned]
This book is really good-looking. I have also found a few books related to dual combat before, but too many of them were cheating. After reading it, I felt that the plot was not at all right. The plot of this book is very well written. Although it does not have a particularly explosive plot, it is very comfortable to read. Especially for someone like me who has played Zhan Duo and is very picky about the plot, I have no problem reading it. I'm looking forward to the author's next plot. As long as the plot doesn't break down, I'll read your book as the second line of the dual-body plot [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]
This book looks pretty good, and the author's writing style is not bad, but it feels a bit boring. Why do you say that? For example, the plot of the main plot has been made a little more detailed, and it always feels "familiar", but some small details have been changed. I have finished reading the chapters I have written so far, and I am looking forward to the next one [Like]
It's pretty cool. I feel like the protagonist can do even more superhuman things than the original lead after becoming immune to Pamish [face covering]
The quality is very good, it has its own thing, and the commander of this novel is really useful in the early stage [face covering], he is simply a superman, this novel is really good, especially the theme of double combat, it is not easy [almost crying]
This novel must have taken a lot of time. It can be seen that some details are very attentive. The author has a very clear understanding of Zhan Shuang. Overall, it is a very high-quality Zhan Shuang article that I have seen.
When writing a Zhan Shuang fan novel, especially if Gray Crow is the protagonist, it is inevitable that the novel will be close to the original work (due to various reasons). How to add and reasonably integrate your own elements on top of this is the key - especially for those who do not follow the deus ex machina routine. Personally, I think this book and the next book "Death Retrospection" have done a good job, at least up to the latest chapter. As for traffic, we can only say that we rely on love to generate electricity. Speaking directly on the two platforms of Maoke and Yangshizi, in terms of pure dual content, this one is already the top one in terms of traffic and quality. I think the author, since you are willing to pick it up again after two years of being in Maogu, and you have even issued a special statement, it means that you probably have something to hold on to. It would be great if you can calm your mind. But if you really feel that too much utilitarianism in your head affects your writing, it's not impossible to call it a day. But then again, the content of the current serialization has actually equaled or even exceeded the author's old one. It would be a pity if it really got cut off.
Love too much After staying up two nights in a row to read this fanfic, I have nothing else to say, except that I like it, pure liking and love. This magical book is already a fairy in my mind, an indispensable medicine, and an extremely outstanding work in the Zhanshuang fan fiction. I hope the author will update more
First of all, let's talk about the evaluation. If you see it, you'll earn it! I think this book deserves more than a 7.5, At least an 8.5, Or even a 9. In my opinion, even if you don't read the subject of war, this novel is quite unique and excellent among fan fictions. There are no brainless cheats or OOC. I only saw vivid characters telling fascinating stories. It is true that not every character has been fully developed so far, but I can really see the character arc of the protagonist. He is no longer an object or substitute brought in by the readers, but a flesh-and-blood person. This is really awesome. The author's writing style is really good in Tomato. I have never seen an article that writes the protagonist's growth so perfectly. At the same time, the plot has never been boring to me. It is neither a one-man show nor a redundant protagonist. If you have played Zhan Shuang, you will be done without thinking. This may be Tomato's best Zhan Shuang fanfic; if you have not played it, the book itself is also a very good novel and very friendly to newcomers. You only need to make up for the settings of Pamish Virus. Photos of many characters can be found in the comments. I believe that as long as you don't dislike the subject of war, you will definitely like this novel. It's just that the subject matter limits its popularity. It perfectly presents the best fan fiction in my eyes. You must read it! ! ! Digression: The author must not stop updating if the data is not good. I have never read such a good fan novel, and I am really scared. Be sure not to stop updating, readers will do anything [crying]
The original chief was too much like a hero and a savior. His whole body was filled with the glory of divinity, but he had very little human side. He even just looked like an extraordinary person who existed only to save the world. The protagonist Ashiu has a more humane side than the original chief. He can fight with his brothers and friends, and make some jokes in less formal occasions. He is more humane and more like an "ordinary person". Although this ordinary person is constantly being pushed forward, it is also better for us players and readers to get involved. Anyway, the author wrote really well
What a pure war pair, 99%, rare [smile][smile][smile]
Very very good, the first one is just a foreshadowing, the rest is really beautiful, and the writing is not bad either, it gets better and better the more you look at it, and it's very polished\(//∇//)\
A rare fan, please support me
As a person who has never played Zhan Shuang, I can understand it after reading this book, and the impression is very good (it only represents my personal opinion) and it is highly recommended.
It's pretty good. In fact, I'm looking forward to the Shura Field later [laughing]
As expected, no one who reads the Zhanshuang fanfic is worried about knives. They probably feel that no matter how hard the fanfic author works, they can't write anything more knife-friendly than Cradle Parade and Cut into a Butterfly [Cool][Cool][Cool]
Although it is said that Zhan Shuang's fan fiction is alive and victorious, this one is really well written.
This is a long-lost high-quality fanfic. Both Xiaolu and Liv are written with great soul. I highly recommend watching it. One final sentence: You won the i-TV competition [crying]
Just use a saber to decapitate Musashi Kyu-type. He is a superman.
The strongest fan level No OOC, no messy system, no deus ex machina, the writing style is comfortable, and the rhythm is smooth. Even if it is not a fan, it is a high-quality two-dimensional science fiction novel, and the author's writing skills are also top-notch on Tomato.
The content is okay, but I'm curious about what the author will write next. After all, looking at it now, there is no chief at all [face covering]
Well, it's quite good-looking, and I can see that the author is very attentive. Although there are occasional typos in the article and some phrases that the author has not adjusted well, it does not affect the overall reading. The author should be writing a book for the first time, but if this book can be successfully completed, then the author should be regarded as a real new writer. Although the number of words is relatively small now, in terms of quality, compared with other Zhanshuang Tongwen, it is definitely at the forefront, although the number of Tongwen is indeed small.
You must keep writing, it's not easy to find a good Zhanshuang fanfic [Like]
I don't know how to say it, but it's quite beautiful [Like]
There are very few texts on Zhanshuang. This is the best one I have ever read on Zhanshuang.
Top-notch biliterate, 4-year-old certified [laughter]
Tomato basically doesn't have any good-looking books about both writing and writing. The early impressions of this book are pretty good, so I'm looking forward to it.
As of Chapter 121, I personally think it is very good. It is an excellent war novel and worth reading.
Let's give it five stars first.
Okay, it's rare to have both war and literature.
It looks good, but it's time to update [I've learned]