Goddess Strategy System, I Became a Succubus

Now I'm reading chapter 12. Not one girl was taken in, but only five heroines appeared. The plot was too fast, and there was no meat or ambiguity. It was too fast, and there was nothing interesting about it. There were still typos in some places, but the author came up with a pretty good plot. , But it's just boring to watch. In some places, the plot can be fast, but it can't be without meat or ambiguity. There are too many female protagonists. There are only more than 10 pictures now. You can take one first, and then slowly collect seven or eight or five or six later. You only appear like this, but there is no ambiguity. In fact, it is not interesting to watch. Some places are long and large, like a paper, and the author is advised to revise them. It's like this when you first start writing novels, come on