Time Travel: I Am a Flower Picker

The previous article is very good. The descriptions of martial arts and the harem are very attractive. However, I don't know what the author's mental state is when he wants to write a cuckold plot. I can't resist it. It's worth reading if you like martial arts and cuckolds.

Very pretty. On the bright side, it tastes like a swordsman in the snow, but on the deeper level, it smells like Jin Yong. There are a few character names that are quite interesting. Lu Fang is Lu Fangweng. If Liu Yuxi is used, will he have a more Taoist image? The name Xie Lingyun, the most beautiful woman in the world, cannot conjure up the image of a beauty in her mind. All she can think of is the image of the old man 'Da Xie'.

See Fu Yaoqin there. The writing is first-rate, with a lot of literary talent, and the logic is also online. It is not the type of mindless fun. It's just that the imagination is not very good, the plot arrangement is not intense enough, there is a lack of bright lines, almost no hidden lines, and the plot sparks cannot burst out. The character of the protagonist is not bad, although he started out as a lewd thief, but later became a slut after studying medicine. However, shortcomings in the plot are hard to make up for with literary talent. Fantasy novels pay attention to the law and land of wealthy couples, supplemented by the six arts of cultivating immortals. The author highlights one couple, but the couple is also written very plainly. The wealth is more than 7,000 taels, and it was looted from a black shop. On the Tomato platform Even though he is poor, his skills are not brilliant enough... Originally, the story about studying medicine was quite good, but before he got too far into it, he arranged for the protagonist to learn swordsmanship, and the weapons were just gifts... Only the author's literary talents and logic + the imagination of fantasy novels can create a hit work. Four-star medium grade. Mark

If this book was mainly about Xie Xiaoyi, it would be okay. If it is bad, it should be more thorough. It would be too fragmented to make this person dare not do anything but rely on his conscience. The idea is good, but I feel that you worry too much, the author. In fact, dark literature is more suitable for your idea. Write boldly.

Dear author, the plot you wrote is very attractive, but can you add AI-generated pictures at the end of each chapter that match the female character in your mind? Nowadays, many AI-generated images are free, but it will take more time.

The character's angle is tricky, and the protagonist's background is used to greatly enhance the conflict of the story, which is very interesting. I'm just a little worried that if there are too many women, the story will be greatly reduced. After all, strong branches and weak trunks will be weak.

I haven't seen this kind of writing in a long time. The storyline is compact and the plot is endearing

Not bad, the novel is good, you can read it! Can travel between two realms.

You can cheer up fellow Taoists, just don't be a virgin and a sweet dog. It's worth pursuing me all the time. The protagonist will definitely become popular if he continues with the idea of ​​dual cultivation to become an immortal.

The book is very beautiful, the writing is brilliant, the characters have rich inner descriptions, and the content is ups and downs.

It's very exciting, martial arts, not a stud, not pornographic, just right. Update quickly The poem goes well with Wen Chao Gong.

The writing of this book is actually quite contradictory, because it is really upright, romantic, and loves girls like crazy, but evil is also really evil. I hope that people who read it are at least 18 years old, so that they can clearly distinguish between the book and reality, otherwise it will take three years to start. . .

The plot is twists and turns, the artistic conception is profound, and the encounters in it are only understood when you are older!

It's a good start, at least it's not the same as everyone else's, so encourage me! I can't do it in the back, I want to show off, but my level is not good enough, I show my cowardice everywhere!

I haven't seen this kind of writing style in a long time. It's wonderful and exciting, but the pace escalates too quickly. If I don't follow the story later, I'm afraid it will be finished in less than a hundred words.

Highly recommended! ! ! The author's writing style is extraordinary and his writing is skillful. The fighting, the beauty, and the poetry all have their own uniqueness. The protagonist has two names and two personalities, both good and evil, and has his own rules of conduct. Fighting is not fun without brains. If you can't beat, then you will set traps, use strategies, and play mental games.

The setting is old-fashioned, but the plot is not. The author is good at making the plot coherent, with ups and downs. Although there are not too many climaxes, there are still small exciting points. The most important thing is that the protagonist is not too annoying, and it is consistent with the identity of the flower thief himself. There is no talk of selling dog meat with sheep's heads, but it is still worth watching.

Beautiful, highly recommended! The psychological description and inner game of the characters are very delicate, and there are also some parts that combine modern wisdom and ancient power tactics. Not much to say, book friends will have their own opinions!

It looks pretty good for now, keep studying and hope there will be surprises!

Wow, the author's writing style is absolutely amazing! Every word is like a smart elf, jumping happily between the pages, weaving a dream-like world. The plot has ups and downs, just like riding a roller coaster, making people's hearts go up and down, completely immersed in it, and unable to stop at all. The characterization of the characters is even more penetrating, as if those characters are standing alive in front of you. Their emotions, anger, sorrow, joy, and thoughts are all displayed by the author in a delicate way, making people feel for them. Moreover, the author's choice of words and sentences are particularly exquisite. They are both graceful and elegant, yet lively and lively. Every sentence is worth savoring, just like tasting a glass of mellow wine. The more you taste, the more delicious it becomes. I really hope the author can continue to create more wonderful works like this. I can't wait to continue following the author's journey with words!

If you can't go up or down, the exciting part is gone. Otherwise it would look good, what a pity! The five-star reviews are gone. I can only give it four stars.

Not bad, the direction of the story is very novel and not boring. However, the writing is a bit scattered and the main story line is not compact enough. The martial arts is mixed with the fairy tale, and the main story is mixed with the poetry branch, which creates a strong sense of separation. But I happen to like copying poetry sections, so it's okay. However, I really don't recommend stitching too much. Originally, the story was quite linear, but once stitched, it became a bit uncomfortable.

Well written and very personal. Worth recommending.

At least there is a little excitement about innovation, which is what men like to read.

This book can be read from the beginning to the end. The plot can be anything. It is a good book. I have 2,500 hours plus another account before which should have 4,000 to 5,000 hours. Recommended by old bookworms.

The plot is quite novel. This is the first time I have seen such a real flower-picking thief. The writing is a bit lacking. The plot is advanced for the sake of the plot and the middle content is skipped. There is also a martial arts realm. The writing is a bit vague and there is no obvious difference in the realm. However, the plot theme is still quite rare. Please support it.

It feels a bit like a practice, and more of a channel to teach people how to fall in love, which is very good

As a martial arts novel, it is indeed very exciting, and the edges are well polished. It is a pity that too many have been deleted. The score of 7.7 Is low, it should be above 9.3!

Liking women is the foundation of every man, but Xie Xiaoyi likes women and will live and die for them. It is very humane and not suitable for teenagers. I watch the drama every day and like it.

More than 100 pictures, good style, not bad. I hope there will be no poisonous spots in the future.