Taking Turns Dealing with Yishu's Mad Niece, Ruyi

It's pretty good, but it's too long. I hope it can be combined into one, that is, two pieces combined into one. Otherwise, I won't have the desire to read it even though it's so good [face covering] Thirty or forty pictures for one character is almost enough. I don't have the patience to read fifty, sixty or more pictures [laughs awkwardly]

The plot design is quite good, the rhythm is online, but the colloquial expressions are wordy, and it is a long paragraph. I recommend a book to the author, Tomato. It is written by a storyteller in Sichuan. The heroine is dressed as Wang Xifeng's maid. The wording in that book is also a life-oriented expression, but he handles it without being wordy and uses concise and concise words.

Hahaha, even though it's weird, it's completely in line with the character and not inconsistent at all. Little Leaf hasn't finished writing yet? But Li Jingyan is so good-looking. He truly kills everyone equally, which is in line with Concubine Qi's mentality of taking revenge on Hong Kong. She must catch them all in one fell swoop. It's great. Faster, faster, more. The ladies in The Legend of Da Zhen come to Da Ru Chuan to show their full potential.

Because it was not finished, I saw An Lingrong's version of Jing Se's story. The overall feeling is good, because this is Ruyijie's new story, not a refinement or modification based on the original drama version. It is a new story that revolves around Ruyi, although it is quite outrageous and exaggerated. But the author has thinking and new ideas. This is much better than other similar fanfics. The original play was in tatters, and even after it was mended, it was old and couldn't be picked up. Authors are encouraged to keep creating and not to stop updating.

Ye Lanyi's article was quite uncomfortable to read. A century later, Ye Lanyi was still sterilized. . . . .

It's a very special perspective. I'm looking for someone from Nian Shilan.

Very good but too long [laughing]

It's very good-looking, especially Concubine Qi dressed as the Queen Mother. The characters are not OOC and have the characteristics of the original drama. The scenes with the two silly beauties Xiao Gao are very funny.

Shouldn't it shouldn't? Why is this book so popular? [Laughs][laughs][laughs]

Full marks for being as cruel as the writing, full marks for being funny, no poison and no character breakdown.