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The writing is very good. I don't see any poisonous points so far. I wonder if Kiana will tell Mei Yi about Mei Yi in another world when their relationship gets better later. I want to see the overbearing president Mei Yi get jealous [laughter]

The writing is pretty good, but I'm a little curious because I just woke up in a hospital bed from the battlefield. Wouldn't I think it was some kind of world bubble? I feel like I lowered my guard too early. But overall, I still like it. Mainly because Chongchong is really smart, especially when alone, even in the world bubble, his vigilance and IQ are very good. If she is not strong enough, she will only be more vigilant, and her wandering survivability will be even higher. Otherwise, I wouldn't have been able to wander alone in a dangerous place in the cold winter for so long and still be alive. If this could be added, I feel it would fit Kiana's original character more closely. Of course, I am just a suggestion. It is also good for the author to have his own thinking.

It's pretty good, but her personality is different from Kiana's lively and naughty character in the early days of the Honkai World. It doesn't look like she came from the Honkai World through time travel, but like she originally came from this world. Although she has received the memories, she won't directly become the original owner. She was able to travel alone across Europe to find her father. The fact that she lost her money and didn't starve to death shows that she could still support herself. She might be confused after traveling through time, but she wouldn't be so depressed. If she really traveled through time, she might be worried about her friends and family in the collapsed world, and might be confused because she came to a new world, but she would still face the new life with a smile. The writing in the article is a bit too depressing, and she also has a sense of inferiority, and she doesn't have Kiana's optimism and confidence at all. Moreover, the setting of soul travel always feels a bit awkward. It is better to write it directly as a parallel world without collapse. Kiana's mentality changed due to her life and death experience in a car accident. Coupled with Mei's care and subsequent concern and explanation, the relationship between them eased, and then went further with Mei's attack.

It's very interesting. The overbearing CEO Mei Yi falls in love with the poor little Kiana. He expects Kiana to fight back and then be suppressed by Mei Heng.

It looks like Ya 1, but it's all just fantasy [Cool]

Overbearing Mei Yi fell in love with me. Is this the overbearing President's article? It feels shameful, but also quite sweet

How can I put it, it looks okay, but Kiana is a bit seriously affected by the memory of the original owner, and Kaslana is the kind of smart person who does not have an external brain. It is actually quite simple for Kiana to support herself.

Yes, it's very interesting, very good, the plot is very interesting, but sometimes there is a problem, that is, when writing, it is easy to use the limited perspective of the character to write information that can be obtained from an infinite perspective. There are two obvious problems in Lin Wei's chapters.

I have seen several Bengsan fanfics on 🍅, and each one has a strong female fandom flavor, as does this one, as well as a large number of inconsistent OOC characters. I wonder if there is a studio that buys accounts and uses AI to write articles to earn traffic.

I am looking forward to the following plot. If I were to write it, it should be about the invasion of Honkai Impact, and then Kiana shows off her power. Everyone awakens their memories in turn, fights against Honkai, and has a happy ending, with children [laughing] Is this the end? Isn't it? Is there really no reversal? [Crying] I still want to see how to fight Honkai, but this ending is definitely the best for everyone.

Ba Zongya 1 love hard

Okay, okay, my aunt laughed when she read it to me on the bed. Qiya was so excited. It's the first time I've seen this type of urban article by Qiya. It's pretty good. I like your author [laughing evilly]

You say... If the soul of Kiana in the real world is replaced by the soul of Kiana in this world... Then Mei? I have already thought of that scene. When Mei woke up, the sky was falling and she found that Kiana next to her was suddenly very hostile to her and wanted to do something to her. Mei Yi in this world had to eat my wife who was incompetent in my opinion [laughing]

It's very beautiful, [laughing] It's a pity that the author seems to have said that it's only about daily life, and without Honkai Impact, it feels like it's a little less flavorful.

I like Qiya CP the most [laughs]

Knocking on Qiya fiercely will only make me feel happy physically and mentally

Yayi, Yayi, confident and pure.

Bud 1 party super ecstatic.

The cute Bingqi 0 begged for mercy and was not spared~

It's good-looking, but it's actually not very slow, right [laughing], as a Qi party member, it looks good, hehe [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing]

You can check it out if you like Tang, but Kiana's character design always feels weird, it doesn't look like someone who traveled to the past, but it kind of looks like she has received the memory of Honkai Kiana.

I like this theme so much

I'm so excited to see it [laughs evilly]

Bud 1 is the correct oral tooth

When to confess?

1 Bud and 0 sugar content.

Be careful that there are rude people in the group asking for a title! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's a bit sad, I always think of Kiana at the beginning. . . It shouldn't be like this

I feel like I'm almost keeping up with the big group. So desperate. Can there be more? To be honest, it's actually a bit weird. It's just that the progress is too fast. Maybe it's because, well, usually it's a lot of fiddling, but in the case of more than 50 or 20 pictures, it's inexplicably achieved within a dozen or so pictures. They were still enemies at first. Suddenly a came up. Even if you just want to raise it, it stands to reason. At least. Observe more and so on, instead of just saying um over a dinner to get very close.

It really... Makes me feel the emotions of the characters.