Qin Shi Mingyue: There Is Something Wrong with This Young Master

Not bad, it's a fine novel! Although the plot is not full of ups and downs and not that exciting, it is smooth and well-written. I'm following the latest chapter, and I really can't stand it. It's too literary. The protagonist always does something incomprehensible and can't grasp the point. Many of them are inexplicable dialogues. Profound for the sake of being profound. The dialogues seem to be profound and the writing is good, but in fact it doesn't matter. A lot of the content is just incomprehensible dialogue. The plot advances slowly. It seems profound and difficult to understand. It feels powerful, but in fact it is inexplicable.

This book is so awesome. I will personally crown you the uncrowned king of the Qin Dynasty fandom. The plot, lines, and characters are super good, and are infinitely close to the original work. I suspect that the author graduated from the Chinese Department of Peking University. You can try to submit your resume to write about the storyline behind the farmhouse. Anyway, I don't care about the mystery. Give it a try. Maybe you will be successful. We also have new stories to read.

The author is great. I think this book is well written. Good stories always tell the same thing. The protagonist interprets the plot, a person who gathers firewood for others, and what people want. He does not care about conspiracy and calculations, but uses momentum to predict things. The author must not be a eunuch. This is the most exciting Qin Dynasty novel I have seen so far.

This book is very well written, with the protagonist's struggle to maintain a delicate balance between various forces, the weak show of weakness to Ji Wuye when he was a child, and the occasional madness at night to vent, the sober pain of modern people being incompatible with the worldview of ancient people, it has been a long time since I have seen a Qin Shi fan written like this. I have read a Qin Shi Bai Feng fic on JJ before, and it was like this. I really want to know if Han will switch to Qin and assist the First Emperor after Han is destroyed. Don't stop updating, teacher, I'm catching up on updates every day now! ! !

I think this book has a low rating, maybe because it just came out. I think the author's tactics are very good, I can understand them clearly, and they are not trying to be mysterious. The protagonist's character as a time traveler is very stable and he does things for the people! Maybe some details are not written well enough, but you can see the author's quality and thoughts, and the writing style is also online! I just hope that the author will stop listening to those slanderers and focus on his own work! Don't stop updating! Don't stop updating! It's hard to find a good-looking fan of Qin Shimingyue! I really beg you not to stop updating! Otherwise I will really hate you [cry][cry][cry][cry]! Even if you suck, don't stop updating! It's best not to be a mess!

It is well written and tells its own story within the framework of Qin Shi. But after reading it, I have several feelings. One is that the protagonist has a very "arrogant" or "I am sober when everyone else is drunk" feeling, much like an ancient madman. As a time traveler, it's normal to have this thought. But every era has its own historical mission. If you forcibly instill ideas and practices that transcend the era, it is easy to end up like Wang Mang, right? The second is that the protagonist's encounter has a feeling of the ancient Dragon King, that is, everyone who sees it will beep a few times, humiliate it, and then reverse it. It's not obvious when you first read it, but it becomes more obvious as the chapters go on. The third is that the protagonist is more like a bystander than a builder. Of course, it cannot be said that there is no construction, but a lot of construction has been done. But his behavior is more similar to Ye Qingmei in Qing Yunian, just adding new inventions to the times? The book is very good. I just felt this way when I read it, and I don't know if any other readers feel this way. I seem to understand why it sounds weird to read. First, because the protagonist is very fake and does not fit into this era at all. He uses his identity to do things, but at the same time, people should not say anything based on his identity. Similar to resisting acceptance of reality. The second is a problem similar to Qin Shi Mingyue's original work. Very simple things have to be expressed in a profound and unpredictable way, and a lot can be described. So it's weird and unpleasant to read.

It's really good to read. It's a good book. The author's writing is very good, but it's fine. The current rating is too low. I guess it's because the protagonist is not invincible at the beginning, Long Aotian, who kills people without any scruples. The protagonist of this book is very good at plotting and plotting. The protagonist's character is kind and considerate of the overall situation, but he also has a bottom line that cannot be touched. I like the character of the protagonist very much.

The writing is indeed top-notch, the dialogue is mind-blowing, and the high-IQ game among all the members is enjoyable to watch. But the core problem of the novel lies in the "serious separation between character design and performance": The protagonist has more than 50,000 people with actual power to govern. The article says that there is nothing that cannot be accomplished with this protagonist, but in reality he behaves like a frightened bird. He is extremely concerned about verbal pressure and is easily manipulated by the original characters. This contradiction of "invincible in words but restricted in actions" has caused those seemingly awesome lines to lose their actual driving force and become empty shells that lack real effects, which will inevitably make people laugh when reading them. Of course, if you immerse yourself in the book without jumping out, you will feel like you have encountered a super masterpiece, similar to the Tiandao Library.

It's good to watch, but I hope that the main character will have emotional scenes, but it won't affect his career. I really like watching the main character's resourcefulness, because it feels weird to have emotional scenes. Alas, I'm stupid. Anyway, I read a review and it's right. I hope there won't be a harem Revolutionaries are all lonely, and I feel sorry for the protagonist, but there must be someone to do everything and someone to start.

Feng Chang is very good. He can write about tactics and let readers understand them. I feel that he has surpassed many authors. However, I don't think that many friends like to read this kind of book. Is the author really not considering writing this writing practice and developing it on other platforms?

It's good to read. The Warring States Period was a troubled time. Many of the Jiu Ge Qin Dynasty's fans were either flirting with girls or on the way to flirting with girls. They still had no power, money and fists, just like playing house. This book has a novel angle and good writing. I look forward to the follow-up!

It's a rare, good book that uses your brain. It's logical and self-consistent. The protagonist is a smart person, and readers can feel the protagonist's wisdom. The character's personality is completely like the original book. It's quite good-looking.

I have been following up on this book recently. The story of Qin Shi Mingyue is very interesting, but it is a pity that the animation was messed up in the later stage. I like the perspective of the protagonist in this book. He is not a swordsman or a swordsman who dominates the world with his martial arts. The protagonist is an idealist who is pessimistic about the old era. The author creates a communist fighter in the new era and goes back to the past to influence the old era. This book is very good for Radio Wave, but not so good for me. It's a bit hard to read at some points, but I think it's pretty good when I read it on Tomato. The first thing is that the protagonist of this book feels a bit too versatile, like a thinker, idealist, doer, proficient in all kinds of weapons, like an all-powerful artificial intelligence robot. It's like traveling through time. I forgot whether I mentioned the setting of the protagonist before. I saw that the protagonist has all kinds of side knowledge at his fingertips. (Modern and modern) martial arts also shocked the warrior swordsmen of the old era. He is a bit perfect and doesn't look like a human being. In addition, the author may want to avoid being stereotyped. The protagonist always does not pursue fame and wealth, and success does not have to be in my saintly posture. The character, combined with the almost omniscient and omnipotent ability, always seems to be a bit of a drama. In fact, I can see that the author seems to be adjusting. The protagonist's character is swinging between divinity and humanity. I personally feel that adding some motivations and reasons can make the protagonist's behavior more logical and the characters more full and three-dimensional. Overall, it is worth watching. I will open the software every day to catch up on updates. I recommend it.

A relatively good Qin Shi fan, not a nanny novel, the protagonist has his own career line, similar to the kind of sage Wuming. It's just that the writing is a bit long-winded, with a lot of repeated passages, and the plot progresses too slowly, but it's bearable.

A very good-looking Qin Shi fan, not like the cliche plot about chasing women. The last book that was so good was Daze Township in the Qin Dynasty.

The writing style is very in line with the temperament of anime and is better than those cool articles. Not a cool article, but really good-looking

There are still 20 chapters left to read, and I plan to wait until there are more chapters before continuing. Let me talk about my feelings. When I first read this book, hundreds of people watched it, so I didn't have high expectations for this book. As a result, there are 470 chapters in total, and I have read 450 of them, and the number of words in each chapter is huge. Whether it is good or not, I don't need to say clearly whether I recommend it or not. Talking about the plot, some parts are "slightly" depressing, but I can't say it's poisonous (the word count convinced me). Let me briefly summarize a few labels: no heroine (a bit different from Yan Lingji, but I still say it is no heroine, everyone understands), group portraits, high number of words, and the best among Qin Shi Mingyue fan fiction (a good book is not popular, but there are few that can make me close to a fan fiction that I have finished).

It looks good. Although I was a little frustrated in the early stage, I felt relieved when I thought about this environment. Brother Zheng was bullied before. I felt that Han Fei was a little out of touch. He was shocked from time to time. It appeared a lot (personal perception)

It coldly told Han Li: The first half of the path you designed (technology diffusion and interest bundling) will work, even if the process is full of filth and compromise. And the second half (cultural reshaping and order reconstruction)... As he judged from the bottom of his heart, what was needed was not the ten years of struggle of a Korean prince, but the stability and enlightenment of a unified empire for hundreds of years.

It has brains and is very beautiful. It is not a stallion style or a harem novel. Although the rating is low, I think the quality of the content in his book is not less than 9.0 Or above. The characters in it are not brainless and they are also in line with the characters of the anime plot. It is a very high-quality fanfic. It is very enjoyable and very popular. I hope it will be updated soon.

Personally, I think Qin Shi's flavor is very strong and pure, but it's a bit too deliberate and overdone, and it feels a bit pretentious. Some people think it's a literary youth, but at that time, this type of novels were basically in this format. Compared with (Zhou Tian series) novels, the author's writing style is very good, and the plot connection is smooth. However, the repetition rate of some words is a bit high, and I haven't seen the poisonous points yet. Although I haven't read the latest chapter, for a fan novel, it is an affirmation for him to reach more than 2 million words. But I am very curious whether the author wants to write only nine lines or continuously write about the Qin Dynasty, how to transition in the middle, how to qualitatively change the characters in the original animation, whether to fill in the holes in the original work by himself or not, and whether the general trend of development is to replace Qin, Han or auxiliary.

The AI ​​is well tuned, each character is written in a unique style, and the writing logic is quite clear. But there are also shortcomings in AI articles, such as poor length control, some important plots are mentioned in one stroke, some irrelevant details are a bit long-winded, the same description appears repeatedly, etc. I am also writing a similar AI article, hoping to communicate with each other.

When it came to the troublesome part of Long Aotian Shuang at the beginning, the brothers kicked me. I feel uncomfortable looking at Han Li now. To be honest, any modern person who returns to the Warring States Period will really regard everyone as uncivilized savages. This is the natural gift given to us by the perspective of more than two thousand years and the progress of civilization in the past hundred years. When we get to Daxi King, please remember to call me. I want to see the blood flowing like a river. Let me continue to talk about the reasons why many readers, including me, feel that the book looks uncomfortable. Han Li is not an arrogant person. In fact, he does the best he can in what he can do. To a certain extent, he can be said to be a progressive revolutionary, but at the same time, he feels like a pure literary youth or a weak person who swings left and right. Why does this impression of fragmentation occur? Because Han Li gave people the impression that everything he did had no practical significance in the end. As a person who has received education in the new era and possesses civilized values, Han Li should strive for the direction of civilization and progress no matter what happens in that era. After all, he once lived in the light and will not allow darkness, or in other words, he must gradually get closer to the light no matter what. Han Li can be humble and humble. There is no problem with this. Everything should be regarded as a kind of "accumulation", which means that his ultimate goal should be to advance civilization as much as possible. If the Six Kingdoms are gone, they will be gone. There is no problem in helping the Qin Dynasty to unify. The Qin Dynasty's role is to give our civilization the "concept of great unity". In addition, the entire role of the Qin Dynasty is to serve as a teaching aid in history books, telling future generations that Qin's system was successful. He unified the six countries, but Qin's system also failed. He died immediately after unification. Therefore, what Han Li had to do was to give it a try in the era of great strife when the Qin Dynasty was falling apart. Whether it was to carry out a revolution of blood and fire, or to promote more of his own ideas, he was still moving forward. But Han Li seems to think that he "can't do it". His goal seems to be just to weave an illusory dream. When he wakes up from the dream, he wakes up. He doesn't want to turn the dream into reality, even just a little bit. This is an important reason for the separation of the protagonists in this book. There is no doubt that Han Li has a solid belief in our country's former revolutionaries and a deep recognition of our country's post-revolutionary values. However, he does not seem to think that he can become a true revolutionary. He is more like a praiser who stands behind the revolutionaries. What we want to see is that he truly walks on the path of a revolutionary and gradually transforms into a real revolutionary. But the book is still far from being finished. Maybe the author is holding back something to make us happy [laughs]

There are two chapters a day. The author is currently writing mainly about Tian Xing Jiu Ge. On Han Fei's side, the protagonist, the time traveler, is Han Fei's younger brother. Unfortunately, the moon in the Qin Dynasty has been cut off, and Tian Xing Jiu Ge has not been followed up for many years. Therefore, the classic "backstab" link should not be seen in our lifetime [you taste it carefully] The author writes boldly, maybe that day, you will be the original [laughter] 6.9 Points, I feel it is still too low. It cannot be the grade of this book. It should be caused by not many people rating it. I would rather believe that maybe it is because Qin Shi Mingyue is unpopular and has been discontinued. Not many people read it, rather than believe that this is the author's level. In the world of Qin Shi Mingyue, you can describe or even fabricate the people and events of various schools of thought, but the unification of the six kingdoms by the First Emperor will inevitably happen, Han Fei will inevitably die, and Xiang Yu will lose to Liu Bang. This is cruelty from history, whether you accept it or not (it is not necessary for the novel to be a humanistic novel). During this period, the characters experience joys and sorrows, growth or decline, and in the end everyone learns to accept their own endings with magnanimity. This is the romance of Qin Shi Mingyue that belongs exclusively to me. Coupled with the handsome guys and beauties appearing in the middle, they pretend to be cool and have cool special effects, and they are loved [admired] Back to this book, whether it follows historical development or not, it actually works. After all, it is a fan fiction. The protagonist is still a time traveler under the red flag. He is familiar with history and has new ideas. It is still possible to change the fate of the characters. What's more, the sea has stopped, and Tian Xing can no longer sing the Nine Songs. The author's writing is so wonderful, and he may not be called a prince. When the time comes, the sea of ​​laughter will cease to flow, and the sky of laughter will cease to have any songs. .

It's well written, but it's too deliberate. People's hearts are very complex, and some people are willing to do things that harm others but don't benefit themselves. Not everyone is rational, and not everyone who commits crimes does it for profit. The author writes that everyone's characters are too uniform

A good book, written in a more realistic and cruel way

Qin Shi Mingyue and Tian Xing Jiu Ge are more like tragedies in my memory. Everyone is trapped, and even the protagonist cannot escape the entanglement of interests. The plot of this novel fits the historical sense of the original work, but I hope there will be a breakthrough to break the tragic ending.

I don't have high requirements, just maintain the current level and keep updating! ! ! If you are doing business, no cp is better! There are too many high-quality novels that turn out to be duds even halfway through writing! Teacher, you must not stop updating! ! ! 🥹🥹🥹

Not bad. But to be honest, the taste of literary youth is very strong, and I always write about those mysterious feelings. This is a tomato, not a starting point. It would be better to use vernacular. Really, it's painful to watch. If someone likes this style, it will feel good.

Good! The writing penetrated deeply into my heart. The protagonist has his own thoughts and is not assimilated. Handsome