Pirate: in Terms of Background, I Haven't Lost Yet.

It's been the second time I've refreshed it before I remembered that I didn't leave any comments. I happened to refresh it again recently and just wanted to chat here. As far as this book is concerned, the first 20 or so pictures were considered low openings, but with the launch of UTA, the unfolding of the top war, and the current plan, it is moving towards higher prices. As for the characterization, apart from the protagonist, the most important thing is definitely Uta. The Uta in this book is the most like the movie, promotional video, and Uta diary I have seen on this site so far. Her innocence, naughtiness, and common sense defects caused by long-term stay on the island are all well expressed, but she lacks the original portrayal of empathy, but this is only compared to other points. In terms of character, the protagonist's character values love and justice, is calm and reliable at critical moments, has strong layout skills, and can be humorous and interesting in daily life (why humor? Don't worry). And it is this kind of love, justice and reliable style that makes the interaction with Uta seem natural and immersive. The red and white sentence in the title is also perfectly mapped to the interaction between the two. As for the plot arrangement, the current arrangement can be said to have been perfectly avoided. The tragedy that would have appeared in red has retained some conflicts that should have been faced directly. The sleepless mushroom was destroyed, and Uta's resentment towards Shanks was preserved. It also paved the way for the unfolding of the truth later. At least I am very satisfied with the arrangement of the emotional drama. The outstanding green plum from the sky is invincible. I look forward to more stories in the future. As for the evaluation of red itself, there are more detailed discussions. Just read this book and see if there will be a fan base later. After more than a month, I am here to add a comment, and once again share my thoughts on this period of time. Let's start with the shortcomings first. In addition to the low opening mentioned in the last chapter, the recent dozens of chapters have been a bit too descriptive about the Deserter King and the upcoming Momonosuke. These two characters are simply not worth so much ink. Although the death method is indeed good, it does affect the rhythm a bit. Then let's talk about the advantages and some thoughts that I want to express. The emotional line of this book is undoubtedly the biggest highlight. It successfully achieves the point of view of any party and can be truly moved, rather than forcibly moved. After the war chapter, the two sweetest parts, not counting memories and confessions, are undoubtedly the backstage interaction before the concert in the Seven Waters City and the interaction from the Transvestite Island back to the sky above the East China Sea (the rest are all told in the form of memories, and of course the confession part). After all, being willing to protect the dreams of important people is never a simple and easy thing. Next are some things I want to say. Now in the plot, Tuotemujika has been solved in a clever way, but Uta's own view of life and death has not been corrected. So what will she do in the face of fans' complaints? Kane is now able to stabilize here, but how stable can he be? Once an accident occurs, it will revert to the plot in the movie. No one is sure about this, so correcting the view of life and death is the real way to solve the problem. It is not difficult to correct it. The more troublesome thing is that Kane will teach you bit by bit. The simpler one is to take Uta to watch two episodes of "Blaze" (such as "Rainbow Appears, Voice of the Stars, Insurance Hero"). If not, then go directly to "Life is Forever" (not to mention, I really want to see what it will be like if Uta is the one who saves Boo?) Okay, enough has been said. Finally, if I use a song to describe Kane and Uta's journey, "got boost" is more suitable. Many of the lyrics can be matched. The encounter between the two is in reunion, and the inner character of the two. I hope that Kane can be like what the lyrics say [will not let anyone take away those dazzling and dazzling moments that will never be returned]. After all, [before someone quietly sheds tears, you need to save]

Most of them are very reasonable, much better than those where the left and right brains interact with each other, follow the ship and kill Luffy to steal Luffy's crew. Well, the author has exhausted his talents. He used to update four or five chapters a day, but now he writes one chapter a day [laughs]

So far, I personally think it's okay. The heroine is Uta [laughing evilly]. I thought it was a multi-girl show, but now I think it's a single girl. So far, it's still okay. Finally, I hope the author will work harder and update more to prevent the eunuch from being unfinished.

After seeing Chapter 27, I gave this 5 stars to the 16-year-old me. I can only sum up this work in one sentence. If I were 16 years old, I would give it five stars without hesitation, but now I am looking at the dazzling array of candies in the supermarket, not knowing which one to choose, and I have no appetite for choices. Really, as people grow older, they will gradually shift their focus. In the past, One Piece was more about passion, adventure, characters, and bonds. Now I am paying more attention to the suffering behind the characters and the interests from a realistic perspective. This makes me no longer look at this anime purely, but to see it as suffering. There is no doubt that this book is a colorful candy. Although I can no longer taste the pure sweetness, I miss the passionate me.

The competition is very novel, it's the first time I see Uta as the female protagonist in One Piece, but it's nice to watch.

After reading it, I didn't give much review. Although there is still room for improvement in the writing, the narrative is generally reasonable. The protagonist does not use cheats. He uses the pirate system and the resource acquisition is relatively reasonable. This is rare and valuable (although it is still a bit too strong in the early stage [laughing and crying]). I hope it can be maintained. (Small flaw: It is still not delicate enough. Some things are mentioned in one stroke, which may be a bit nitpicking. Overall, it is a good pirate fanfic.)

The writing is good, the plot is quite novel, and the smooth plot makes up for a lot of regrets. At present, the author has not written about the line about Kebi being caught and then being experimented. I am looking forward to it. I give you a 5-star review. Come on, the author, please do more updates. Don't rush into the street.

One Piece fandom is very popular, and there are many outstanding female characters in One Piece. When some authors write, after completing the plot of the female character, they then accept a female character. By the time of the finale, a train could fill up with all the female characters. It's cool that the female characters don't show how different they are from each other. This book is able to identify a single heroine, and does not have ambiguities with other female characters (I have always felt that if you have ambiguities with other female characters, it is better to just accept the harem). It depicts a high proportion of Uta heroines. She is not a simple tool, and can advance the plot while taking care of daily life. Regarding this, I think it is really well written.

The overall sensory experience is good, but the score of 7.4 Is low. Personally, I feel it should be around 8.5-9 Points. I don't feel that there are any poisonous points that are difficult to accept. In the war part, the protagonist's layout intelligence is online. It can be felt that the author is a bit of a water bottle. The battle is a bit average and does not feel very intense. The picture is not tense enough. The emotional aspect is great. Both the relationship between the male and female protagonists and the relationship between the male protagonist's brothers are very good. The male protagonist is portrayed with flesh and blood. But because I listen to books, I listened to the emotional scenes between the male and female protagonists word for word. It was really boring to me. If I were reading a book, I would have ignored it under quantum reading. But listening to books is really not good, so when the male protagonist arrived at Cake Island, he accidentally broke into the female protagonist's bath. When the time came, we withdrew. I can only talk about the three-bedroom and one-living area. In fact, when the male and female protagonist Ferris wheel confessed their love, they had already deducted it. In order to prevent themselves from not being able to eat, they left. I was really afraid that there would be emotional scenes later. It was really unbearable to do it from time to time [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]

I'm going to cry, it's awesome, it's very vivid, especially the emotional portrayal. It's the first time I've seen a Pirates fan who can combine passion and affection with the heroine at the same time. It can be seen that the author is still very careful, but he was a little negligent in the later stage. Of course the most important I just can't get enough of it, I feel like the author has laid a lot of groundwork, that is. . . Can we get to the ending of One Piece? After all, the limit of this book is so high. I live just for this book. Finally, the author pays attention to his health and does not need to use large quantities, just maintain the quality.

The timeline is smooth and not confusing, but it's a bit overly protective, but the protagonist's growth and emotions are well written.

Good news, more updates, very logical, one of the rare masterpieces in One Piece

The emotional aspect is very good. Still a single female protagonist. This is a scarce commodity in One Piece, or in other words, in all online literature! ! ! Shuangwen is much better than those inferior brainless harem cheating systems. It's fun to watch haha

The rare Uta, the rare Pirates single heroine, the rare sweet novel

The plot is quite thoughtful, and overall it's okay, with nothing particularly dramatic. You can get high scores in Tomato Pirates, but it's almost impossible to feel, so four stars go first. Keep it.

The author is very powerful, and I enjoyed reading it these days. As a 6,000-hour bookworm, I think this book is particularly great. The heroine is Uta. The single heroine may be a bit sensational at the beginning, which some people can't accept, but it is indeed necessary. The goal of the protagonist's dream is very clear, so that people can understand the protagonist's mood and thoughts. You won't feel particularly confused while reading it. The author's occasionally interspersed funny narratives make people laugh. Some of the tragedy in the original book can be saved by the protagonist. Some disgusting characters are also decisively written out by the author. It's a very refreshing article, which is refreshing and clear. The author's writing is good, although there may be some minor flaws, but the author's length and free content made me think it was great. I watched it for three days without finishing it, and the rating was low. It should be above 9.8. Another compliment is that the author has a habit of not following up the plot with superficial articles. Seeing that the plot is going too far in every chapter, [smirk][smirk][smirk] It really echoes that sentence, pirates, just take whatever you want. The author's decisiveness is a good response to the banquet. I think the pen of One Piece can be given to the author to write. The author should have read the original work. It is clearly organized, the plot is consistent, and there are explanations. Okay, that's all I actually watched 61 hours, my god

It looks great. I used to be a pirate fan. When the red-haired singer came out for the preview, she really liked Uta's portrayal, but the more she analyzed it in detail later, the more wrong she became. Knowing the ending of Uta's death, I didn't dare to watch it. If I didn't watch it, Uta would not die. The ending must have saved him. Later, when he grew up, the old thief Oda wrote many people to death, and some people around him also left. Gradually I became less resistant to the ending of death, until I read the book written by the author, which was quite good. I finally had the courage to watch the theatrical version, although it was as expected. But I still hope that Uta can live and experience the real happiness in the world.

I like Uta very much. I don't know why. When I was stopped from laughing when I killed Luffy, I suddenly went crazy and cried with laughter. The same happened when I released the Demon King. Uta should not have ended like this. I was very happy to see different Uta from the novel. The author wrote it very well!

Yes, it was very enjoyable to read. After watching Garp's defeat, it was very enjoyable to read this chapter. When the Deserter King died, he was "very" sad [smile]

It's okay, don't be proud. Very good, more and more hopeful

A good person to play with Uta

Without saying anything, he told the author that if he wanted to write Momonosuke to death, he must give it five stars.

One problem is that the protagonist is of an ordinary figure, so after he transforms, will he still be as big as Kaido? I opened the audio book to listen to it. I guess I didn't hear the key points or the author didn't write it. I don't know if anyone who has read it understands.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking [angry], I look at me [angry] [angry] [angry] Look at me, look at me, look at me, look at me, look at me, look at me, look at me, [angry] [angry] [angry], I look at me, look at me, [angry] [angry] [angry], look at me, look at me I [angry] [angry] [angry] Look at me look at me look at me look at me look at me look at me [angry] [angry] [angry]

It fits the original character very well and is very fleshy.

What a great novel. The author is a master of animation and comics. You don't have to worry about plot issues at all. Various large-scale events can be handled extremely well, and the emotional line is also promoted stably.

The writing is good, the style is humorous, and the plot is reasonable

This work is really attractive! From the first page, you have a sense of immersion, the characters' emotions are delicate and real, and the rhythm of the plot is just right, making people want to keep reading. Thank you to the author for his careful creation and such a great reading experience. I look forward to more exciting chapters in the future.

It's beautiful, it's my favorite pirate fanfic

I feel it's well written