[Single heroine + daily life + polysaccharide + slow pace]
I am Gu Wang, and I traveled through time and became the protagonist of a book.
In the book, I am a righteous genius. In order to go back, I must play my role and cannot change the plot.
And I have an old enemy, the Saint of Jiyuan—Shen Qingya.
Everyone in the world says that she is full of evil, but only I know that she is cleaner than everyone else.
I saw her eyes during the siege where she was certain to die.
No hatred, no resentment, no unwillingness, not even fear of death. It's like... She had known this would happen for a long time and had accepted it a long time ago.
But she shouldn't have accepted it.
She shouldn't have accepted that ending.
So I relented and I rescued her.
During the three months I took good care of her, I tried countless methods, and I couldn't go back.
What's even scarier is that I realized that I don't want to go back.
That day, I confessed everything to her, I confessed to her.
She promised me.
That day was probably our happiest day.
We hugged each other in an ice house in the cold north.
We said that when she recovers, we will go to the south, find a small yard, plant some herbs, and raise a cat...
We just held each other and talked.
Talk about their past, their loneliness, and their unknown fears and desires.
She fell asleep.
I thought we would really have that day, the southern yard, the sunshine, and the kittens.
However, I returned to reality.
Fortunately, she caught up with him.
However, he came to kill me.
But I wasn't afraid, but rather shamefully happy - at least I could still see her before I died.
She is still reluctant to kill me, and I will spend my life to atone for my sins.
I beg you to read the third chapter first! ! !
Reader comments
After reading this, the psychological committee will remind you
First, you are not allowed to elbow on the cement floor from the 28th floor.
Second, you can't go to the rooftop to see if you have invisible wings.
Third, the neck cannot engage in a hearty tug-of-war with the rafters.
Fourth, please do not use your wrist to compare the hardness of the blade
Fifth, don't go to Yehu to practice holding your breath for three hours.
Sixth, you can't hide next to the national highway and scare him when the big truck comes out.
Seventh, it is forbidden to compete with high-speed rail to see who is stronger.
Eighth, refuse to drink small drinks that ensure the normal growth of crops
Ninth, don't compare your lung capacity with fish.
It looks good but is too sweet, like the dream of a single man living alone before his sudden death after staying up late.
The beginning is smooth and the emotional portrayal is relatively delicate. I will wait for a supplementary review later (changed to five stars, etc.). I mainly want to express my thoughts.
The setting here is from another world. Although the bond can be felt to be deep, the description of the bond is sparse. It is known that these special settings only have a recalling effect on "reality", so the plot after the encounter may be a bit thin. If there are no other special features, it will have to be compared with other tomato love stories on a daily basis (I look forward to the author's excitement).
The writing is very delicate, which is different from many cool articles nowadays. It was very fresh at first, but after a while it felt a bit bland and there was no big conflict.
Update it quickly, it's not enough to watch, it's quite sweet, I hope it doesn't collapse in the later period. I feel that the female protagonist's identity information will be difficult to write in modern times, and it may collapse easily. Of course, the character portrayal is still quite good, I hope the author will work hard (reply for update) [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss]
I only read the beginning. I can give 10 stars. It's so satisfying. I want to read it again but the author has stopped updating the previous books. I'm a little scared [crying] Will this one be finished normally? How many words does the author plan to write? [I'm almost crying]
It's really good, especially the beginning. It's really well written. The heroine is well portrayed. She's totally the ideal type. When I saw your writing in the first few chapters, the corners of my eyes turned red. I give you five stars. I hope the pace will be a little faster later on. You understand [smile] [send heartfelt]
One star character
One star for mediocre plot
Pure love one star
Warm style
One star for some ingenuity
The disadvantage is that the heroine integrates too quickly. Knowledge and writing need to be over-arranged, and the progress bar is too fast. The rest is pretty good. There are no entanglements of bitterness and hatred. The plot is like a clear spring, slowly flowing out and slowly flowing in. There are no naughty boys throwing pebbles in between.
Very good. Pure love is very good. There is nothing more comforting than pure love.
Overall, it's good. Among the novels I've read, it's pretty good. The style is similar to "My Wife Came from a Thousand Years Ago" and "What to Do If the Heroine Runs Out of the Book"
It's a sweet article. If you are interested, you can read it. It's quite good.
It's very comfortable to watch. This is the most direct evaluation I can give.
The male protagonist seems to be a guiding type. The male protagonist written by the author gives people a very reliable feeling.
It's beautiful, pure love and so on. It's the best.
The writing is pretty good, but there are still a lot of details that need polishing.
The first thing to bear the brunt is the lifespan theory.
Then there is the issue of the male protagonist's training.
Then there is the issue of the heroine's identity. There is also the issue of the heroine's strength.
If everything is solved, we can catch up with the comic "What to do if the heroine ran away from the book".
It's so sweet. It's so sweet that it makes me feel that the phoenix on the rooftop has become cooler and people are zooming in [sending hearts]
Psychological Committee member, please come quickly, I am not happy😭Psychological Committee member, please come quickly, I am not happy😭Psychological Committee member, please come quickly, I am not happy😭Psychological Committee member, please come quickly, I am not happy😭Psychological Committee member, please come quickly, I am not happy😭
The psychology committee reminds you not to do the following exercises after reading this book
1. It is prohibited to hit the cement floor with your elbow from a high place
2. No cosplay of sunny dolls is allowed
3. It is forbidden to go to the rooftop to see if you have invisible wings.
4. …The twenty prohibited items are omitted here
The writing is very good, and the beginning is very attractive, but the speed of the emotional progression always seems weird to me. I feel that there are no major progressive events, or that the stage of acquaintance and ambiguity is skipped, which leads to a lack of emotional foundation. The author needs to write well later. If you can't grasp it, you can practice with a sweet novel of about 200 chapters.
This author is actually a really good person. In his novel, there is a constant process of reflection by the characters, which is really not easy. The author is of a very high level, and even if his writing style is not excellent, ordinary people cannot do this kind of repeated reflection on an existing thing. Really good. Be sure to read on.
I read the first three chapters and it was easy to write.
Why are there so few people reading such a beautiful book? It shouldn't be. Great author, come on!
The writing is good, although the details are still missing, but it is very good in Tomato, keep up the good work!
The author's writing style is exquisite and the narrative technique is very good. It's very beautiful👍🏻
This shouldn't be the male protagonist's initiative to go back, right? Why do men feel so guilty? Why does the heroine still hate her after the explanation?
The portrayal of emotions is very delicate. The portrayal of the heroine's image and background in another world is rarely depicted and is more biased towards the real world. The heroine's emotions are generally very warm and sweet. There are also too few daily sweet stories to read.
The writing style and emotional portrayal are considered successful in Persimmon
Isn't that right? [What] Aren't the two of them cultivating immortals?
I hope the author can write a tomato version of Xu Qing and Xiao He Miao
Author, let me tell you, when I get diabetes in the future, I will be the first to come to you [smile]
After reading this, the psychological committee will remind you First, you are not allowed to elbow on the cement floor from the 28th floor. Second, you can't go to the rooftop to see if you have invisible wings. Third, the neck cannot engage in a hearty tug-of-war with the rafters. Fourth, please do not use your wrist to compare the hardness of the blade Fifth, don't go to Yehu to practice holding your breath for three hours. Sixth, you can't hide next to the national highway and scare him when the big truck comes out. Seventh, it is forbidden to compete with high-speed rail to see who is stronger. Eighth, refuse to drink small drinks that ensure the normal growth of crops Ninth, don't compare your lung capacity with fish.
It looks good but is too sweet, like the dream of a single man living alone before his sudden death after staying up late.
The beginning is smooth and the emotional portrayal is relatively delicate. I will wait for a supplementary review later (changed to five stars, etc.). I mainly want to express my thoughts. The setting here is from another world. Although the bond can be felt to be deep, the description of the bond is sparse. It is known that these special settings only have a recalling effect on "reality", so the plot after the encounter may be a bit thin. If there are no other special features, it will have to be compared with other tomato love stories on a daily basis (I look forward to the author's excitement).
The writing is very delicate, which is different from many cool articles nowadays. It was very fresh at first, but after a while it felt a bit bland and there was no big conflict.
Update it quickly, it's not enough to watch, it's quite sweet, I hope it doesn't collapse in the later period. I feel that the female protagonist's identity information will be difficult to write in modern times, and it may collapse easily. Of course, the character portrayal is still quite good, I hope the author will work hard (reply for update) [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss]
I only read the beginning. I can give 10 stars. It's so satisfying. I want to read it again but the author has stopped updating the previous books. I'm a little scared [crying] Will this one be finished normally? How many words does the author plan to write? [I'm almost crying]
It's really good, especially the beginning. It's really well written. The heroine is well portrayed. She's totally the ideal type. When I saw your writing in the first few chapters, the corners of my eyes turned red. I give you five stars. I hope the pace will be a little faster later on. You understand [smile] [send heartfelt]
One star character One star for mediocre plot Pure love one star Warm style One star for some ingenuity The disadvantage is that the heroine integrates too quickly. Knowledge and writing need to be over-arranged, and the progress bar is too fast. The rest is pretty good. There are no entanglements of bitterness and hatred. The plot is like a clear spring, slowly flowing out and slowly flowing in. There are no naughty boys throwing pebbles in between.
Very good. Pure love is very good. There is nothing more comforting than pure love.
Overall, it's good. Among the novels I've read, it's pretty good. The style is similar to "My Wife Came from a Thousand Years Ago" and "What to Do If the Heroine Runs Out of the Book"
It's a sweet article. If you are interested, you can read it. It's quite good.
It's very comfortable to watch. This is the most direct evaluation I can give. The male protagonist seems to be a guiding type. The male protagonist written by the author gives people a very reliable feeling.
It's beautiful, pure love and so on. It's the best.
The writing is pretty good, but there are still a lot of details that need polishing. The first thing to bear the brunt is the lifespan theory. Then there is the issue of the male protagonist's training. Then there is the issue of the heroine's identity. There is also the issue of the heroine's strength. If everything is solved, we can catch up with the comic "What to do if the heroine ran away from the book".
It's so sweet. It's so sweet that it makes me feel that the phoenix on the rooftop has become cooler and people are zooming in [sending hearts]
Psychological Committee member, please come quickly, I am not happy😭Psychological Committee member, please come quickly, I am not happy😭Psychological Committee member, please come quickly, I am not happy😭Psychological Committee member, please come quickly, I am not happy😭Psychological Committee member, please come quickly, I am not happy😭
The psychology committee reminds you not to do the following exercises after reading this book 1. It is prohibited to hit the cement floor with your elbow from a high place 2. No cosplay of sunny dolls is allowed 3. It is forbidden to go to the rooftop to see if you have invisible wings. 4. …The twenty prohibited items are omitted here
The writing is very good, and the beginning is very attractive, but the speed of the emotional progression always seems weird to me. I feel that there are no major progressive events, or that the stage of acquaintance and ambiguity is skipped, which leads to a lack of emotional foundation. The author needs to write well later. If you can't grasp it, you can practice with a sweet novel of about 200 chapters.
This author is actually a really good person. In his novel, there is a constant process of reflection by the characters, which is really not easy. The author is of a very high level, and even if his writing style is not excellent, ordinary people cannot do this kind of repeated reflection on an existing thing. Really good. Be sure to read on.
I read the first three chapters and it was easy to write.
Why are there so few people reading such a beautiful book? It shouldn't be. Great author, come on!
The writing is good, although the details are still missing, but it is very good in Tomato, keep up the good work!
The author's writing style is exquisite and the narrative technique is very good. It's very beautiful👍🏻
This shouldn't be the male protagonist's initiative to go back, right? Why do men feel so guilty? Why does the heroine still hate her after the explanation?
The portrayal of emotions is very delicate. The portrayal of the heroine's image and background in another world is rarely depicted and is more biased towards the real world. The heroine's emotions are generally very warm and sweet. There are also too few daily sweet stories to read.
The writing style and emotional portrayal are considered successful in Persimmon
Isn't that right? [What] Aren't the two of them cultivating immortals?
I hope the author can write a tomato version of Xu Qing and Xiao He Miao
Author, let me tell you, when I get diabetes in the future, I will be the first to come to you [smile]
Emotions and narratives are longer