Gao Wu: This Loli Is Too Fierce

Change order, the writing style is excellent, flowing prose, and there is almost no description of women's clothing, women's bodies and women's degradation. The combat is great, the system is flowing, dark blue points are added, violent lolita, the plot of the college competition is in place, the martial arts setting is high, and the heroine template is cool. It's okay, the plot is fast-paced, there is no poisonous plot, it's good to relax, and overall it's worth watching.

Violent loli poke xp, but the image of most characters is not three-dimensional, except for the protagonist, there is no impression I'll go, it gets better and better later on, the author has made great progress, it's super cool

It may be useful to use the help of AI. If it is almost the same, it will appear repeatedly. The meaning is obviously the same. The combat power data is a bit confusing. The combat power is not balanced when fighting people and monsters. When fighting monsters, it suddenly becomes powerful. There is also the system point mechanism. I feel that the number of points depends on how much the author wants to write at the time. It is very confusing. The general direction is still very clear. Just looking at it, it feels chaotic. The main character in Dabi is seriously injured and then gets it. It should be inheritance. After that, the Dabi is over, but it is not mentioned, and the fight starts right after it comes out. Also, I haven't said anything about the follow-up of that boy from the Qin family. I thought I'd throw it aside as soon as it came out, but I think it's pretty stable and not too poisonous. It's good to watch without thinking about it.

It looks good so far. It would be better if the protagonist could work hard in cultivation and not go shopping. The protagonist can clearly gain points by killing monsters, but he has to go to the academy to become a disciple, which is a waste of time.

A man dressed as a woman, a female protagonist from a male perspective.

I have already finished the review on Chapter 23.

The battle is exciting, the typical mini-boss gives out experience packs like crazy, the elders have to repay the grievances of the younger ones, and the protagonist is teased for not practicing well. In the end, the protagonist gets angry and beats him up, and then goes home to find his mother. These silly kids are all the same, and the main character Katsura is too much, so why not hide it? Is there a backstory? To be honest, I didn't feel the martial arts atmosphere. The only fighting scenes and the key scenes were mediocre and really boring. I was tired of watching the plot where an unscrupulous pornographic guy meets a violent lolita protagonist.

I don't care about the trend of changing marriages. Why don't you just say it's a one-way deal? Hurry up and cut it off with Qin Yue.

Single. Single, always single

The creativity is okay but the data is messy. . The plot sometimes looks like it was written by two people. People who don't mind messy data can watch it.

It's so good, I didn't skip a chapter and went straight to the end. Trust me, I have 6,000 hours of writing time to guarantee it for you. I hope it doesn't end unfinished.

It's okay, the logic is not too bad in some places, but I can see the general direction and it's acceptable.

Very interesting, I like it, I hope it's the style I like~

[Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] Like it, love it, watch it well, recommend it kidnapped by the author

Not bad, good-looking, good-looking

My writing skills need to be improved. Sometimes I feel stuck when I read it.

The fighting is very interesting😊, but there are really only a few hundred chapters of daily life, only 45 daily chapters. The author should give more daily life...

Good-looking, really good-looking, pure violence, good-looking, love watching it

It's so beautiful and the author is great! ! ! This is my first time to comment on a good book! ! ! !

It's good-looking. It's reasonable to read in one sentence without thinking ✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧

You can read it after seeing Chapter 38

I like violent lolita so much

Come on, the author, work hard [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

Not bad, come on.

Your writing is okay, keep up the good work

Is the heroine Zanni?

The author uses more black and white silk

It's okay, just comment on it casually

Nice transformation article.

It looks good and the content is exciting.