Reborn: I Came Back Too Early and Raised My Childhood Friend, the Campus Beauty

I posted my first book review before, but I thought it was a bit short, so I deleted it and posted it again, because looking back, I feel that the author's writing rhythm is getting smoother and smoother, so I wrote my review carefully. I've basically read all the Qingmei novels from next door and here, including Electronic Panda, Nanfeng Fuyue, Cao Man, The First Half of Cat's Life, Bei Gui, and the book Rebirth of Three Years Old that I can read here on Tomato. There are many more that I won't mention. This one is above average at the moment. At the beginning, I felt that the writing was quite ordinary, because for a story about being reborn as a child, I still felt alienated from the system. After all, even without the system, the male protagonist would be essentially overpowered, and the system would seem unnecessary. It gives people the feeling that the author does not know how to write and forced the system to advance in order to follow the plot. At the same time, the system naturally makes the male protagonist's motivation to help the female protagonist a little impure, which makes the shaping of the male protagonist worse. In the first subsequent incident, Lin Xiaoyue was bullied, and the final solution was to catch the person trying to stab her eyes with a pen. This was really weird. She didn't do much in her previous life, but she felt that she was more dangerous in this life, so I was still a little dissatisfied with what I saw earlier. The change occurred after other lines unfolded, especially Ye's line, which is currently written particularly well. Ye is a bit naive but also very clever. The emotional logic of the characters is complete and not labeled. And about twenty chapters up to now, without the need for the fast pace as in the early stage, the author's writing style is obviously much more comfortable. For example, inviting Su to create a fantasy world, following Ye Zou on the way home from school, Lin's star blanket, running away from home, and secret base, etc., All have a faint sense of warmth. Occasionally, there is a little bit of a kissing pig feeling, and you can feel that the author is better at daily life. If the follow-up system is very small according to what the author said, and it is a daily text, I think it will be a very good book, but I am not sure at what stage the tomato score is and what is considered good. In my opinion, the current score is a bit pity, I hope it will not be cut, so I wrote a review more seriously. My expressive ability is limited, I will say whatever comes to mind. I hope those who like this genre can read this book

Come on, the writing is quite heart-warming, but I wonder if the author can grasp the skeptical attitude of so many female hosts. I hope there will be a beginning and an end (too many novels on this subject die halfway) [Read carefully]

After watching it for five hours, it smelled so good [blowing kisses]. The first dozen chapters do have some flaws and shortcomings. The content after that became really interesting, the writing became obviously better, the emotional lines were advanced very delicately, and the characters of each heroine were distinct... The Xiluochang is beginning to take shape. All in all it's still worth seeing. (PS: I didn't plan to comment at first, but so few people have read this book that I'm really afraid it won't be updated one day.)

A good daily novel, good luck to the author! ! !

[Smiles] Not bad. With 4 star support