Online Game: Daozi Is Me, so Is the Demon Lord? !

The current progress is 120 chapters. It is one of the few online games that integrate reality themes that I can watch comfortably. This track is very difficult to write. There are many pitfalls in the world view, numerical values, and plot. It is really not easy to write this like it is now. It's a bit fun to cheat but not brainless, and it can also be interspersed with some worldly feelings. It doesn't say that the writing is perfect and it doesn't require it to be non-toxic. To this extent, it deserves a big five-star encouragement. It really feels like there are no more tomatoes. I feel like the plot is a bit too long, and it takes a little patience.

The background story is set very well, and Diudiu is touching. To sum up the four major endings of Novice Village, ending one: taking on the task of village chief and killing Nian Nian's father is one of the bad endings. Ending 2: Helping the village chief clear away the evidence of the Shark Man's murder, one of the bad endings. Ending 3: Find evidence to kill the village chief and make the evidence public, a good ending. Ending 4: Trigger the hidden plot of Nian Nian's father, defeat the village chief with him, and unlock the seed of Nian Nian's memory. The true ending [eat melon] I have to say that the author must be a high-end player.

Ever since I watched Foreign Persimmon, my mind has been filled with either the system or rebirth, time travel or traveling through books, security or cleaning, courier delivery or food delivery, richest man or trillions, eavesdropping or being overheard. I can't stop. The plot is very exciting and the content is very rich. It's a drama that every audience should watch. The visuals are so strong that I watched it with gusto and couldn't stop watching it. It's really addictive. The beautiful scenery is full of surprises and touches. Simply my new favorite.

I feel good about this book. I have written more than 400 chapters so far and I have read 300 chapters. The pace in the early stage is relatively slow, which is actually due to the slow upgrade. I feel that the plot is quite good and not too slow. It needs some foreshadowing and some details. This book is mainly about the plot, there are many characters, and the writing needs to be spread out, so the pace feels slow. Then I read the comments section and said that the protagonist entered a declining sect on the side of the road. The main plot is obviously on this sect. Except for the Qingyue Palace (I haven't seen a detailed description of Buddhism so far, it may be related to the protagonist's roommate), other top sects are like good people. The author's hint is quite obvious. I guess some of them are bad guys wearing a pair of pants. What's the use of the protagonist going in? Being used as an ox and a horse, brother. The protagonist's friends are not considered poisonous. They say they have dormitory roommates, but now their roommates treat the protagonist as their father. Are they poisonous? The heroines are also measured and do not get close to other people of the opposite sex. I have seen that there are almost no plots where the heroines have emotional interactions with other people of the opposite sex. In the secret realm, Su Hongling pretends to be a Tang Yin and takes advantage of Li Youde (it seems to be called this). There is also a yellow hair. I guess it is because the author felt that there were no other events in the story when he returned home. As for the guild, it is right not to add the protagonist, because after adding it, the plot of this book will originally be more and slower to upgrade. If you add a guild, you will have to take care of the guild after passing the main secret realm. The plot of the guild will unfold in a formula. After the protagonist has passed the secret realm, other guilds will come to cause trouble. Will the protagonist suppress other guilds in the past? It's not troublesome. When the time comes to write it, the pace will be slower. What's the point of writing it? Anyway, I think it's still worth reading at this point. Judging from the current progress, this book will definitely be long. The protagonist is still growing up, but the battle scenes feel a bit boring and don't reflect the protagonist's hang-up (it may also reflect it, but I don't feel comfortable enough).

There are basically no poisonous points. There are only three confirmed heroines in the latest chapter, the saint, the witch and the younger sister. However, I personally think that the plot of the "dungeon" should be reduced a bit. There are 50.60 Chapters written in a secret realm, which is a bit delayed. Overall, the writing is pretty good.

The setting and plot are classic, but the logic and rhythm are better than most of the same genre. The writing is quite satisfactory, and it also has its own unique worldview to attract readers. The protagonist has all the qualifications to win all the way, which is very satisfying. There is no deliberate pressure on combat power. There are statistics. The calculation of the damage multiplication zone is quite rigorous. The values ​​​​and skills are listed separately and explained, so that people will not be confused. It is good. However, there will be a vest at the back, which is a very classic hidden identity. Considering the plot, it is reasonable not to be too ostentatious during the development period, but when reading it, I always feel a sense of frustration in my heart, you understand... The vest is like this, but the speed of breaking the horse is quite fast, which does not affect the viewing experience. And the subject matter with multiple female protagonists will definitely involve Shura field. The author's emotional description is not detailed and a little unfamiliar. It can be seen that he is a newcomer and needs to improve. Also, judging from the current progress, the overall plot is slow to pick up. It is estimated that I can write another 1 million words. It is quite good, and there are still some shortcomings in the ability to read [face covering]. After 300 chapters, it is very dragging, and it is a bit boring to read. I will talk about it later, but why is the popularity of this book so low? Generally speaking, a lot of people will read interesting articles about online games like Tomato. Anyway, keep going, big brother who writes about the emperor's uncle [I also strongly recommend it]

The most enjoyable online game novel I have read so far. There are also some bad points, such as the roommate part, which is dispensable. The beginning of this book is not as good as the plot at the end, but it has potential. Come on, author.

In fact, it's not bad. It's pretty good-looking in every sense of the word. There's no rush to advance the plot, and the pace isn't too slow either. It's comfortable to watch. There is nothing bad about standard cool writing. Good-looking cool writing is good writing.

To be honest, the setting is actually pretty good, but the pace of the plot is slow, which is still acceptable. There are so few people watching it, so I estimate the rating will be around 8.5 To 8.9. If the pace of the plot picks up, it should be able to go up to 9.

This novel currently has 112,000 words, and there is no golden elixir or fusion yet. It is probably running towards 3 million words, but the daily updates are slow, so it is easy to collapse.

The author has an inexplicable love for bows? [Cover face] It's still the same old template, they are all singles, they all stay at the bottom, worship the most unpopular sect, follow the most down-to-earth style of play, and they are all hexagonal warriors. But it is in name only and has no performance.

As of Chapter 109, the younger sister has the most scenes and is already in the game. Fairy Zhengdao seems to be still alive in the background description for the time being. The witch has appeared, but the story line has not been launched yet. As a fusion streaming online game, it's generally okay.

It's close to a million words and can be read, but to be honest, this book is quite suitable for my taste. I don't think it suits my taste. I have read a lot of books with a score of 6-7, but they are quite suitable for my taste, but many people think it is poisonous.

It's a cool story that combines online games with cultivating immortality. Except for the occasional logical loophole, it's pretty good.

In fact, I was patiently reading this novel just now, looking at the character logic, plot foreshadowing, and setting loopholes, and then looking at the pacing, character motivations, and writing routines. From the beginning to the end, I tried hard to suppress my urge to complain, be polite and well-founded, and try to maintain a calm and objective book reviewer attitude. But at that moment, my brain shut down and I was frantically replaying various famous scenes in the book. There were outrageous scenes that were so outrageous, twists and turns that made people slap their thighs, and characters that were both annoying and funny. All these messy scenes were fighting in my mind. The mask of rationality that I had been holding on to was shattered into pieces, and the crying and laughing emotions that I had held back for a long time came rushing back. I could no longer pretend to be a cold reader. The persona of the book reviewer that I had worked so hard to maintain completely collapsed, and I couldn't hold on to any dignity. I will put aside the polite flattery, no beating around the bush, no vain filters, and talk about my true feelings after reading this book.

Personally I think it looks pretty good (just my personal opinion, no need to argue with me)

It's almost like a full-time swordsman, it looks great!

Author, if you only use the bow once it is close to the body and there is no distance between you, the effect of the bow is not very obvious. In other words, you can use the bow for defense while using the bow itself, and use the bow itself for melee combat to distance you. This can also well reflect the use of the bow for offense and defense.

The pace is similar to that of Sword Cultivator. It is estimated that I will have to write at least a thousand chapters, but the slow pace in Tomato can easily be supported by books.

It's a very good online game article. I haven't read it in a long time. It's very enjoyable. The male protagonist is decisive in killing and not the Holy Mother. He eats what he needs to eat [laughing] At present, it seems that the author has an outline. It's worth reading.

It's not bad. The plot, logic and clues are pretty good so far. Let's take a look at the follow-up development. I can only give it four stars at the moment.

The writing is really good. Although it is a bit toxic, the plot is very compact and the description is very good. It is much better than some high-scoring articles. That's why the rating is so low🤔🤔🤔 and there are very few comments. Good luck to the author! ! !

It's okay, just a little bland

So far it looks pretty good

Very nice online game article

Good, good, good

Good book, awesome

Not bad, but I can't tell who the heroine is

Nowadays, games are invading reality. It's so boring. Can't you just stop writing about netizens? Is there any good online game out there? Guys, give it a try.

There are many heroines, except for the younger sister. Have you eaten? I looked back, but I didn't seem to see it. When I know that "multiple female protagonists" is implemented, I will add that star [Chigua]