The Redemption of the Magic Circle Girl

I saw this novel from a recommendation a few days ago and read it to the latest chapter in one go. Because the long review I wrote was swallowed up by the screen of my mobile phone, I was so angry! So I will briefly evaluate it. In my opinion, Takahashi Nako and Sayaka Qingbai are a good point, and the process of her transformation into a magical girl is also a wonderful plot. Now I have to write about the conflict between Sayaka and Hitomi. It's a bit absurd that Asami and Homura Akatsuki started fighting among themselves while the snack witch was still fighting the protagonist, but that's not to say it's bad, it actually makes it better written this way. The plot where Kyoko left a seed of lament to Takahashi Nako made me feel very upset. The reconciliation process with Sayaka is also making people want to touch the tips of their ears. Madoka's tenderness and thoughtfulness are shown in her nonchalant attitude, while Xiaomi Homura's persistence and neurosis are simply too much like repeating the failed rescues many times. Although the content of Nako's contract is a bit hasty, it shows that ordinary people are also capable of saving the world. In my opinion, the protagonist thinks a little but not much. I thought she would set up a blackboard in a small apartment to analyze the balance between desires and available abilities to find the optimal solution. However, she also revealed a lot of the character's abilities and secrets (just kidding, the protagonist did her best). Speaking of which, it's a great feeling to have the protagonist's knowledge of the plot characters revealed. I hope the author will handle it well! Of course, I believe this is a matter of course. All in all, the protagonist's abilities are not very good, and it is difficult to develop later. I hope the author has some wonderful and unexpected ideas. I predict that the author may stop updating due to accidents. I hope the author can publish regularly and have manuscripts in reserve. Come on, author, don't stop updating or run away just because it's unpopular and no one is watching! I saw that you asked for a book review. I originally wanted to write it a few days ago, but I was afraid that you, the author, would interrupt it because of the irregular update time. However, it has been serialized for almost two months, so I was a little too lazy to write it. And now, it's time for the author to catch my gorgeous long review and be full of fighting spirit!

It's a very good work, you can watch it. I have read more than 80 chapters, and I will tell you my feelings. This book is not a system to save the world It is a kind of impact caused by introducing variables into a certain world. There is some deep thinking about life in the middle, but not much. Most of them use daily life as the basis and combat style as filler. It's at least as exciting as I feel it is. That's it. The overall rating is 3 to 4 stars. Full score 5 stars

Kyoko's part shocked me. If I were to think about it, I wouldn't have acted like that. I can only say it was too shocking. I thought Sakura Kyoko would help her. Some things still have to be done by yourself.

It's quite good-looking. The overall perspective is third-person (XX says XX thinks). The writing is already excellent. The characters don't look OOC. The logic is very clear and rigorous, with multiple perspectives and multiple positions [I understand]; the plot is that the protagonist travels to a new week before the Ring of Truth. It's a dark and straight story, so it's a little serious [thinking]; Possible highlights: *The protagonist is not trusted in the early stage, and his interactions with other characters are not smooth. *Contains some self-created characters from other cities, and in the later period, there is also a rumor about the Wings of Magis in Kamihama City (starting from Chapter 183, you can also check it out if you like it [cool])* There are protagonists and yuri content focusing on Sayaka and Kyoko (confession and cohabitation, mainly with Kyoko from the later stage, not sure how it will progress, whether it is true [laughing]); the content is mainly to show the personality of each character and the conflicts between them. , Especially Homura and Kyoko, if you are used to the kind of female ghost or cold-faced cute and tsundere in fan fiction or comics (although Kyoko will also show tsundere in the later period [eating melon]), then you may have to think carefully [currently working on the draft] After all, the characters are very realistic, and even It may even make you feel like quarreling and getting angry for a moment (raising the white flag and surrendering [petrification]). In short, it is a very good fanfic; to be honest, it is not OOC to see a character in such a mixed book and a cooler series on Tomato. The rigorous content is so touching that I almost cried. QAQ [almost crying] [crying] [almost crying] I hope the author can continue to update ([send heart] my thoughts to the author [send heart]) and I will try my best to continue to support [love] [send heart] [love]

It looks good. The story is written in the tone of the original work. The setting of the second creation is also as close to the original work as possible. However, the protagonist is really weak and can only draw the full force with tricks and has no hook at all. Moreover, he has only watched TV but is not a circle scholar. A lot of information has been misjudged. But later on, the second creation circle scholar may not be able to handle it. Kyubey in this book really gives people the same sense of oppression and powerlessness as in the original work.

Now that I have read Chapter 134, I can't help but comment. It's really beautiful, the thinking is very clear, and the writing is also very good. I don't know much about words of praise, so I can only say it's great [crazy] [like] The military commander is not good at words, he can only speak his mind [cry][like]

Four stars for Mo Yuan and one for the author, who is so brave to write. As for the rest... The plot, the plot is very powerful. It can be seen that there is a clear outline and a clear target ending, so I can ignore everything that is wrong and push forward on the baby bus. The characters, the characters also have the author's mysterious and clever ideas. Let's just talk about what we just saw (Tomoe Mami fights the snack witch). When Xiao Yan has broken away from Tomoe Mami's shackles and came to the battlefield, the protagonist can rush to save Tomoe Mami before time stops at super-light speed, although the protagonist's ability is not super-light speed. (If Akatsuki Homura didn't want to save people, then she shouldn't have struggled to break away. After Tomoe Mami died, she could easily come and fight the witch.) For another example, after the protagonist rescued Tomoe Mami, Akatsumi Homura and Tomoe Mami fought in the witch barrier, leaving the protagonist aside to undergo a life and death experience. (By the way, in the original work, Tomoe Mami, who knew the truth, tied up Homura Akatsuki and defeated Kyoko with one blow after the mermaid witch was dealt with.) I'm really curious about how the story will develop next. Although I guessed that the ending would either involve sacrificing the protagonist and everyone would be happy; or the protagonist would be sacrificed, in fact there was no sacrifice and everyone would be happy.

It's a very nice Madoka fanfic. Although I haven't read the original anime, and I don't know much about it [currently working on the manuscript], the story logic and character characteristics written by the author are quite clear, at least for a passerby like me who has never read the original work. [Sending heartfelt thanks] Although the traffic of the subject matter is not very high, I still clicked in from the recommendation on the homepage, and I caught up with the latest chapter in one go. Come on, author [please update] [sending heartfelt thanks]

Super invincible, awesome, highly recommended fanfic Let me start by saying that I have watched the heroine from the beginning to now, and I have witnessed the heroine change from being weak at the beginning to becoming stronger now. Indeed, because the five colors fit her character very well, the protagonist was very embarrassed and embarrassed at the beginning, but she did not flinch, but thought seriously. This is also This is what I like, so I am very interested in following up the review [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] Then I will take a look at my own opinions. The next part should be about the heroine who is similar to Kyoko. The heroine's identity was revealed to Kyoko, which should be in the chapters of Witch Night~ People still like Lily very much. I think Nako-chan and Kyoko will have a high chance of success. It depends on the author's arrangements for Shuangge. Senpai probably regards Nako as a friend. There is also a cute junior, Homura, who has been a companion since the combo skill was successful. Of course, another big reason should be that she saw her former self. She also doesn't give up. Madoka should be her best friend. (When I first read it, I was still very anxious when I saw the protagonist's situation, but I still had the patience to read to the end. It's very sweet. I can only sigh, this book is so beautiful!) Dear author, I will always follow you [Sending Hearts]

It's very beautiful, and I have to admit that the author is really good at writing.

I feel that Xiao Meiyan is too cold here and is more excited about what she does than in the original article! In the original article, Xiao Meiyan prefers to be a calm bystander and not kill people casually, but as a fan article, it is still very good! ! Such behavior can increase conflict and drama, so the author must keep writing! !

The writing skills are solid, the words and sentences are textured, and the scene descriptions and psychological descriptions are delicate and vivid. The writing style is of its own, with a strong sense of atmosphere, full of pictures, and very interesting to read (such as the two chapters updated today). I exhausted my brain and found a set of standard templates. I am a science major and a liberal arts major, which is almost normal, right? I really can't find any words to describe it. In short, look at the rating, five stars, right? The hope and despair are carried out, the characters' emotions are rich and full, and the depressing and delicate atmosphere runs through from beginning to end. In a word, it is absolutely amazing. . . Ps: I can't help but keep staring at the update reminder interface of this novel. I don't know what I am doing, as if it has some magic power.

A rare Magic Circle work, and the author is very good at handling and arranging the characters' motivations. The technique is delicate. But a little curious. How does the author arrange it? The fate of the protagonist. It is possible that the knife or all survived the ending.

The writing style is very good\^O^/ I have read a lot of Moyuan novels, but the author's writing style is really nothing to say, it is very beautiful\(//∇//)\Give me a five-star review (≧∇≦)

It's a very good book. The protagonist starts off as an ordinary person, and then chooses to sign a contract even though he knows the consequences. I think the hope in the middle of despair is very touching. Another reason is, point it out: Why don't you become a magical girl even though you have the qualifications? (This is a rhetorical question) This point made me understand how hypocritical I am when I traveled through time. Okay, I apologize for the inappropriate description. All in all, this is a very good Magic Circle fanfic.

There are only four stars, because if the rating is high, it will be reviewed. The writing feels more delicate, and I feel like I'm drinking sweet water. It's neither sweet nor greasy, and very delicious. The rhythm and sequence are very good, and the description of psychological activities feels very consistent with the characteristics of the characters.

It's a very nice novel. It fits the character of the original work very well and also adds my own innovation. I'm very much looking forward to the development of the story. I hope the author will update it soon. I didn't plan to start reading it so early, but I was worried that the author would stop updating and abandon the article. I read it anyway. Teacher, I must keep reading [I'm about to cry]

Come on author, I look forward to more friendships with Nako Gaucho. I look forward to Wu Se's happy ending and Xiao Meiyan opening up her heart to Wu Se. Finally, I hope Kyubey, the human-machine, can gain emotions and find a better way to prevent heat death! Five stars are given, I hope the author will persevere! Of course, the author should not put too much pressure on the story and conceive the plot well. I hope that the author's works can be seen by more people! ! !

It's so beautifully written in big letters, but I'm about to reach the finale, so don't stop updating [crying][crying][crying]

Very good, one of the best Puella Magi Madoka Magica fanfics in Tomato ദ്ദിᵔ.˛.ᵔ₎✧

As long as you have any special abilities, it won't be so strenuous🤣

I hope it will be he in the end. Watching Magic Circle TV animation and The Story of Rebellion has killed me.

Too little! Not enough! The author still has some in stock, right? Pour it all out! Oh my god? ! Is Nako retired this time, or is she really dead? The third season is over.

I'll go, it's very to my liking, that kind of despair... That kind of powerlessness... Come on, author!

It's good-looking and good-looking. Among the Moyuan fanfics, I think it's better-looking [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

I think this book can be ranked among the top among all the Magic Circle fanfics in Yang Persimmon. The author is particularly meticulous in characterization and combat description, and also uses a lot of self-created settings based on the original work to make this world view more complete. So far, I haven't seen any other Magic Circle fanfics that suit my taste except this one. All in all, worth a look (I heard that if the rating is too high, it will be suppressed by the review)

The author will update soon

Gu, I finished reading it. At first I felt that the main character was a bit clumsy, but from the back it looked okay. I have to wait for the update [laughs][laughs]

I really like this style

Better looking book