Puella Magi: A Girl’s Redemption

I saw this novel from a recommendation a few days ago and read it to the latest chapter in one go. Because the long review I wrote was swallowed up by the screen of my mobile phone, I was so angry! So I will briefly evaluate it. In my opinion, Takahashi Nako and Sayaka Qingbai are a good point, and the process of her transformation into a magical girl is also a wonderful plot. Now I have to write about the conflict between Sayaka and Hitomi. It's a bit absurd that Asami and Homura Akatsuki started fighting among themselves while the snack witch was still fighting the protagonist, but that's not to say it's bad, it actually makes it better written this way. The plot where Kyoko left a seed of lament to Takahashi Nako made me feel very upset. The reconciliation process with Sayaka is also making people want to touch the tips of their ears. Madoka's tenderness and thoughtfulness are shown in her nonchalant attitude, while Xiaomi Homura's persistence and neurosis are simply too much like repeating the failed rescues many times. Although the content of Nako's contract is a bit hasty, it shows that ordinary people are also capable of saving the world. In my opinion, the protagonist thinks a little but not much. I thought she would set up a blackboard in a small apartment to analyze the balance between desires and available abilities to find the optimal solution. However, she also revealed a lot of the character's abilities and secrets (just kidding, the protagonist did her best). Speaking of which, it's a great feeling to have the protagonist's knowledge of the plot characters revealed. I hope the author will handle it well! Of course, I believe this is a matter of course. All in all, the protagonist's abilities are not very good, and it is difficult to develop later. I hope the author has some wonderful and unexpected ideas. I predict that the author may stop updating due to accidents. I hope the author can publish regularly and have manuscripts in reserve. Come on, author, don't stop updating or run away just because it's unpopular and no one is watching! I saw that you asked for a book review. I originally wanted to write it a few days ago, but I was afraid that you, the author, would interrupt it because of the irregular update time. However, it has been serialized for almost two months, so I was a little too lazy to write it. And now, it's time for the author to catch my gorgeous long review and be full of fighting spirit!

It's a very good work, you can watch it. I have read more than 80 chapters, and I will tell you my feelings. This book is not a system to save the world It is a kind of impact caused by introducing variables into a certain world. There is some deep thinking about life in the middle, but not much. Most of them use daily life as the basis and combat style as filler. It's at least as exciting as I feel it is. That's it. The overall rating is 3 to 4 stars. Full score 5 stars

It's quite good-looking. The overall perspective is third-person (XX says XX thinks). The writing is already excellent. The characters don't look OOC. The logic is very clear and rigorous, with multiple perspectives and multiple positions [I understand]; the plot is that the protagonist travels to a new week before the Ring of Truth. It's a dark and straight story, so it's a little serious 🤔; Possible highlights: *The protagonist is not trusted in the early stage, and his interactions with other characters are not smooth. *Contains some self-created characters from other cities, and in the later period, there is also a rumor about the Wings of Magis in Kamihama City (starting from Chapter 183, you can also check it out if you like it 😎)* There are protagonists and yuri content focusing on Sayaka and Kyoko (confession and cohabitation, mainly with Kyoko from the later stage, not sure how it will progress, whether it is true [laughing]); the content is mainly to show the personality of each character and the conflicts between them. , Especially Homura and Kyoko, if you are used to the kind of female ghost or cold-faced cute and tsundere in fan fiction or comics (although Kyoko will also show tsundere in the later period 🍉), then you may have to think carefully [currently working on the draft] After all, the characters are very realistic, and even It may even make you feel like quarreling and getting angry for a moment (raising the white flag and surrendering [petrification]). In short, it is a very good fanfic; to be honest, it is not OOC to see a character in such a mixed book and a cooler series on Tomato. The rigorous content is so touching that I almost cried. QAQ 🥺 😢 🥺 I hope the author can continue to update (💕 my thoughts to the author 💕) and I will try my best to continue to support ❤️ 💕 ❤️

Kyoko's part shocked me. If I were to think about it, I wouldn't have acted like that. I can only say it was too shocking. I thought Sakura Kyoko would help her. Some things still have to be done by yourself.

Now that I have read Chapter 134, I can't help but comment. It's really beautiful, the thinking is very clear, and the writing is also very good. I don't know much about words of praise, so I can only say it's great 😫 👍 The military commander is not good at words, he can only speak his mind 😢👍

It looks good. The story is written in the tone of the original work. The setting of the second creation is also as close to the original work as possible. However, the protagonist is really weak and can only draw the full force with tricks and has no hook at all. Moreover, he has only watched TV but is not a circle scholar. A lot of information has been misjudged. But later on, the second creation circle scholar may not be able to handle it. Kyubey in this book really gives people the same sense of oppression and powerlessness as in the original work.

Super invincible, awesome, highly recommended fanfic Let me start by saying that I have watched the heroine from the beginning to now, and I have witnessed the heroine change from being weak at the beginning to becoming stronger now. Indeed, because the five colors fit her character very well, the protagonist was very embarrassed and embarrassed at the beginning, but she did not flinch, but thought seriously. This is also This is what I like, so I am very interested in following up the review [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] Then I will take a look at my own opinions. The next part should be about the heroine who is similar to Kyoko. The heroine's identity was revealed to Kyoko, which should be in the chapters of Witch Night~ People still like Lily very much. I think Nako-chan and Kyoko will have a high chance of success. It depends on the author's arrangements for Shuangge. Senpai probably regards Nako as a friend. There is also a cute junior, Homura, who has been a companion since the combo skill was successful. Of course, another big reason should be that she saw her former self. She also doesn't give up. Madoka should be her best friend. (When I first read it, I was still very anxious when I saw the protagonist's situation, but I still had the patience to read to the end. It's very sweet. I can only sigh, this book is so beautiful!) Dear author, I will always follow you 💕

Four stars for Mo Yuan and one for the author, who is so brave to write. As for the rest... The plot, the plot is very powerful. It can be seen that there is a clear outline and a clear target ending, so I can ignore everything that is wrong and push forward on the baby bus. The characters, the characters also have the author's mysterious and clever ideas. Let's just talk about what we just saw (Tomoe Mami fights the snack witch). When Xiao Yan has broken away from Tomoe Mami's shackles and came to the battlefield, the protagonist can rush to save Tomoe Mami before time stops at super-light speed, although the protagonist's ability is not super-light speed. (If Akatsuki Homura didn't want to save people, then she shouldn't have struggled to break away. After Tomoe Mami died, she could easily come and fight the witch.) For another example, after the protagonist rescued Tomoe Mami, Akatsumi Homura and Tomoe Mami fought in the witch barrier, leaving the protagonist aside to undergo a life and death experience. (By the way, in the original work, Tomoe Mami, who knew the truth, tied up Homura Akatsuki and defeated Kyoko with one blow after the mermaid witch was dealt with.) I'm really curious about how the story will develop next. Although I guessed that the ending would either involve sacrificing the protagonist and everyone would be happy; or the protagonist would be sacrificed, in fact there was no sacrifice and everyone would be happy.

It's a very nice Madoka fanfic. Although I haven't read the original anime, and I don't know much about it [currently working on the manuscript], the story logic and character characteristics written by the author are quite clear, at least for a passerby like me who has never read the original work. [Sending heartfelt thanks] Although the traffic of the subject matter is not very high, I still clicked in from the recommendation on the homepage, and I caught up with the latest chapter in one go. Come on, author [please update] [sending heartfelt thanks]

Let me state in advance that I have not read this book, but the comments have been swallowed, so I will rate it so that the author can see it. Many people are complaining about a setting in the book, saying that the number of Kyubeys is infinite. I haven't read the original book for so long that I have forgotten whether this setting was explicitly mentioned. I only remember that it said that the number of Kyubeys is spread throughout the universe, but the side story clearly stated that the number of Kyubeys is not infinite. Originally, I wanted to post a picture, but the picture will be swallowed. The specific content is in Crimson Decision 27, Kyubey himself said it