After Dressing up as a Jade Rat Spirit, I Became Nezha's Younger Sister

It looks good. I hope the heroine can be written more powerfully. She always shows off her beauty. She is very beautiful. "Mrs. Diyong" She is known as the Half-cut Guanyin, the most beautiful woman in Journey to the West. She is entrenched in the bottomless cave of Xingkong Mountain. The cave is huge and contains the sun, moon and mountains and rivers, just like a paradise. Most of her subordinates are female demons with beautiful faces and dignified postures. They are good at two-pronged swords and have strong martial arts. They have fought against Sun Wukong many times without losing. She is agile and good at the "Left Shoe Strategy" and teleportation. She has money, power, team and martial arts."

It's pretty good-looking, there aren't any glitches so far, and it's smooth to watch without any glitches. Moreover, the heroine has not had much contact with Nezha so far, and the way of getting along is very natural and not abrupt. I also get along very well with Brother Monkey, and they have normal academic and artistic exchanges without being ridiculous.

The character design and starting point are good-looking, but I can't say that there are no problems in other aspects. When it comes to Nezha, it is inexplicably easy to go astray. It is a bit strange to repeat it. The great sage teaches him spells and he is not shy, and the great sage points out his mistakes.

It's a new novel, but the relationship between the male and female protagonists progresses step by step. It makes me excited and makes people excited to read it. There's no love at first sight or nymphomaniacs, it's a relationship that slowly develops bit by bit, and the two of them get along so sweetly! ! ! The emotions are also delicate, and the heroine gradually becomes stronger through the guidance of the Great Sage and Nezha.

It's so beautiful, I like it so much, I'm addicted to watching it, it's gone. The third prince especially loves Shubao. Shubao is a hard-working, lively, cute, kind and upright boy. He likes it very much. The great sage also has a very good relationship with Shubao. They are a group favorite.

It's very interesting. The interaction between the heroine and Nezha is very sweet. Nezha's description is very handsome and unruly. The eighty-one difficulties of learning are also very interesting. He blends in harmoniously and doesn't feel abrupt. Occasionally, he feels that the heroine's brain is short-circuited.

So far, it's very good to read. It doesn't have the common faults of many fans. It reads smoothly and there are no weird or unnecessary plots. The plot and characters are good, the heroine is very cute and motivated, and Nezha is a tsundere. Come on, author, keep updating [Like]

Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sweet, Nezha's youthfulness and confidence are amazing, and the Great Sage is so good too [Sending my heart] The most adorable Shushu is also super awesome [Blowing kisses]

It's really good to watch, it's a steady stream of changes, and the emotions are deepening bit by bit, rather than a cliche plot like love at first sight. The third prince also doted on Bai Yeying (the heroine, a golden-nosed white-haired jade rat spirit) about 50 chapters in, and they had an inexplicable relationship (like an ambiguity). Although they are not really together yet, the third prince also dotes on her very much. Especially the third prince, who repeatedly "passed by" and "successfully" saved her. It's too embarrassing to use the phrase "I don't want to waste my energy". Of course, the heroine also has a very good image. She is the kind of person who punishes evil and promotes good, a little cunning and a little unwilling to admit defeat. Sometimes she looks cute and well-behaved. This kind of image should be the reason why she can attract the third prince.

Holy shit, it's really good-looking. There's such a smooth flow of emotions. Oh my, that little ambiguous feeling is so good. The heroine is also very good. She keeps working hard to become stronger. I'm so sweet. The contact between the two of them is like a little hook. Both sides have affection for each other, and the character creation of Nezha is also very good. Oh my god, just reading the text, I can imagine Nezha's arrogance and arrogance. Later, he will always be arrogant towards the heroine and occasionally reveal himself. It's so sweet.

There is a creature called a novel 😍 It is really difficult to deal with 😰 There are too many routines in the novel genre that you can't control 🤭 His updated look is cool 😲 He is funny and has an attitude 🤩 Make you fall in love 🥰 Make you scratch your head 😢 Then you can't stop it! A novel. You are so charming that you dare to post it after filming it like this. Are you not afraid that I will spin 380,000 degrees on one knee, hold flowers in my hands, and hold a rose in my mouth to directly propose? Marry me. (Although this sentence is only two short words, it reveals a hint of coldness and insouciance, which complements my bohemian figure. The polite and distant period at the end appropriately shows my noble and elegant temperament. Handsome guy, you are as bright as a jade tree. You are as beautiful as a jade tree. You are as beautiful as a jade tree. You are as gentle as a jade. My mood is in a prosperous age. You rely on your beauty to commit crimes. You are a textbook-level beauty.) "Even if I can't meet you, I am very lucky because I can meet you when I am young and wanton." 𝒀𝒐𝒖𝒓 𝒔𝒕𝒂𝒓𝒍 𝒊𝒈𝒉𝒕𝒈𝒆𝒏 𝒕𝒍𝒆 𝒇𝒂𝒍𝒍 𝒇 𝒂𝒖𝒕𝒖𝒎𝒏 "I start with romance and continue to write about your long journey." "𝑰 𝒃𝒆𝒈𝒊𝒏 𝒘𝒊𝒕𝒉 𝒓𝒐𝒎𝒂𝒏𝒄𝒆 𝒂𝒏𝒅 𝒄𝒐𝒏𝒕𝒊𝒏𝒖𝒆 𝒚𝒐𝒖𝒓 𝒍𝒐𝒏𝒈 𝒋𝒐𝒖𝒓𝒏𝒆 "There is only one sexual orientation in the world and that is where the heart is"

It's so sweet, I love it so much. This is my second time reading a Journey to the West fanfic (I've seen the heroine dressed as Goku's mother before, giving Kong Kong a lot of motherly love). This time the heroine also gave Nezha happiness. I really love the fluffy heroine, she's cute and bold.

The overall content is quite broad. The heroine's progression from weak to strong is considered the basis of time travel. After all, he is not the original owner. But Mrs. Diyong is also very beautiful. You can't always describe it plainly. Not strong but still handsome? Our heroine does nothing but work hard? Do young people's skills focus entirely on hard work? Mainly focus on maxing out skill points through hard work? The emotional line is also a bit strange, a bit unnatural, that is, when seeing the male protagonist, his mind will change slightly, or he will blush, or he will be nervous, or he will suddenly ask people why you are here or why do you care about me. Kindness. . . Didn't you call me brother at first? It's a very sudden emotional line. When I didn't make it clear at the beginning, I actually put the other person on the line of love instead of family affection. How can you be sure that the other person doesn't treat you as his sister? Although it's ambiguous, I can't stand it (of course this is my personal reason). The pulling is not too extreme, it just feels like I want to write about pulling and ambiguity and let it take its own course. But it feels a bit like the male protagonist is hanging on to the female protagonist's random thoughts. Of course, the later stage is still pretty good, but I think the ambiguous line in the early stage may not have reached my point. It's the feeling of a little girl falling in love with a boy because he's nice to you (unexpressed feelings) (from the perspective of a bystander. If this was my love-minded bestie, I would definitely wake her up!!!) Of course, the male protagonist is pretty good. After all, he still wasn't very clear about his own feelings at first. He is inexplicably kind to the heroine. Being ambiguous yet honest. But at the beginning of the ambiguous period, the words were ambiguous and made the heroine think wildly (continued from the above) After all, it is a female video story~ (Author, it would be good for the heroine to have more psychological activities. After all, Mu Qiang or handsome guy, especially Meng Nu, would be good in a story. But the heroine is very strong. Although I like it (I also like (⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)) But don't be shy or feel embarrassed all the time. After all, our heroine's baby is also a great baby. There is no need to feel that you are not good enough because of the comments of people you like or may like.) Also, when the baby heroine sees the Monkey King, she is less likely to think wildly or blush. Maybe it's because we didn't meet him often at first. (It may also be that the student will not fall in love with the teacher) All in all, the writing is pretty good. The above are my personal feelings. (Sorry for the nonsense (⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)) The author also worked very hard to publish the article~٩( 'ω' )و Please work hard It's very interesting in the later stages~ The relationship between the two of them is a little clear and the feeling becomes smooth and flowing after entering the ambiguous period~ The writing is still very touching~ Like it

Why is it so beautiful? Author, let me ask you why you are so beautiful? Why is it so beautiful? ! ! ! ... It's all your fault for delaying me from going to work tomorrow, what should I do? Woohoo, why are you so beautiful? It's great, it's great. The growth of the heroine is also very good. Nezha is also very good. The Great Sage is even better. When I see the Great Sage, especially when I see him being crushed under the mountain, I always want to cry. That's our childhood idol, the Monkey King, woo woo.

The image of Nezha is very realistic, and the interaction with the heroine is also very interesting. After the story of "The Journey to the West" started, the story of "The Journey to the West" was changed a lot, and basically only the names of the characters were relevant. However, it is still very good to read as a sweet novel with the theme of "Journey to the West".

The female protagonist has a lively and flexible personality, with a tough and strong side, but also a delicate and gentle emotional level. The male protagonist is always firmly protective. There is no suspicion or hesitation between the two, and the whole work is permeated with pure and sweet love.

This is the best one among all the Nezha stories I have read. The character descriptions of the heroine and Nezha and the process of the two people getting to know each other and falling in love are very detailed. I think it is very consistent with the image of Nezha in my imagination. After the first short period of daily life, the love story is sweet and really good.

Come on, author. It's the first time I've read this type of writing. It's pretty good. The heroine can just watch and try not to change the plot. Especially when I saw the part about Golden Horn King and Silver Horn King, it's quite interesting when it's dark and it's dawn. In fact, some disasters are not dangerous, they're just fun. You can try not to change them. Simple suggestions. Come on, author.

It's beautiful, it's super beautiful, it's great, both books are great! But I suddenly discovered a very serious problem. I read two books at the same time, and they were of the same type. I was a little confused [smile], what should I do [cry]

The emotional atmosphere of this novel is truly amazing! There is no force or force, getting along very naturally, it's all about the pulling and heartbeat hidden in the details. This kind of atmosphere with long flowing water and surging undercurrent really makes the throbbing very emotional. Praise, great praise!

This is really good to read. I don't really like this kind of writing, but since I'm really short on books, I just wanted to read it casually and quit if it doesn't work. After looking at the results, it smells really good and looks good. The whole text is quite interesting. I recommend watching it.

It's very interesting to write, super nice. Like, like, like [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] 👍🏻

So sweet, so sweet. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is flowing smoothly, and the female protagonist slowly grows up. The Great Sage is also super cute. One star is mainly deducted from two points. First, the journey to the west is about ninety-nine and eighty-one calamities. I don't know whether the author deliberately did not complete it or didn't want to write it. The daughter country of Xiliang is missing. The Zimu River eats melons with a rattling sound, as well as the Xingxian and Bhikkhu Kingdom. Wuzhuang observes these. The second extra chapter has written about the newly released movie Nezha: The Devil Boy. There are a thousand Hamlets in the hearts of a thousand people. It's like the author and the reader have different opinions. There are even many versions of the myths, legends and stories of Nezha. I don't know if it's my imagination. I feel that there is a dark feeling in this extra chapter. All in all, a sweet romance novel that is really delicious.

A little short, a little sweet. It looks good, but a little short. The plot is okay, but a bit short. Also, the author did not go to the temple to throw the Holy Grail when he wrote the romance novel about Marshal Zhongtan. Don't be too imaginative, lest you get struck by lightning when imagining some exciting pictures.

I like the article very much. The characters are well created. Most of them are about the journey to the west. The emotions are developed through the story. The connection is slightly flawed, but the flaws are not concealed. The extra chapter is very interesting, heartwarming and interesting.

It looks good. I think the biggest feeling for me is that they get along very naturally and smoothly. There is no love at first sight like what I usually see. Also, although there are not many intimate scenes between them, I can feel the strong affection between them. The overflowing affection and sweetness. There is a lot of love hidden in the ordinary relationship.

Nice! The heroine is a growth-hardworking heroine. At first, I thought the heroine was too weak, but she grew up step by step and it was very interesting and logical. The most important thing is that the male protagonist teaches you step by step, which makes it even better. This CP is so cute and sweet [laughing]

I had already read them all ヽ(✿ﾟ▽ﾟ)ノ Only then did I realize that the other Great Sage was actually written by the teacher! ! ! ! Oh my god, the two books I often read are both written by teachers! ! ! (Excitement, dark and twisted crawling, howling) This is currently the only book I have read in its entirety without skipping chapters (⸝⸝•‧̫•⸝⸝) Highly recommended! ! This book is really good The following extras are really good. Ye Ying appeared at the time when Nezha was stripping off his flesh and repaying his mother and shaving his bones to repay his father. She was really like a little sun, preventing the rest of the plot from happening. In short, I think Ye Ying's emotional and career lines are very good! Recommended

It's so good-looking, so good-looking, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I've seen it a few times before but didn't click in. Today I couldn't stop watching it as soon as I went in. It's the same. Be sure to update on time every day without interruption.

It's good-looking, the emotional line is developed very delicately, and the heroine grows up step by step (in terms of strength and mentality)